ISHRA SS - Divinity in disguise (Last Chapter - Pg 94)) - Page 67

First of all, super sorry for the super late reply ! 😳😳😳 DImaag slow hai, jaldi jaldi kaam nahi karta... nevertheless, here you go...

I'm actually tired of telling you this Ms. Aruna that you are one such person, who is super good with your words, sentence formations and revealing emotions of each and every character of a story (especially this one, yes I know, I am biased.😛😛.. but you really can't blame me 😃) through simple, subtle yet super duper powerful/effective words. I'm tired not because of sitting and typing this out, since it is totally out of my wish, but because EVRYTIME, WHENEVER I come up with my views, I'm at a loss of words, no matter what 😕😭... thus making a fool out of myself every time I comment 😭!!! Feels bad you know... actually you wont know, so just chuck it!

Coming to Divinity In Disguise ! (👏 and ⭐️ )*infinity !

This has been one of my favouriteee works ! Trust me and Why is that ??
Well, that is firstly because of the title ... I started reading this SS when it had reached its 5th chapter. Your way of expressing feelings was one thing I loved and I still do !
The way you've portrayed each and every character, is just amazing !!!! And you've done justice to all the characters, throughout... (not to forget the mention of Simmi and Ananya ..😆😆 It all started from there) ! Also, you've always made it a point to be as realistic as possible ! And in this story of yours, every emotion, response etc., has been sooo realistic... This realism in your story made me fall in love with Divinity in Disguise ! You've always known how to start and how and where to end it... I've always loved the way you end each chapter. For me, this story has never been over the top anywhere 👏 Realistic, crisp and subtle ! And every person loves to read a work which has there 3 qualities.😊

You've always paid attention to the intricacies of the subject which was one of the most wonderful aspect of this story ! Drama is a MUST ... but the way you put it down on a piece of paper matters a LOT ! Yove done a lovely job !! 👏

Starting from Ishita's and Ruhi's (our budding Jhansi ki Rani ... Yup you had mentioned that, chapter 4 or 5, I guess) insecurities, you made it a point to actually bring in the 'actual' insecurities a wife would face if she were in such a situation.. though the situation was taken into consideration from the soap ( which I didn't quite agree to, I'm sure many of them didn't ) the way you explicated those insecurities .. through mere words and expressions... fabulous it was ! 👏👏 Not everybody can do that, trust me ! You made it a point to keep in minced the age when explicating of their insecurities ! Way too good ! 👏
May it be Ishita's insecurities or Raman's over protectiveness and thus questioning her motherly instincts/ feelings , you've always expressed it in a realistic and stupendous manner ! Many a time you've wonderfully put a complicated or even simple feeling/ expression in a single line, that made me fall head over heels in love with your writing skills ! This has one of the BEST qualities of your writing ! Also, when you've described a situation or something, it has always had a deeper meaning than just the superficial one ! Again, something I've fell in love with all throughput these 17 chapters ! You've been astute enough throughout ! You know exactly what you and us, the readers want ! ⭐️👏👏 The you've given an identity to Raman, RUhi, Ishita, Adi, Shagun, Simmi, 😆 etc. etc., has been great and interesting! The way you've moulded the characters... let me come up with a new word.. give me some time ! 😳 All the characters have been described wonderfully, in their own ways ! You've aptly selected the words and this story of yours has ever been a 'no nonsense' one. Hypothetical situation may be, but realistic portrayal ! 👏 And thats another thing I've always loved 😃

Truth is a bitter pill to swallow but this one is a sweet one'- 👏👏👏 (in short, no words ) 😡

example of a one line explication of a thought/feeling/situation ! Depth 👏⭐️
Last chapter ka last para ... you just nailed it ! Trust me when I say that !! 👏 Amazing !

On the whole Ms. Aruna, it has been a sheer bliss reading this SS.
Seldom there has been an update wherein while reading I haven't smiled or enjoyed or dissected... Your 'not proofread' wasn't required most of the times I guess 😛😉

KUDOS to you lady !
LOveeellyy lovely work of yours 😊
No matter what, none of your works can beat this one... at least aaj tai toh nahi😳😳😳 I know I'm being a biased bitch ! But it's ok ! 😉
Always had fun reading and dissecting it ! 😃 Super fun !
Thanks a TON for this !
You've done a wonderful job.. and my vocabulary is way took poor to describe it !😭
Thank you is the only word I could come up with as of now 😆

Thanks a lot !

PS: As promised, I posted it here 😊 See.. I'm a very good girl !
Zyaada lamba nahi hai... consolidated report diya hai isle... 😛 plus aadha bhool bhi gayi ... and ek point ko 1000 baar mention kiya hoga .. toh thoda adjust kar lena ...

PPS: I might have missed LOADS of points (I'm damn sure of it) which I would've wanted to mention.. Sorry about that.. yaad aaya toh bata doongi😛

PPPS: NOT PROOFREAD 😃

Loads of Love
Take Care

Vidya 😊