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yashasvi barfa

@.Yashu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

i realy liked how u connect kiyaa scene with reality
i liked all ur HE SHE aur THEY 😛

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virgo_gurl

@virgo_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

This one has to be the BEST one so far columbia 👍🏼 I had this HUGE smile plastered on my face while reading this 😃I can't even explain the happiness and anticipation of reading a piece after a gap of few days. I was checking the forum thrice a day just to make sure I haven't missed one.

you have got us addicted girl! 😛

So glad to see u back. Keep writing :)

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Thee you go, making me uncomfortable again. And that's a huge compliment to you. Well done 👏 👏 👏

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bluetaurean

@bluetaurean

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Oh god!!! Columbia..how do you manage to keep a smile on our faces every single time.shortest one, but the most beautiful one. The feelings tht she dsnt want him to know, the feelings tht he wants her to know.trust me you should be a script writer.😳 a biggg huggg to u.keep writing always.and once again thank u for the pm

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Maria

@-MariaMars-

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

awww... Freaking awesome.. Keep writing

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Ohhh Lord!!! C...
I am so dead right now!
This one was so short yet so intriguing..
I love how you took the onscreen moments and turned them around into their moments.. SIGH!!! The part where she says about his " Kiyya " and he says " Aur tum " I swear..you had me dead right there! I can so imagine that scene offscreen and DAMN... :D :D :D :D :D :D ==>> THE GRIN!!! 😳

You are simply magical C..god knows how you do this so effortlessly! Can't thank you enough! 🤗 Another beautiful one undoubtedly, hats off! 👏⭐️

Edited by -IshRaDivAn- - 10 years ago

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NaV

@SIKinLoVE

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Shoot it!! Hell yes! its the glow and blush she had on her face and the grin he had on his that made our hearts all warm through out that long weekend.. followed by monday, when they didn't air the scene.. 🤔 till it actually aired and we're STILL not over it...

after i read the tears & blanket scene.. i thought wait, what... i know what you're talking about but i haven't seen it. i need to see it... though i had the perfect image in my head (cuz i had seen the stills somewhere 😕) so i paused the reading... cuz i needed to go see the on location video 😆😆 priorities!! after some 10 pages later... i found it! and i watched and i smiled.. though it was one hell of a sad scene... but i smiled nevertheless cuz of your writing! as that's what was in my mind as i was watching but on another level, the one where im following IshRa's story.. it made me sad.. 🥺

then i came back to continue the reading and if i may say so..such a 'short' story this time (if you could write a thesis on this, i'd be SO happy!!)... so i read on... and the images from the scene came to mind (the infamous 'kya') and the grinning continued... just perfect..❤️ its so imaginable... that's what makes it so amazing... such a small scene (with a power packed performance by the duo) but just that one line said by him... led to so much beauty that even the director didn't care for the lights... he just wanted it captured.. so Action!!!...

aww man... now there's two ways to look at this scene... the one we saw on TV and then this 'funfiction'... love them both... that was so beautifully written... this little dose of happiness (the grinning and smiling) is so worth it.. 😳

though it was one of the shortest funfictions you have written... there was really nothing left to be said... it was just perfect!!! 👏👏 keep 'em coming 😉

Edited by Mrs. SIR - 10 years ago

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

C I just read through all your fun fiction posts ...quite an imaginative mind and great writing skills you got there... I had to keep on reminding myself this is a fiction ... As some situations are like a follow up of real happenings,.. The lines get blurred sometimes .. Our minds play a trick ... And I had to again remind myself... Fiction v reality

Great writing !👏👏

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Krutika

@loveyhmnew

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Hi Magician 😆

You know what happiness is??

#Happiness# is seeing a PM from #Magician# stating #New DivAn shots#

You deserve a bone crush hug 🤗

I just want some one to share that tear blanket wala OLV so that even I can imagine much more 😉

Please some one

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Sacchi boldoon?

Kya?

Hum sab mar gayein ;)

Loved it C!

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