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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: columbia


RPF is real person fiction BUT I hate calling my stories that so I call them FUN fiction 😊
Gan, this one is not the best one - am a little rusty since I hav been Missing from the forum for one week 😊 Hopefully the next one is better but something little to get me back in motion 😃


Just noticed you've an index... Let me go and read them ... And I'm so glad that you do point it out that this is indeed Fiction 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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C! I dont know if this is rpf, ff etc.. but it is certainly drool fiction for me..
I just drool while reading it☺️
You put the 'kya' word and my heart fluttered again at it and at her 'perfect glow'☺️
This was short and sensational❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Yaar. Nisha your comment is longer than my Ficlet
Feel like a fraud
Hugz 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
And she is back with bang 😃. Lovely comeback I must say.
Dammit did u have to use Kya .. sigh.

I had tried to convince myself that am finally over it but alas who am I kidding. Guess gotta go and see it one more time. 😳

Great work.

Cheers
Bhanu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Good grief!

This one is the shortest but your best one yet...
HOW do you do it. In fact I got a chuckle out of the "kuch photos kuch selfies" comment of Ishita.
I was going to say something about it on my Daily Beat, but completely forgot😭

I DONT know where their self deprecating humor comes from... Raman rubs off on KP and DT, or KP rubs off on Raman and Ishita... errrmm... you get my point..😉

The ball has been in the air for quite sometime...
It floats one way and then gets tossed back before it floats another.

Your writing is the greatest tonic for some like me...I know its a fairy tale... I realize there is more fiction than fact. But the embellishment of fiction around the fact...The perfectly believable, untarnished situations are magical

He might have very well ASKED her "Aur tum?"😳 after the "Tumhaare Kya par sabhi fans marne waale hain".
"To kya kahu?" from him sounds just AS gloriously sexy as any other scripted line he mouths.
When he lowers his already gravelly sexy voice it becomes a toxic combination😳😉


He probably talks in that tone to her even when the camera is turned off.
With him you GET what you SEE. Bold, sexy and unpretentious😳
Since he doesnt seem very excited to see the 10s of cameras and microphones on his face during shoot ALL the time...😳



Your writing is small bits of ballet work perfectly engineered to fit into a (Chinese😉) mass produced Desi soap.👏👏👏



P.S. Its like you KNOW him and her C
You are a production crew member in disguise aren't you?😃




Luvz your PS comment 😆

How come you did not catch the Sachi boldu vs Pakka boldu??! I missed all the discussions on the forum but was hoping you guys would have - if you see the scene carefully before the 1st interruption he says Sachi boldu? Before the second interruption (mihir) he says Pakka boldu?

Oh we must be taking those little bits na of all the rubbing off between KP DT Ishra and building them into a symphony world that we dance in

Thanks as always for your love and supportive nature
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Dil garden garden ho gaya...C welcome back...missed YOUR HE and SHE..thank u for the lovely story..i relived thst scene again 😳


Missed being here too 😊
Thx for all the luv
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sobha

She says tumhare kiyya pe sabhi fans Marne wali hai

He stares at her and says Aur tum?

Perfect line... gave me Goosebumps 😆 😆


Thx 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Liashna

Such a short one but you have no idea of the impact.

"Light ko goli maaro, she has the perfect glow" ☺️

Love it Columbia ... and I am smiling and blushing like cuckoo right now 😆


Thank you for the kind words 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go

Res !

Columbia U are such an inspiration to write this stuff !

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You just make me love them more and more ☺️☺️☺️

Brilliant


Awww thx so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: swathibalan

C! I dont know if this is rpf, ff etc.. but it is certainly drool fiction for me..

I just drool while reading it☺️
You put the 'kya' word and my heart fluttered again at it and at her 'perfect glow'☺️
This was short and sensational❤️


You r right it does not matter what it's called if it makes you happy that's all that matters na
😊

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