SHE does not want him to know

She does not want him to know that she looks for him the first thing she arrives at the shoot so she clicks photos and selfies with everyone and their mother as soon as she gets a chance. But in the end she cannot help but state her promise- kuch photos kuch selfies aur phir main aa jaungi.

She does not want him to know that she admires his skills a lot so she often shakes her head during rehearsals and repeats her lines when he ad libs. But in the end she cannot help but hold his hand under the blanket when his tears flow nonstop in the scene.

She does not want him to know he affects her so she stares at him unaffected when he mouths his famous "kiyaa" in the scene. But in the end, when the director suddenly yells cut!

Arrey woh lighting off hai

She says tumhare kiyya pe sabhi fans Marne wali hai

He stares at her and says Aur tum?

She stares back affected.

And the director yells light ko maaro goli, she has the perfect glow. Shoot it!

She does not want him to know he has stopped her heartbeat for several seconds when he says Sachi boldu? in the scene. But in the end, her heart does stop and they stare at each other

Can I say it to the mirror? He asks

The director says - Sure, take it from the top, lights..

Second scene mei, 'sachi' mat Kehna,

Toh kya kahu

Kuch aur

Theek hai

Pakka?

Pakka.

She does not want him to know. He does not know her want. The ball stays in the air!

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Colu dear😃😃..Youre back with another magical piece of writing😃🤗..As always, it was beautiful and subtle😳⭐️..Best part about your writing is that the simplest of lines leave a lingering effect on me as I read deep into the lines..☺️❤️

Haaayeee..this moment was so beautiful😳..Wish time could stand still right here right now at this very moment..☺️

light ko maaro goli, she has the perfect glow. Shoot it! - This line stole the scene yaar😳☺️..Epic.👍🏼.Very well expresses the emotions gushing in her mind..😳☺️

That last line😲..what a clincher to express his and her state of mind😃.. "She does not want him to know. He does not know her want. The ball stays in the air!".. 😃

This was short, but so simple and yet effective.😃👏.and the best part- the simplest of your lines speak volumes to me about him and her.⭐️😃.Thanks a ton for this😃🤗..Waiting for the next one..

i love the idea that real and reel meets up in your pieces. They have a life aside of the sets and have their own interaction but then, they incorporate it into their dialogues, for every one to see, for every fan to gush over but no one knows the real meaning of the words except the two of them. The director praises their creativity "i should fire the writers, you re-invent your dialogues anyway!", what he doesn't understand is that they add lines so they can speak their heart while being still in character so that their true feelings aren't revealed.

This part as a double meaning, "don't use the word for-real when we're pretending" she says, she makes him promise "pakka?" and he agrees because he cares. And to tease her some more, in the scene he says "PAKKA bolu?" using again her own word, because the ball may still be in the air but they will never stop catching it back and throw it back at each other. The game is on, and it's nowhere near the end !

And yes the ripple of that 'kya' has been felt worldwide in YHM land ..reel and maybe otherwise like your fun fiction 😳

Great writing

RPF is real person fiction BUT I hate calling my stories that so I call them FUN fiction 😊

Gan, this one is not the best one - am a little rusty since I hav been Missing from the forum for one week 😊 Hopefully the next one is better but something little to get me back in motion 😃

Columbia U are such an inspiration to write this stuff !

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You just make me love them more and more ☺️☺️☺️

Brilliant