Hide and Seek - Nov 14 *Note added* - Page 6

Originally posted by: Ohgod!

WOAH Doc!!! These are just out of the world!!! Kya baat kya baat kya baat!!!

Some talent you have there 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

read your post again and while reading was just craving for a moment where they simply hug...just no words nothing...I find so much sensuousness in hugs...and with these two...

Originally posted by: Bombaytola

😳 Thts how i felt when i read your beautiful words. It brought back so many beautiful memories of feeling of falling in love. You have such an amazing way with words. If you are i divyankas twitter you should share ur poem. Iam sure she would love it too.

I am so rambling after reading your post 4 times each time finding a new meaning to your lovely play with words. Each of G, swathi and nivis praises for u completely reflect how i felt when i read it. Loooved your poem. 👏

U will always have a secondary career in writing

Keep doing what u do all i can is I feel really lucky to be able to read all this wonderful poetry.

My fav part is how u describe him standing at edge of door while she walked all over the room saying"khabardar" such confidence can only be from a woman completely in love and feeling yhe love of her partner.

Originally posted by: shidin0117

Hiya Doc,

Awww, you mademy heart flutter, face blush and my brain fall back into Ishra land (since I was concentrating on doing science projects) now I cant concentrate. Words cant express what I felt when I was reading ur post, jst can say it was superb, ur song selection, the way u express the feelings of Ishra everything is sublime, will bookmark and read whenever I want..

Thank you for the wonderful post.

Shilpa

Originally posted by: --Sia--

I always find it difficult to post song here ...let me think ...😳

Edited ...(your lines helped )

Dil ke tukde tukde kar ke, muskurake chal diye
jaate jaate ye to bataa jaa, hum jiyenge kis ke liye

chand bhi hoga, tare bhe honge, fool chaman men pyare bhe honge
lekin hamara dil na lagega
bheegege jab jab raat suhane, aag lagayege rut masatanee
tu hi bataa koi kaise jiyegaa
dil ke maaron ko dil ke maalik thhokar lagaakar chal diye ...

Originally posted by: arrowfan

Absolutely amazing is i can say...

Simply WOW👏

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

Perfection ...this word defines IshRa as well as this post of yours...so gracefully you portrayed their changed equations ...emotions and relation ...in past he gave her a corner of his room to live her life and now she is the empress of his heart ...his soul..his life...Gulzar saab's lines are magical like always and I loved the way you penned down his emotions about her being his dream...now I am a fan of ur writing :)..you are gifted


Ruh ko sukun mila..
Dhadkano ko junoon mila..
Tum jo mile janeja toh...
In hathon ke lakeeron ko
Ruthi huyi si taqdeer mili..

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

Wow thank you for such kind words I do not deserve them, I am glad you enjoyed reading the post and Gulzar saab is just out of this world! I do not have words to describe his genius

@bold: Are you serious...that stuff is mesmerising...I am in total awe 😊