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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
😳 Thts how i felt when i read your beautiful words. It brought back so many beautiful memories of feeling of falling in love. You have such an amazing way with words. If you are i divyankas twitter you should share ur poem. Iam sure she would love it too.
I am so rambling after reading your post 4 times each time finding a new meaning to your lovely play with words. Each of G, swathi and nivis praises for u completely reflect how i felt when i read it. Loooved your poem. 👏
U will always have a secondary career in writing
Keep doing what u do all i can is I feel really lucky to be able to read all this wonderful poetry.
My fav part is how u describe him standing at edge of door while she walked all over the room saying"khabardar" such confidence can only be from a woman completely in love and feeling yhe love of her partner.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hiya Doc,
Awww, you mademy heart flutter, face blush and my brain fall back into Ishra land (since I was concentrating on doing science projects) now I cant concentrate. Words cant express what I felt when I was reading ur post, jst can say it was superb, ur song selection, the way u express the feelings of Ishra everything is sublime, will bookmark and read whenever I want..

Thank you for the wonderful post.

Shilpa
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathibalan

Doc!.. I have read this 4-5 times now and wrote and rewrote what I wanted to write.

But nothing seemed appropriate enough..Your words are so beautiful. Each and every line speaks of love.
There are people who are in love, and then there are people who are in love with "Love". You are blessed with both and that comes across in your posts and the poem that you penned.
And I feel blessed to read something like this..
Love you.. Your fan!❤️



Stop with this unnecessary praise already...and what is this 'your fan' business, that must stop as well. @bold: wah ji wah "love with 'love'", I don't know about all that all i can say is it was fun writing this reminiscing the old times.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Beautiful post Doc ...
And this is briiliant 👏

Woh dil kuchal ke chali hai

Hamari khwaboon ko sang le chali hai

Kehten hai shaam ko lotengi

Hamari khwaboon ko lotaengi

Par inn kambakht khwaboon ko kaun samjhaye

Jo zidd pakad ke khade hai

Ke jinka haath pakadke chale hai

Wohi toh khwaboon ke khud jageer hai

I always find it difficult to post song here ...let me think ...😳
Edited ...(your lines helped )
Dil ke tukde tukde kar ke, muskurake chal diye
jaate jaate ye to bataa jaa, hum jiyenge kis ke liye

chand bhi hoga, tare bhe honge, fool chaman men pyare bhe honge
lekin hamara dil na lagega
bheegege jab jab raat suhane, aag lagayege rut masatanee
tu hi bataa koi kaise jiyegaa
dil ke maaron ko dil ke maalik thhokar lagaakar chal diye ...
Edited by --Sia-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Absolutely amazing is i can say...
Simply WOW👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut


Stop with this unnecessary praise already...and what is this 'your fan' business, that must stop as well. @bold: wah ji wah "love with 'love'", I don't know about all that all i can say is it was fun writing this reminiscing the old times.

Ok.. Not your fan.. Thik Hai.. Your A/c😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -Payal-



So...Gan threatened to cast a patronus on me... Yay G!!! 🥳

I'll be back.


*** EDIT ***

See, this is what I mean. How can anyone say anything after everything you've penned here?

I'll be back to gush some more later...uff lady, how do you do it? HOW?

I'm in awe. As usual. Okay missy no awe business and no more praising, we need to have some ground rules from now onwards 😊

***EDIT ADD***

Okay, here it is:

I have yet to come across someone that puts words to emotion the way you do. (I know, frenemies, but just go with me on this). You weren't kidding when you were saying you were writing poetry. This:
"Love free of a master also isn't a slave of time, so it strolled on it's own pace and took it's own time..."

...I can't. I just can't. Words cannot do justice to your words. I am speechless.

Come, let me give you a big hug...don't fight it.

🤗

...I'm just gonna say it (put aside the frenemies thing for a sec): I HEART YOU! I heart you too! Jhappi back 🤗, lol I was joking about poetry, I am not talented to write poetry...I did end up posting a few lines at the end of the post so I had to add our Olaf picture on page 3 I believe.
So glad you liked reading this, made it worth not studying and wasting time on this 😆

Love,
~P

PS: Gulzar saab's lines...they're everything. I told G if I were in my 60s I would totally marry Gulzar saab, his words transport me to another world where puttar seems even closer to me than ever before 😛
PPS: Olaf...*tear* I'm touched. ❤️🤗❤️

***EDIT ADD - AGAIN***

I can't stop reading your lines over and over again...I love the juxtaposition of where they started and how far they've come...you've penned it so precisely...your words are giving me goosebumps and making me teary eyed all at the same time.

Ok, I'm done.

❤️
Stop it missy! I am glad you read it again, it makes it fun to write if people like reading it 😊...and stop with the goosebumps business. Thier journey is so beautiful that it writes itself, I just string it together 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
edited ...finally got a song 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Perfection ...this word defines IshRa as well as this post of yours...so gracefully you portrayed their changed equations ...emotions and relation ...in past he gave her a corner of his room to live her life and now she is the empress of his heart ...his soul..his life...Gulzar saab's lines are magical like always and I loved the way you penned down his emotions about her being his dream...now I am a fan of ur writing :)..you are gifted


Ruh ko sukun mila..
Dhadkano ko junoon mila..
Tum jo mile janeja toh...
In hathon ke lakeeron ko
Ruthi huyi si taqdeer mili..



Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: nividances

You have expressed my feelings about today's episode so beautifully in your post. I must seriously commend your talent! 👏
Definitely a doctor? Are you sure you're not an author or a poet? Your posts make me question...😆😛😉 Not a doctor yet till I take one exam and match 😭 lol but I digress, thank you for the all this unnecessary praise.

In the past, Raman has sought love, but love ran away when Shagun ditched him. As a result, he began drowning his fears, pains, and insecurities in the intoxication of alcohol to seek his soul, to find the answers to what went wrong, but his soul he couldn't see and the answers he couldn't find. In the end, he looked at Ishita and found all three: his love, his soul, and his answers.

Standing at the edge of the room, admiring his wife, Raman Kumar Bhalla is promising to always treat his wife like a queen, for she reigns over his heart, mind, and soul. In the end, her every wish is his command. That scene of hers walking all around the room and him just staring at her as she claimed him and every part of his room hers was just so so beautiful 😊

If kisses were stars, he would give her the sky. If touches were tears, he would cry. If love was water, he'd give her the sea. Raman Kumar Bhalla is so hopelessly in love that he would do anything for his dear wifey. (That was my sorry attempt at a rhyme 😛). OMG so cute and beautiful, my heart skipped a beat reading this Nivi 😳

Their hide and seek was amazing to watch! I was literally smiling widely throughout all of their moments of togetherness today; needless to say that my cheeks hurt quite a bit afterwards. 😆 They were each trying to reveal their true feelings to each other, but the constant interruptions and distractions just left them with this: "Words cannot express all that you mean to me. May you somehow just know that which I cannot explain."

That hide and seek was the most endearing part of the episode yesterday, what a wonderful wonderful way of showing courtship between people with responsibilities 😊

Amazing post once again! You enlighten me every time with your music choices. 😊 Music happens because I can't study without music so God bless pandaro, Saavn and youtube! I love music...we shall discuss more about music and exchange notes 😊

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