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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

you always surprise me Amna! The simple gestures ooze love and much much more!

LOVED IT :D


Aww thanks madhu!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -SakuraS-

Another beautiful part! I love how you write. Even the simple convos are so beautiful!

Congrats on crossing 100 pages!!



Thank you very much :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a sweet update. Such scenes remind me why I love love stories. Their conversation was so romantic, so effortless.. its like they've always been together!
Loved it Aamna.. Waiting eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a treat! Each update is better and better.

Firstly, the opening and closing lines of this chapter are utter perfection- take a bow lady!👏

That last line... ... this is exactly the kind of romance I used to hoard as a teen- soft sweet romances that make you fall in love with love, and your work is having the same effect on me now.

Seriously , I think I'm falling in love with your version of Abhi... which I never thought i would say. 😉

And you know I'm going to say it- the colors [maybe I have some sort of problem- I always get drawn to the colors details you put in your work😛]- the pink against the white and denim... wow! Never thought of Abhi as a denim kind of guy, but it works here somehow.

Finally their first kiss.. and your description of it made it even sweeter!

Him calling her down for it, and the fact hat she wore pink - it so has a fairytale kind of vibe...LOVE IT!

Love their banter and so, so excited for the next update.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

simple n sweet update
finally they r engaged


Thank you prachi!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SWAN123

I love Cold Play love you too! Beautifully written!

Anticipation for P 20 makes me happy 😊


I'm glad you found the song apt swan. Thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: desikalakaar

How beautiful! I can't wait to see what Abhi has planned for her :P


Thanks!
Neither can I, the surprise is totally unplanned right now.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

aww how sweet and yet oh so dignified
that's what i love about this couple- this quiet maturity and underlying love in every interaction
lovely engagement
continue soon


Aww thanks rutu! I'm glad to know that i could keep the maturity in their romance still intact.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iloveyhm

lovely update Aamnah. The phone conversation, the ring exchnage and the kiss. too good. You use simple wordsand the normal conversation becomes so animated when u write. U are a awsome writer. Update soon waiting for what is Abhi's surprise for Simmi.

Cograts for completeling 100 pages. just 19 chapteres and 10 pages is not a small deal. way to go


Aww thank you! Im glad you enjoyed reading it.
Crossing 100 pages wouldn't have been possible without your lovely comments :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anny90

Aamina..cliffhanger de kar chali gayi..

That's so sweet..the way he made her wear ring.. Haye ye abhi ke one liners.. 😆
You should write more on this couple...
Waiting for surprise..
So curious to know what he has planned.. ..
It's magic.. Indeed!


Anny, the cliffhanger is uses to buy me some time to come up with an apt surprise. I myself don't know what its going to be 😉

Thank you!

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