FF- Call it Magic|| Epilogue on page 115 - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago
You won't imagine how many timesI read the first paragraph! I was really trying hard to memorise all the sentences because it's so so beautiful and meaningful. Half of our problems will be solved if we remember this.

"No matter how hard we try to master each skill we tend to possess, we lack sometimes. Not because we didn't practice enough but because it takes time to reach perfection. It quite happens, something that might be of value to us doesn't stir an ounce of reaction from the other, what matters to us the most may never be of any importance to the other."

Another thing I wanted to tell you is that thanks to your FF, yesterday I found myself googling about the actress who plays Simmi (I didn't even know her name) and she is a very pretty lady. Hope we get to see Simmi having a make-over after the divorce. And I'll hope that she becomes just like the one in your story.

This has to be the best part so far. The parallel situation where Abhi handles Ananya and Simmi takes care of Neervan was mindblowing. I want more of them for sure!


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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't find it odd..i find it admiring...
I am celebrating my divorce...
Loosen up a bit...


Simple dialogues but they convey the crux of the characters...brilliant way of handling characters...the way they are becoming more than just business acquaintances...the flow is so natural...i was waiting for Nirvan n Ananya's role in this equation...loved them today...Nirvan is going to act like a normal kid thanks her...Abhi took Ananya when Simmi was getting to raise her voice...awww...i am falling for this pair you have created...your writing skills are admirable :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Deepika_

I don't find it odd..i find it admiring...
I am celebrating my divorce...
Loosen up a bit...


Simple dialogues but they convey the crux of the characters...brilliant way of handling characters...the way they are becoming more than just business acquaintances...the flow is so natural...i was waiting for Nirvan n Ananya's role in this equation...loved them today...Nirvan is going to act like a normal kid thanks her...Abhi took Ananya when Simmi was getting to raise her voice...awww...i am falling for this pair you have created...your writing skills are admirable :)


Thank you depika. I'm glad I could do justice to these characters in this update, the equation is turning indeed and they have a long way to go.

A special thanks for appreciating the dialogues!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am loving it... I don't know how to say it but I am so much in love right now... even though they are still far from this feeling but I am in love with the way you write and describe their feelings...
Amazing Amna!!!! I Loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

I am loving it... I don't know how to say it but I am so much in love right now... even though they are still far from this feeling but I am in love with the way you write and describe their feelings...

Amazing Amna!!!! I Loved it...


You flatter me priya.
Thank you!


I'm glad you are enjoying this fiction too.
Edited by aaminah123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
was waiting for nirvaan entry
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83

was waiting for nirvaan entry
continue soon


Well, he has now arrived :)
I will, hopefully. Insha Allah.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aaminah123


You flatter me priya.
Thank you!


I'm glad you are enjoying this fiction too.



But its the truth! Promise!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart



But its the truth! Promise!!


I'm sure you wouldn't vouch otherwise :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
Had a chance to get caught up! Good stuff! Really liking the development of their relationship! Can't wait for the next update!

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