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aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: aishu_divan
Lovely update dear😃😃..Everything about the way he approached her and danced with her was so subtle😃..hidden feelings that both are unaware of.😳.but showing it by appreciating each other😊..Enjoying this track😃..I hope CVs do read this and get inspired by your ideas..😊..Very well writtten👏

Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed reading their little moments :)

They are making siren progress all right!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: shavi2311
suprb nd matre updte...
the feelings of both reciprocted very well...
asusaul waitng fr nxt...

Thank you shavi :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Lata_ishra
Nice update...

Thank you :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: paru_rox
Aahaa ... so douchy husband is back again but Abhi decides to rescue her. I loved their conversation during the dance 😳
I can't wait to read the parts about Ananya and Nirvaan.

Also have to say Amna the below line made me admire your tongue-in-cheek humor 😆

Giving someone's husband a piece of his mind might not sound right in any other situation but today he couldn't care less.

Thanks paru 😳

I know you want an elusive meeting of ananya and abhi, I promise its in pipeline. Should take place in the next update or so insha Allah :)

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Paru

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Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Thanks paru 😳

I know you want an elusive meeting of ananya and abhi, I promise its in pipeline. Should take place in the next update or so insha Allah :)

Errr ... exclusive please. I have started resenting the word "elusive".

Well, can't wait for the next part.

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janu12345

@janu12345

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Thank you!
I consider this abhi to be a better version 😃
It took me a while to update because I couldn't figure out how I wanted ishita and Raman to argue. I'm glad you enjoyed their bit.

Ruhi and shravan? I'm totally cluseless, as in friends? In present time or when they grow up?

Haha my point exactly. Honestly, they just don't make sense anymore. Attending a wedding is one thing and participating is totally another !

Absolutely a better version.. On the show i think they forgot to write a character sketch for him.. it looks like being around Ishita is the only character brief he got... anyways...

Ruhi and Shravan.. anything... your interpretation...I am sure you would do it beautifully..😛 Somehow thats a bond which is very cute.. wish we get some scenes on the show as well...

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Errr ... exclusive please. I have started resenting the word "elusive".

Well, can't wait for the next part.

Oh I remember not now. But I didn't mean to scratch your wounds paru when I used the word. Exclusive it is then :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: janu12345

Absolutely a better version.. On the show i think they forgot to write a character sketch for him.. it looks like being around Ishita is the only character brief he got... anyways...

Ruhi and Shravan.. anything... your interpretation...I am sure you would do it beautifully..😛 Somehow thats a bond which is very cute.. wish we get some scenes on the show as well...

Haha that's so true! Going around in circles as soon as he spots ishita!

Thank you for having this faith in me.. An os on kids? Kind of difficult since I love to write emotional stuff. Will have to figure a way out.