THEY never talk about each other, by popular demand pg7

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AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Hey..thanks so much for the PM.. 😊

Haha.. loved all the teasing. And the poor guy is so affected by her. She scolds him a bit and it ruins his mood for the entire duration of the shoot. So cute.. just like how a real couple would behave😆

Really liked how you put in the bit about last night's scene. That was clever!

And you ended with a bang.. again! Good one..Had so much fun reading this OS! 😃

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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

A lovely piece again.. Loved the ending

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felciya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Lovely. Loved it. I know that its unrealistic but you made it real.

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--Megha--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Dear I have a request (consider it if u want to 😊) write an FF on the recent dance sequence 😛 I know u can do full justice to that 😉

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Drishti Maurya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Gal...Ur last lines are always killer!!!!!! Loved it to the core!!!!😊

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Nisha0604

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: mnr123
Dear I have a request (consider it if u want to 😊) write an FF on the recent dance sequence 😛 I know u can do full justice to that 😉

I told her over PM last nite Meghz

She came back with a "Oh! I already know that"😆 like my 6 year old😳

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Nisha0604

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

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Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago

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Nisha0604

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Jyoe
Hey. this is the first time i guess am reading your writing and boy must say I LOVED it!!!
Ah..very well know its Fun Fiction..but kaash kaash kaash yeh reality bhi hota!! Thanks so much for writing it yaar.atleast in this imagingary/fiction world , we get to a little bit more about THEM!😊

I dunno but for me I always felt he really knows her very well and actually care a lot than what comes across,,,but just holds back, lest others may feel insecure!!

For a moment, I forgot it was just fiction! Reel Vs Reality!! *Sigh*

Will defnitely read more stuff of yours from now on...beautifully written and thanks for taking us into a world of fictional reality of THEM!😉

Madhu,

This is a VERY ASTUTE comment👏