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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi dear😊
as usual, great part😉👏

loved raman-ruhi scene😳. it was really sweet
aww they consummated their marriage☺️☺️... beautiful scene
i love how raman wants to know every little thing about ishita😳.
morning scene was good☺️ and ruhi unintentionally interrupting is forgivable for the adorable child that she is..😆
wonder who's the visitor?!

am so loving this ss😃
all your ss/os are a part of my favourites but this one is really special😳. you're just getting better with each one..⭐️

take care
Edited by Rozy77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Of the heart I will strangle you I swear to god I will. ill


Edit.

Amna. My Jaan. Before I got to bed I shall t ru to pen down as much as I can and then unres. Promise. I love you. Sachi. Reignite my hopes and all.

Do you know what I like the best here the pace of physical relationship. It isn't the wait, you strip then I strip and we consummate in less than three minutes. You keep it decent and class yet endearing at the same time.
Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
THANK YOU!!
I was quite mad at the whole Bhalla clan enjoying in the cheater ex's sangeet and that had kinda dampened my mood for the dance. I did quite enjoy while trying to forget the rest 😆

But this made my day dear!! The much needed romance without crappy editing 😉 But wait what's with the last line! :o
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Of the heart I will strangle you I swear to god I will. ill


I know right!!! 😆
But you won't believe what I just did😲... I Res the post just to bug someone!!!😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Happiness is within yourself, they'd said. It was true because where you found happiness, you also found your own self. Such was the case for Mr. Raman Bhalla as he found his own reflection in his new companion for life, his wife. Never before he realized, a smile could light up his bleak life, sweet nothing still existed in this world and sharing a meal with his family could make him feel as light as a feather. Unknowingly, he had started to look forward to coming back home to his girls. A smile played on his lips as he thought of them and bought flowers. A huge bunch of red roses.

This is by far the best para I read 👏 That feeling of coming home to spend time with your loved ones after a tiring day. Perfect words of the heart.


"For ruhi. She loves to play with the thorns." 🤣 I want this guy. His sarcasm makes me envy Ishita. He's the perfect combo which I know does not exist 😆

He said as he gave her the bouquet along with a kiss on her forehead.

I can't tell you how beautiful that looked on Imagining it. Since they are bringing every past scenes with a dose of romance and to remove ruhi ke liye in the show. I so wish they have a scene where Raman brings her flowers. I can so imagine the face of Ishita.

Awwie Ruhi-Ishita-Raman 'scene'... AS much as i love Ishra alone, this trio is something else together yaar.

"Are you afraid?" He asked when they sat down to have dinner.

"Of rides?"

"Of moving on." He eyed her, as if measuring her reaction. Gauging her response.

Brillaint Play of words 👏 He corners her in a way that she cannot hide her feelings.

"I want more." He requested.

When she looked up, he gestured towards the rice and she complied. 🤣 I see what you did there 😆

He wants her to stand on her own feet and carry on writing, while she says her life begins with them not end. Oh my feels.


"Then don't waste time. Help me clear the table."

"You are acting like a wife."

"I can't help it, I am one." She replied getting up from the table and next quarter of the hour was spent in cleaning the kitchen.

😆 Back to the business of hubby-wifey I say 😳 Casual scenes are so attractive.

And what began as a peck on a cheek ended in an embrace, a kiss led to stripping, a moan into her cry in pain for more, a desire that led to ecstasy.

Okay my playlist plays Manwaa laage and am totally lost what to write right now as I start imagining their dance

Back to earth.. How? How did you paint a freaking canvas by one line? 😲 I mean the reader gets the freaking whole picture but yet it's not even descriptive. I felt like am reading a classy novel of sidney sheldon 😳☺️

"No, why in bed?"

"Be.. Because."

The next few days were spent in yearning and the nights were full of new experiences and insatiable desires. Life was good until one day, a visitor arrived questioning ishita's happiness.

It's like sunshine in paradise land until it snows 😛

"Dhono dheeme dheeme jhalle, Tere main hawaale hua seene se laga le"
Edited by Liashna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
My list of ppl to be murdered is increasing day by day.

I demand justice !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey aaminah... You spoil us with regular updates... Crisp updates with a beautiful story.. You ve left us with a cliff hanger.. And I shall eagerly for your next update... Beauuutiful writing...I would sound repetitive if I comment after every update of yours 😛
You can write soo many stories with these 2 characters and all are different from each other...😛 loved this update.. Didn't expect is so early though 😃
Edited by janu12345 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow amna..u r an amazingly talented writer
beautifully written..

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Posted: 10 years ago
A subtle but sweet update..loved it..pls continue soon :)))))))))))
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsumm part..!!
and thanku so much for this some romantic dosages..!!
i was really disappointed when again that scenes turns out to be a precap..!!
But atleast this part helped me with my eagerness..!!
well the part was superb...but now whose this new visitor..!1
well waiting eagerly to know further..!!
continue soon

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