OS : 'Letter from Raman to Raman' (29th Oct) - Page 7

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Lovely OS Rajji

I particularly liked how you didnt have any of them apologizing in the end, rather they were in tears...she upon learning what is on his mind and in his heart and him upon learning all she needed was for him to speak up for him to open up to her and say he loves her - beautiful work my friend.

Originally posted by: SuryaNakshholic

Hey rajji 😊

It was brilliantly written ..

I think u must continue it.. 😉

Originally posted by: vibhutii

Hey Rajji... The Comedy Queen is so Emotional at heart 😉

Am i really though ? 😆😉 I'm impersonating an emotional person : Raman (i am not really one!) but i'm glad i fooled you all !😛🤣

It ws a lovely experience to go through this piece of work...

thank you ! i appreciate this!

I need both guilty at some point... really wanted ishita to realize the pain and sorrows of raman...

You hv done a fabulous job..

Thank you again ! Raman did hurt ishita too, but i don't know why, since mani came into her life, i empathize more with raman. I'm being biased lately, feeling guilty about this !😕😆

She took Ruhi with her. No. That's not quite exact : Ruhi said she wanted to go with her Ishima. I can't blame her. Why would she stay here? At Vandita's place, there is Tingu, and Muttu, while here there's only drunk papa. I should get "Best Drunk Papa" award. Wouldn't that be a great addition to all the awards I got so far? Ruhi, my little angel... She loves me the most, that's true, but she can't live without her Ishima. Sometimes I wonder how she... how we managed before Ishita came into our lives... ? It was only 6 months ago but it seems like it was another life all together.

^^^ reading it is like tearing apart my heart... coz i always feel for raman more...than for ishita..

Same here ! I'm biased !

God, I'll forgive you for what you did to me 6 years ago, if today, you let me have Ishita."

^^^ this was something made my eyes moist... to understand Raman's pain... is not everyone's cup of tea...this was no doubt my favourite and ur bestest line to me...

Woohoo i made you tear up !! I'm both sorry and glad, i can't hide it ! We don't know each other but i can make you both laugh and cry. That's magic !😆 More seriously, come here, give me a hug darling !🤗I added this line two minutes before posting, and i'm glad i did !

"Say you love me to my face Raman. Just say you want me, that's all it'll take."

Raman starts crying, but for the first time in months, it is from happiness and not sorrow.

^^^ imagining his breakdown...🥺

That was sad. But it's for the better, now they'll move on in their relationship! 😳

thanks for this one...this ws a gem ...would me remembered by mein upcoming long time... God bless u😳

Aww thank you so much ! glad you liked it ! didn't send pm for this one because i didn't feel it was any good. thank you again !😳

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

reWow Rajji darling😃😃..A beautiful letter and a much needed one😃..Paving the way for Tedha Raman kumar's realizations..⭐️ Tedha raman ? HAHAHA hilarious darling !🤣🤣

Most loved parts in the letter:❤️❤️

especially since I can't fall asleep without her. It's not that I need her body against mine to fall asleep -we've never had that type of relation- but I do need her presence in the room. I can't seem to fall asleep without hearing her smooth breathing, without smelling her perfume in the air, without hearing her soft "good night, Raman"...

I know that she won't answer but hearing her voice-mail message is all I got right now, and I'm hanging onto it. Who knew I'd be one day desperate to hear her voice... I'd give anything for her to lecture me one more time.

But my heart, it knows. If she could read into my heart... that would make everything so much easier. Then she'll know how much I love her, how much I need her and how much I am afraid. Afraid of being unworthy of love.

So slowly, I let her unfold me, I let her put down all of my barriers and brush away my fears so she could make her way to my heart. I felt like if anyone in this world could still love me, it was her...

Oh my gawd😲😲..what a bouncer towards the end😲..Damn I wa sjust about to tell you wish Ishita could get hod of this letter somehow😃😃..And you did it⭐️..I love you so much for this..❤️

First it was supposed to be only the letter and before posting it (i was about to rush out the door to go at my party) i edited it and added the last part with ishita which made me late to the party!! 🤣🤣

..And that last line "Say you love me to my face Raman. Just say you want me, that's all it'll take."..Oh my god😲..That was everything that Ishita wanted to express to Raman in just one line😃😃.. Yep, short and straight to the point. Love this aspect of ishita !

Wooow⭐️..Fabulous and fantastic piece of writing👏👍🏼..You hvae expressed Raman's agony and insecurity so well in the letter👏..

Thank you so much my love !

CVs please read this and take down some notes⭐️..

hahaha they should come to the forum more often and take notes indeed ! we have some fabulous writers here!

This was a perfect OS👍🏼..I was missing your review for today , but then realised you may be busy too and inspite of that u had time to pen down this lovely OS😃..

yep i had wrote this last week and i decided to post it before going at the party. after the party i was too tired to caption so i was glad i had posted this before, to contribute to the forum activity. That being said, right now, i just posted a review for yesterday. I tried to come up with a new idea as i often like to do. hope you'll enjoy it darling !

I loved this OS Rajji❤️..You are so super talented when it comes to writing or even making your comical reviews😃..Thanks a ton for this lovely OS.🤗.It definitely made my day😊

Thank you so much ! You're being way too kind to me !❤️🤗❤️

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

O god...i had such difficulty in searching for ur reply... i had to chk 5 pages...damn shud have seen it earlier...

Shalini 🤗 Hahah loved your dance, may i join in too ? 🥳

hahaha... i like ur dancing too...

Sorry i didn't send pm to anyone about this OS because i didn't felt like it was any good.

O plz, no need for apologies...I found it tht is important.. however...u underestimate urself my dear... u r good...

i'm all about love declaration ! I love you too ! 🤗❤️

aaw...thank u...

Hahahaha that's sweet but no sequel for now. I had a hard time writing this piece because i'm not really an emotional kind of person. "emotional pieces" doesn't come easy to me. So yeah... no sequel for now. 😆😆

n if emotional pieces are not ur forte...i wonder what qamayat u wud do to stuff which are ur forte afterall...

Hahaha humour makes everything better right? 😉 you're awesome for noticing it !

Thank you shalini my darling !!

A big 🤗 for u...

Originally posted by: rutu83

WHY did you not think this is good? pagal aurat🤪
i loved it! very emotional, beautifully so. i especially liked how the letter was little rambling- it reflected raman's state. that back and forth. that sheer anguish. that simple yet shattering plea to almighty 😭👏 i'm so used to your funny side- even in your previous work that this was a surprise. a beautiful one at that 👏 hope you continue to give such surprises 😃
and PM me! i'll be the judge of whether i'll like it or not😡