STAR CROSSED LOVE - Page 3

Originally posted by: redwine1

tera mujhse hai pahle ka naata koi .. yuhi nahi connection banta sahi 😉

LOL on the conflict .. thank u PHEW !!! mein bach gayi 😉

U have a very deep understanding of emotions . u also have a very nice ability to look at the holistic picture .. which is something i really appreciate .. i love the way u delve down into characters ... for someone so young this is really creditable .. coz its takes real maturity to really see all sides of a tale ..

Your verses are superbly deep .. & in just a couple of lines ur able to catch the essence & depth of what is shown .. as u can see it takes me 10 pages to do what u do in a couple of lines ..

So as a fan of ur work .. i can say .. babe u truly ROCK 🤗

Accha i'll complete...

Jaane tu ya jaane na

Maane tu ya maane na...

'Holistic' wow u know I juz didn't get this...😆 Kya kahu me m immensely overwhelmed...

I wished ruby exams me length factor ni hota... But Yaha length bada matter Karti h... N m not able to mug up things...🤢

Badi hi kathin paristhiti h kya karu... I wish ppl cud teach d content... I don't delve deeper unless n until I get d content...🥱

N length itna jyada matter Karta h ki even if u write crap u'll get mks... To the point precise n crisp has no meaning..

How I wish I cud write poetry in every para of ans...😆

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

This post and these epis have me so excited Ruby if luck and time permits I might make my fasted edit on this thread - on any of your threads ever!😛 Almost halfway typed my reply on word already - yeah I rely on word when it comes to things that matter - dont trust IF or browsers much...been burned loads for that.

Originally posted by: Tiadas03

Ruby🤗

Ur brilliant , no beyond brilliant when it comes to writing man. I have not even seen the episode yet n love it already. Am sitting here with this huge grin on my face bt the end of the post.

Believe me when I say that the entire last week it's only been ur comments n posts that have kept me even remotely positive about where this track could go n how good it can be😛.

Can I ask u if I can forward this on my facebook chat group?? Would love ppl to read this, with all the fights n arguments about who's right n who's wrong this is super.

N lastly...being a sucker for ishra n their awsome chemistry I will be waiting eagerly to read ur post on Ishra when they get together.😳😳

Originally posted by: redwine1

Go ahead share .. thank u so much for ur encouragement ..

I am so touched & humbled that u feel positive after reading the thread .. thank u on behalf of all us writers here .. love having to share our thots with everyone .. & am so glad that all of u share urself & ur love for the show here ..

Truly humbled .. 🤗

Originally posted by: yhm_craze

you nailed it in one line @redwine1! (Sorry I dont know your name 😳) - "Ishita chose Raman's success over his feelings".

You are right all of us are taking sides in this track and I am guilty of that too...but all of us at the end of the day want to see Ishra together so hopefully the two ends shall meet one day 😆.

The reason I am tilted more towards Raman (and I speak strictly about this track) is because he has not behaved out of character. His is a very complex character...not a perfect man at all and thankfully no efforts are being made to justify his flaws. But I am not saying that he was right in choosing a public platform to vent out his feelings. However what he said was not half as bad as the promo threatened. It was a spectacular speech and yet the sad and ironic part is that i thought it missed its mark for both his past and present. Shagun was gloating that he is not yet over him 😆 and Ishita was mourning over the same misconception. But what I loved about today's episode is that Raman realized he hurt Ishita and he was wrong in doing that. He acknowledged his flaws openly that he has not treated her right and he acknowledged her goodness too that she stood by him inspite of his flaws. Both may have come back to the Sirf Ruhi ke liye phase but unknowingly both still hold hope for each other. Even when she faces his worst Ishita repeats that he is a very good man and today Raman did it even as he faced her supposed betrayal. So thank you CVs...all is not lost 😆.

Coming to Ishita, sadly this track has left me confused about her. A person who values trust and honesty has kind of not practised what she preached. She may have done it for a good reason but she did it and there have been so many times when she has contradicted herself that I am left reeling. Once she said that if Raman comes to know what she is upto and on top of that she is taking Mani's help he will be furious and then she thinks that he will be so happy with what she has done that he will confess his love for her! 😕 She was so worried about his professional success that he was agitated and on a downward spiral right in front of her and she did not notice! I would let it go for anyone else but Ishita is by nature an extremely kind and giving woman who has a natural ability of sensing discomfort especially in her loved ones. Another thing that I found very jarring is that she took the lying and hiding things bit very lightly and even had a good laugh about it with Mani as they decided to change his name to Manisha in her phone. Someone who finds it very disturbing when Raman lies or hides things it was a very strange thing for her to do. I would have been pacified if she had shown some discomfort about the fact that she has to lie and hide things from Raman but that did not happen . I think that is why Raman is more devastated because he would have thought Ishita would be the last person to lie. Does Ishita think that she has to do something spectacular to win Raman's love? Raman tries to do small husbandly things for her like helping her around the housework, caring for her health, fasting for her while she goes on this big mission putting all her other relationships on stake (Did she think about Bhallas' reaction to her mission success?). After this huge effort she ended up telling Toshi that Raman was capable enough of solving Romi's problem alone 😕. What also saddened me is even when she was sure something else is bothering Raman it still did not gain priority over his professional success. She was driven by him securing the position and his party being a success. The man drank so much that he was unconscious and has been crying himself to sleep and she thought he will cheer up if she looks her best? 😕 I somehow wonder if the writers have done full justice to Ishita's character in this track.

All of us including Ishita might think that Raman should trust her irrespective of everything but that's the thing...we are humans and nobody is perfect. The fact is if the roles were reversed Ishita would have doubted Raman too. Maintaining trust is equally important as winning trust. It is a continuous process.