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Originally posted by: swathi1990
Yipeee. Just waiting for your update !!!!!
Every scene you have etched in Meherbaan is just awesome. The grandeur of it, the way you show everyone's perspective...it's like we get transported there and are in the midst of the scene. The way you have established the state of all the main characters. It is just mind blowing.Now that you have set the stage for each character, I am really looking forward to the steps each one of them are going to take. Specially I am eagerly waiting for the teaser... please please write this chapter soon...I would like to see this scene you have described playing out with everyone speaking out their minds...#1"Yeh ashiq ashiq kya laga rakha hai? Biwi hai meri. Baqaidah shaadi ki hai humne. Meri bacchi ki maa hai yeh." Raman held the man by his collar as he said those words right to his face through clenched jaws, looking right into his eyes.#2Raman Kumar Bhalla was furious. Furious would be an understatement. Raman Bhalla resembled a walking talking volcano, the lava bubbling inside him in the form of anger waiting to erupt. And it had found its target - Ishita. Raman turned to Ishita, his fingers trying thir level best to calm his nerves as Raman Bhalla attempted to massage his forehead telling himself for the umpteenth time that no matter how furious he was, he shouldn't take it out on Ishita. But this woman, this woman... This woman was his red string of fate that knotted each passing moment complicating his life and ruining his well set plan. Bidding a final goodbye to all his romantic illusions that would be shattered post this much needed outburst, Raman Bhalla turned over to his wife.#3Ishita locked gazes with Raman as she stepped a step closer to him with each beat that flew.Seduce him, she could do that.BTW , I like the name avantika
Wait. Before I reply to that and bask and lose myself in your comment that's the next chapter and I hope I do justice to it.
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