#1| IshRa : Meherbaan FF | Thread One - Complete. Moved to Thread Two. - Page 63

Edited my comment on page 96.

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Okay now I love you!

I loved how you give each scene a 360 degree angle, covering each perspective. How you incorporated subbus's view with ishita and raman's previous scene was commendable and I loved reading it again.

You know I have this thing for witty dialogue and ishita and subus's proposal bit, I enjoyed the sweet and short ones.

I almost felt for subbu, but perhaps I was too lost in ishirta and Raman's perfect world that i didn't care how that guy sulked. Seriously, kiara you have a way with words and the vision to imagine such scenes and to pen it to perfection.

P. S As soon as I started reading, I was unknowingly waiting for the moment which never arrived. Where was the darn kiss?!😡

Who is complaining about this update? Thoroughly enjoyed it.

How many times should I change my favorite chapter Kiara?

One, the playlist. Been watching that on repeat for hours already. Until I read this. and all just fell even more perfectly. How? I have no idea though!

Ishita Raman are lost in their own world. Ruhi is my little angel. The way you revisit a 'scene' from the onlookers point of view makes me fall more in love with them. Wow.

The aristocracy, yet the modesty, the display of love, yet being in their own restricted circle, their happiness, the joy. They are beau-ti-ful as a couple, as a family.

Subbu is like in denial mode. I like it. Yeah am not going to pity him. At all. Not after watching the episode when he walks in with his pregnant wife in front of Ishita. So he is on the path of putting two and two together. Good for him.

The fangirls and the aunties are too damn adorable 😆

Also love the gang of Mihir-Mihika, Vandu-Bala, Mrs Iyer.

The whole set of anniversary gift videos. Brilliant. You make the picture clearer and brighter to imagine.

It was a treat reading every little bit of this. Loved every dialogue, every line of description. It was an update in motion. It was like I was watching this unfold or like am watching an epi. Totally worth the wait. but that doesnt give you the excuse to be late to update.

Am counting on a quicker one now :P

Where do i even start with this? ...WOW! 👏

Thank you so much for such a long , beautiful update!😃 And this is part A only?🥳

Can't imagine how long it took you, admire your commitment and the time spent- THANK YOU, GREAT JOB! *High 5*😎

Your chapters are getting more and more vivid, with these videos too now- wow! You really transported us to that AU.😊

Loved the Bhalla/Iyer clan and the video commentary and idea. LOVE the ISHRA fangirls, and that Mathu herself admitted to being one had me 🤣

Terrific way to tell the ISHRA back story- same , but different, cool!

Loved that the extended family and Subbu finally got a clue and I can't wait to see where you are going to take this next.

Don't even know what else to say,so i'll end with : thank you, great job, please continue & I can't wait!😆

That should cover all the bases!😉

HEEEY THERE! :D
Addicted to your FF as of now.. it's been a while since I'm been following your work- your amazing! Love the different - person point of views you incorporate (first, second, third) in your FF and all these gossip people among the family that are so fun and yet annoying to read. It's like there sitting there just to watch IsRa- which in a literal sense is so truee. haha. So happy Ishi hasn't part of her 'disturbing gossiping' so called family members- I mean .. how can you even call them family? So happy Iyers are doing there own family thing, while living in a house full of nonsense people- except Ishi's grandma and her older cousin.
& Subbu- for some reason, I find him irritating and well, feel sorry for him too. At a point, where he needed to stand up to her, he didn't and now he thinks afterall it'll be all ok getting Ishi back.. though I'll be looking up to how he makes that happen. potential Subbu & Ishi- convo?
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Love your commitment and efforts it would have taken to you do this update! You're too awesome and those video links incorporated to IshRa's anniversary video and loved the Iyers and Bhalla's little speeches and loved how you kept their silly arguments so true to their characters- haha. who's Pinky btw? Mrs. Bhalla's bestie? & awhieee how sweet of them! is this supposed to be kept secret from IsRa to be shown later?
LOL loved the extra cast of fans- that admitted to IshRa being hot and what not. That's a great audience to read into. LOL. despite everything, IshRa's are the bomb for them.
as for rest of clan 'family'- they do know now that IshRa are together as hubby and wife right?

Can't wait for the next part! :) x

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gosh this was an awesome update
subbu's plight moreover guilt is very well penned
I just this gossipers
n cute family moment ishraru so sweet that flying kisses
n d video awesome

such an awesom updte...

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

r u updating??

Awesome update !👏 loved it
was worth waiting for.

Ps :- howz your hand , hope its OK now.