'who r u' updated part 30&31 on pg43&44(completed) - Page 19

hello, I'm new to this forum. i just love the show yeh hai mohabbatein since na bole tum na maine kuch kaha 1 & 2 no show has grabbed my attention but this show has done it from the 1st promo n I'm watching it since that time no too regularly but still if not on TV i watch it on YouTube or any other site or read written updates. i always liked lead female of the show divyanka from her 1st show i find her most sexy n seductive tv actress with Great talent that too without not much skin show she's superb also lead actor karan patel superbly talented man with dashing personality n kick ass attitude. i always knew from the announcement of this show it will hit bulls eye n happy that it does. enjoying it. kudos to yhm team for good n entertaining presentation. blessing n keep going

Frankly ...I loved ONE LINER's by Aarav the Most !!!

hi... i just came across this written imagining story different from real yhm show n i would like to say that i really loved it its too heart touching you have written superb script with too much good points n pluses but it has flaws as well & I'm writing only for flaws as other than that i loved all the things. the starting point of the story "who are you" is little bit illogical but as its a drama its acceptable that raman fall in love with ishita in 1st meeting n they had a sex due to certain as they are not in their control especially ishita also for remaining story needed that ishita shouldn't know raman so acceptable starting. anyway 2nd point which i not liked or could have more better was after sex ishita doesn't know who did it she thinks subbu did it but as she came to know at her wedding day it wasn't subbu she gets in shock at that time if you had written that "ishita still tries to speak subbu but couldn't so she decides to go forward with strong will to marry subbu leaving behind past that she had a sex with somebody but after preparing mentally she agrees to do marriage with subbu at the time when she is coming from stairs in bridal wear she feels weak n get collapsed everyone run there n after showing to doctor everyone gets to know that she's is pregnant every1 gets shock. subbu n her parents ask her about it but she says she doesn't know it n tells about that night what happened after subbu leaves then subbu's parents blames her for her cheap character subbu too doesn't support her n also her parents doesn't support her marriage n her relation with subbu break ups. she still stay strong decides to have this child unknowable that who's child it is as a mom she feels that but her parents try to convince her for abortion but she don't listen so her parents also break ups all their relation with her due to badnaami in the society also that she have to listen too much from society also they have too as their daughter is mom of a child whose father is unknown. so then she decides to leave the home for parents n their prestige without saying a word to them n telling them.. she leaves n struggle in new city then all the forward written in your story is good upto mihirs entry then i think story gets repetitive n uninteresting little bit boring also at a point i felt the confession of raman to ishita you have shown is not so good... i feel that ishita should know about being the person with whom she spent that night & he's aaravs father before confession of raman like that... as usual ishita goes in hospital for inquiry of megha n her health in hospital that day while checking out Megha's report a doctor came to her recongnizing her as aaravs mom he told to her that aaravs was lucky that day bcoz after accident aarav needed blood cells of his parents but as no one was there they was helpless but the man with him who also had injuries has provided that. doctors thought he was aaravs father as they were coming together in car when accidents happened so they have taken Raman's blood cells thinking that he's aaravs father n blood cells matched but after knowing From raman that he's not his father they got surprised as this happens very very rarely bcoz blood cells can only match to biological parents. ishita gets surprised after knowing this n also gets shocked.. too many questions in her mind so she ask to doctor about it briefly doctor explains her. she gets in thoughts how Raman n aarav relate with each other n aarav have many same activities like raman which are not like her maybe they are from his father like eg 1) not liking idli sambhar 2) likes pasta 3) fear from injections 4) flirting with girls with attitude like raman used to do in college as mihir told ishita about that in coffee meeting(this huge n good point you missed to write in your story). so she gets deep thought & nervous can Raman be father of aarav as Raman was in party that day when they met 1st time also raman telling about the girl he loves has simililarities to her situation n how he became happy after aarav n me came to his life n all the flashback she gets with raman.. more suspect of her grows so she decides to do dna test of aarav n raman she came to home in shock state takes hair or blood of raman n aarav n give to dna test after getting results she get shocked to know that raman is father of aarav n the man who slept with her that night. she cries and gets collapsed as she has faced too much bad due to raman. then she takes aarav with him to place where he was born not telling to anyone except mihika & then after 2-3 days raman ask mihika abt aarav n ishita as its aarav birthday the next day mihila told him he goes their when he reaches their & gives gifts to aarav then ishita sees them she comes their in very angry mood ask aarav to go inside raman asks ishita what happened she come forward towards him... slaps him in anger tears in her eyes, hold his collar n ask him why did he did that to her? crying... he's the same person who slept with her that night and aarav father bcoz of him all is happened he's responsible for that even he not just asked how she will be in those days? how can he leaves a girl like that after doing such a thing? why why raman answer me? crying with holding Raman's collar n raman is just looking sadly towrds her... we aarav n ishita needed your support in all those difficult days you were not there how can be he so irresponsible? give an answer still crying n gets collapsed on ground slowly holding raman clothes... answer me why? raman still standing tears in his his eyes slowly keep his one hand on shoulder of ishita n says please forgive me i know i did a veru big mistake which is not forgivable but still he's her criminal... he says he done that night wasn't intentional he was also not in his control it was just a moment we lost our self control (saying for convincing her) . i also felt guilty, i came to meet you say sorry but that day you were marrying subbu he thought that she has moved on why to disturb her happy life so he returned back. Ramon continued I was missing you every day and night you're the girl whom i love so much n when he saw her again he was happy didn't knew that aarav is her son n his dad left you n u told about that to me but after accident i came to know that he's my son after long time having so much happiness i didn't wanted to lose both of you again so didn't told you that pls forgive me n give me a chance i assure i will not get tears in ur eyes again . ishita still feels hatred for him a she n aarav have to go in difficult phase due to him she says i don't know i will forgive you or not just time knows n leave from there. raman says i will keep trying ishita until you don't forgive me this time i will not step a back n story continued... this points or situations you missed to include if u habe included them with good dialogue n good adaptation your story would have been great n mesmerizing it is still but feels that this situations needed their with your adaptation in my opinion hope you got it!!! kudos to your writing n concept its still a good one to read. 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Hello friend here is the next two parts.

Sorry if any mistakes..

Part21:

One Saturday:

Mi&mi are not talking with eachother normally.mihir tries to avoid mihka in all conversations,mihika is very upset with him,why he is doing like this.she decides to meet ishitha once and talk with her for solution.and same time mihir also feels guilty for the nonsense he behaved.he also want to talk with raman but hesitates to talk with him,because now mihika is saali to him.so he decides directly talk with ishitha about his feelings for mihika.

Evening mihir comes to ramans home to meet ishitha,but she is not yet come.aarav is busy in playing videogame.mihir joins with aarav.they both are playing.but mihir can't concentrate on game.even aarav also feels very bore.so he decides to play with mihir chachu.

Aarav:chachu,aap ne mujse kuch bolna bool gayana?

Mihir:kya aarav?mai kuch nahi booli!

Aarav:nahi tum ne vusdin tumhara GF ke bare me baath kiyana.kis track tak aayi aapka story?

Mihir:kuch nahi.beech me traffic constable aagayi..

Aarav:tho aap vunko bribe karke hatana chahiye na..

Mihir:sirf vo problem nahi.muje raastha dikayi nahi vun tak pahunch ne ki.isiliye aaj babhi se kuch advice lena chahithi hoon..

Aarav:mamma se..it is too funny.mamma in sab me bahuth weak hai,tumko batha haina papa ki love bare me maine vunko bathaya.vuski dimaag me harvakth hospital, foundation, medines, injections ki alava kuch chalthi nahi.poor mamma..

Mihir:you are right.but mai bhai ka suggestion bhi nahi le saktha hoon.ab kya karoo..

Aarav:how many times I tell you..why you fear.love guru hear. Come on tell me..what is your exact problem?

Mihir:sorry guru ji,mai bhool gaya..lekin aap iske bare me kisi ko nahi bathvunge na..promise..

Aarav:mere mind me koi secret hothi na vo bank locker jaisa safety hai.mai kisi ko bhi nahi bathavungi.promise..

Mihir:teeke..i trust you.mai jis ladki ko pyar karthi na recently vuska ek purani friend aagayi.i don't know,but I thinks she loves him.lekin vo mere saath bhi bahuth acche se behave karthi,mere kyal karthi.

Aarav: how do you know she loves him?

Mihir:she always praise him a lot,and very friendly and happy with him.

Aarav:bas vahi..

Mihir:ha maine tab tak dekha,I don't know aage kya hai..

Aarav:sach me you are duffer chachu.mihika chitti bhi papa ko praise karthi hai,vunke saath enjoy karthi hai,iska mathalab chitti loves him?not na jaise hi yahi hoga..

Mihir:teeke,ye sab chodo..phele ye bathov how can I ask her about me?

Aarav:direct approach.you just call her for dinner or other meeting, propose her directly.agar vo tume like karthi vo jaroor tume milne aathi hai,this is the first confirmation.

Mihir:you are right aarav.why I am hesistating,agar pyar kiya tho darna kya hai.whatever will happen I have to face,if it is yes or no.

Aarav:that's like my chachu.go on..

Mihir:thank you aarav.he kisses him.abhi mai vusko invite kartha hoon.bye..

He leaves from there.

On the way he calls mihika.and she is at entrance of raman's home.

Mihir:hello mihika.

Mihika:ha mihir..bolo..kuch kam hai kya?

Mihir:nahi.will you free tomorrow evening?

Mihika:ya abhi tak kuch plans nahi,lekin why?

Mihir:will you come to dinner meeting with me?i want to talk to u something..

Mihika(st):acchank kya hoga?what he wants to talk with me?shayad mihir bhi yahi bath sochthi hoga,mere jaise..

Mihir:hello,are you there..

Mihika:ya ya..i will come..

Mihir:thankyou bye,meet u tomorrow.

Mihika:bye..(st)buddu..smiling..

She is entering aarva's room,not observing aarav watches her,while she is lost in mihir thoughts.she straightly comes and sits in a chair still thinking.and mihir want to share with aarav,she agrees to meet him.he drove back to ramans home.

Aarav:comes near her and stood before her but she can't recognize him.he places his hand on her forehead ,it is normal.

Aarav:bahuth handsome haina..

Mihika:ha..(thinking about him)

Aarav:bahuth helping nature haina...

Mihika:ha..(thinking how he help that old lady)

Aarav:acchi smiling haina..

Mihika:ha..(thinking he is very friendly with every employee)

Aarav:naam bhi acchi haina..

Mihika:ha mere jaise hai..(mi&mi)

Aarav:kya naam hai..

Mihika:mi...she came back to present state.

Aarav:what?mi..

Mihika:kuch nahi..i am saying my name is mihika...

Aarav:accha...mere naam amitab bacchan hai..

Mihika:what happened aarav?what are you talking?

Aarav:vahi tum abhi tak kisi ke baar me bol rayithi,vuske bare me.

Mihika:mai kisi ke bare me nahi bath karrayithi.

Aarav:teeke,mai mamma ko bathavungi iske bare me..

Mihika(st):ayyo murugan,mai kaha phasa gaya?yeh tho junior CID pradhyuman hai.muje aaj chodonge nahi.

Mihika:kuch nahi aarav,mai aaj happy new year film dekha,so SRK bare me bol rayithi.

Aarav:tum SRK bare me bol rayithi,tho definitely papa se bhi bolna chahiye.he is also big fan of SRK na..

Mihika:sits on knees before him.holds his chin please please aarav tum kisi ko nahi batha sakthi. Please ..aarav mera best friend hai na..

Same time mihir comes and hears their voices and sees mihika pampering aarav.he hides beside door and hears their conversation.

Aarav:teeke,mai kisi ko nahi bathavungi,lekin tum muje bathov chakkar kya hai...

Mihika:teeke,mai bathavungi,lekin promise karo muje...

Aarav:promise..

Mihika:mai kal dinner date jarayithi..

Aarav:kis ke saath..

Mihika:vuske saath..

Aarav:koun?tumhara lover?

Mihika:I don't know..lover or friend..

Aarav:lekin koun hai?

Mihika:kal bathavungi vunse milne ke baad please...

Aarav:teeke,jaroor bathna hoga...

Mihika:definitely..thankyou aarav..

Mihir leaves from there without meeting aarav,because he already gets half conformation.

Mihika:lekin akka kaha hai?

Aarav:vo abhi tak aayi nahi..shayad busy hoga hospital me..

She immediately calls ishitha and she says she is in foundation busy in childrens day celebrations for next day.

Mihika tells about this to aarav.and aarav want to meet megha.

Aarav:chitti,hum bhi chalthe na,mamma ko help kare!

Mihika:abhi?what will you help her?and I have some work now,I can't come!

Aarav:teeke,tum muje vaha drop karke javo,mai mamma ke saath aavungi.

They both on the way to foundation.and aarav informs raman,he is with ishitha in foundation..

Mihika stops byke at the same signals and sees that old lady.she immediately went to her and buys flowers.

Aarav:ye kiske liye..

Mihika:tumahre liye..tum mere secret ko chupa thina..isiliye..

Aarav:thankyou ..lekin next time mere liye kuch aur lena hoga..

Mihika:teeke,whatever you want..

They both leaves from there and mihika drops him at the foundation.he directly went to childrens ward.there all childrens are practicing their performances.megha sees aarav and comes near him.

Megha:hi aarav..

Aarav:hi megha..how r u?

Megha:fine..flowers kiske liye?

Aarav:tumhare liye,aur kiskeliye !he gives flowers to her.

Megha:thankyou..beautiful flowers haina..

Aarav:ha..

Suddenly a boy calls her to practicing dance with him.

Megha:aarav,mai tume baad me miloongi.i have to go and practice now,bye.she runs from there and dancing with that boy.

Aarav gets angry and leaves from there.he immediately meets ishitha.

Ishitha:aarav beta,tum yaha,kaise?

Aarav:mamma,mai abhi aayi,chitti ne muje yaha drop kiya,lekin aap ne muje kyon nahi bathaya,yaha function ke bare me?

Ishitha:ab kya huva?

Aarav:aap phele bathadiya tho mai bhi participate karoongi na..

Ishitha:tum kabhi nahi karthi na isiliye maine nahi bathaya..

Aarav:lekin this time I want to perform..

Ishitha:lekin achanak kaise?

Aarav:please mamma,I want to participate..

Ishitha:teeke,kya karna chahthi hoon?

Aarav:I want to do salsa with megha.

Ishitha:tum pagal hogaya kya?this is not possible.

Aarav:mamma,aap mere liye ithna bhi nahi karpavungi.

Ishitha:aarav,muje emotional blackmail math karo,please..

Aarav:please mamma..

Ishitha:salsa is not possible in this short period of time.you can't..

Aarav:no,I can..

Ishitha:aarav, shut up..i have work.you wait here.i will come and will leave.

She leaves from there.but aarav being aarav don't want to lose any chance.he immediately calls raman and requests him to come foundation .raman arrives there within 30 minutes.

Raman:kya huva aarav?any problem?tum muje ithne urgently kyon bulaya?

Aarav:explains everything and asks him to talk with ishitha.

Raman:aarav,mamma nahi bolana mathlab vo nahi hopayega na.agar vo kar lethi tho karoonga na.

Aarav:papa..aap bhi mamma ka side lerayi hai?teeke chodo ab se mai kuch nahi poochingi nahi!

Raman:teeke.lekin why salsa.do something other.

Aarav:no I am interested that only.and I know some basic dance also.

Raman:mai promise nahi karoongi,lekin manane keliye try karoongi..ok

Aarav:I am sure you can do it anything..

Raman:aaj kal bahuth dramebazz bangayi tum ,chalo mamma ke pass.

They both went to ishitha.

Raman:hai madrasan..

Ishitha:raman ,tum bhi yaha achank?

Raman:raman looks at aarav.and ishitha understands whats the matter.

Ishitha:tho ab baap aagayi manane keliye.

Raman:isme problem kya hai?

Ishitha:short period of time.vo nahi karpayega..

Raman:no,he is sure,he can..

Ishitha:raman vo baccha hai,lekin tum samjana chahiye na..

Raman:whatever..just say yes or no.

Ishitha:no.

Raman:teeke,ab mai aarav ka father nahi hoon.one of the sponsor of this foundation,mr.raman kumar bhalla want to watch aaravs performance.what do you say mrs.bhalla?

Ishitha:teeke mr.bhalla,what ever you want we can arrange for you.lekin inka practicing aap hi karna hai.

Raman:teeke,vo kam mai aur mere pathni karoongi.

Ishitha:as your wish,any thing else mr.bhalla?

Raman:nothing we are taking megha with us today.do you have any problem?

Ishitha:no mr.bhalla.meet you tomorrow at the function,bye.she leaves from there with a evil smile.

Aarav comes and kisses him thankyou papa.i know you can..

Raman:ab ghar jakar mrs.bhalla ko patana hai.

They both leaves from there along with megha.raman orders food for dinner and waiting for ishitha.ishitha comes home near 7.00pm and sees raman waiting for her.

Raman:hi ishitha

Ishitha:hi raman,aap mere liye wait karrayithe?

Raman:muje tum se kuch kam hai..please help me yaar..

Ishitha:first I want to fresh up.then we will talk together.

Raman:ok,I am waiting,come soon.

She leaves and changes to his night wears and came back to hall in within 15 mins.

Ishitha:raman,will you wait for some time,I have to prepare for dinner.

Raman:no need.i am already ordered food from outside.

Ishitha:oh that's good,may be some important work?

Raman:ha,ye mere prestige ka issue hai,I want to show her my sons talent.

Ishitha:koun raman?

Raman:vahi,mrs.bhalla,jo MAWF volunteer hai.vo kehrayithi ek din me salsa karna moomkin nahi hai.

Ishitha:ha raman,she is right.it is impossible.

Raman:but I want to make it possible.

Ishitha:teeke,in sab me mai kya help karoongi?

Raman:bas kuch nahi,tum aur mai milkar some moments aarav aur megha ko sikana hai.vo tho smart bacche hai na,they can easily learns any thing.

Ishitha:vo dono smart hai,but mai nahi hoon,sorry raman,I can't help you in this matter.

Raman:please ishitha,agar tum nahi maan liya tho mai tume kabhi kuch nahi poochungi..

Ishitha:what is this raman?you also blackmailing me?

Raman:it's not blackmail or email.i am requesting you.maine aarav ko promise kiya.

Ishitha:raman..you are becoming child day by day.

Raman:whatever you feel,idon't mind.but this is final.you are helpimg me.

He immediately calls aarav and megha.within seconds all are gathered in hall.

First one hour they both showing normal moments.after that they finished their dinner and after sometime they again starts practicing.really they both are very good at dance that's way they can manage in within 2 hours,but not perfectly.at around 11.pm they are going to sleep.aarav and raman in one room ishitha and megha in one room.ishitha is very tired because of heavy work entire day.nextday morning raman wakes first and also wakes up aarav and megha not disturbing ishitha.they both are practiced for some time with ramans guidance.

It's 9am ,still ishitha is sleeping.raman makes bread toast for aarav and megha.they did their breakfast and sometime taking rest.raman makes coffee for ishitha and went to their bedroom with 2 cups of tray.he places it on table.and wakes up ishitha.she opens her eyes and finds raman with a cup and looks at watch.

Ishitha:oh murugan,it's 9am and I am still sleeping.what happened to me?

Raman:goodmorning ishitha.

Ishitha:gdmrg raman,aapne muje ab tak kyo nahi vuti?

Raman:why?your are very tired na,so I don't want to distub you.

Ishitha:phir bhi,I have to prepare breakfast,sorry raman,she immediately gets down from bed and starts walking.

Raman:hello madam,thoda break rako aapki express ko,maine ne breakfast bana liya aur aarav aur megha kaliya bhi..

Ishitha:aap kiya..!

Raman:why not?i can do anything.come sit and have your coffee.

Ishitha:takes coffee and sips it.

Raman:kaisi hai.

Ishitha:agar coffee hotha accha hoga.

Raman:matlab..acchi nahi hai?teeke next time I will try better.

Ishitha:no raman,this is nice.and thanks for coffee.

Raman:but I am sorry ishitha,maine kal raath tume force kiya na,lekin please samjo,aarav keliye maine kiya.

Ishitha:mai samjgayi raman ,isiliye maine manliya, nahi tho muje koi nahi manaa sakthi..

Raman:I know madam.aap salman khan ki sister haina..they both laughs.

Raman tells her to go foundation for arrangements and he will come with aarav and megha together at function time.entire day ishitha is busy in work and raman is busy with aaravs work.

How is it friends..

Thankyou all..

Hello friends..here is the next part.

Part 22:

At evening mi&mi meeting in hotel.

Mi&mi are sitting near a table and they both are very excited to expresee their feelings with eachother.but mihir is confused ,because of mihika came with yellow roses on hands.they both are kept silent for some time.

Mihika:you know,some strange thing happened today,that never happens until now.

Mihir:what?

Mihika:we are not fighting today up to now...

Mihir:ya some times wonders happens..

Mihika:you said,you want to talk with me?

Mihir:ya actually I want to say something...same time rahul comes and stands before them.

Rahul:sorry mihika..late hogayi..

Mihika:it's ok.please come sit.

Rahul:hi mihir.how r u?

Mihir:gets irritated.but with fake smile..hi rahul.

Rahul:mihika tumne bathaya nahi mihir bhi tumhare saath aane vaali hai.

Mihika:actually aaj mihir aur mera dinner meeting hai,and you also call me at the same time.so I decides why can we all meet together.

Mihir(st):tho madam mere liye nahi aayi..ye rahul ke liye aayi..

Rahul mobile rings and leaves from there asking them wait for some time.

Mihir:mihika,I have a some urgent work,I have to leave now.

Mihika:aise kaise,tum mujse kuch bath karni thina..

Mihir:mai bool gaya..

Mihika:tum gajini hai kya..teeke,but I want to talk with you today.please wait for some time.

Mihir:teeke bol kya baath hai?

Mihika:actually the matter is,ye rahul haina,mujse pyar kartha hai,vo kayi bar muje propose kiya,but thab muje pyar ke bhare me kuch interest nahi hai.lekin ab rahul ne phirse muje propose kiya.lekin iss bar mai unko mere dil ka baath bathana chahtha hoon..

Mihir:with irritated and angry voice..tho mai kya karoo yaha,background music play karna hai kya..

Mihika:nahi,you only friend to me here in delhi,I want to you here with me.

Mihir(st):are mihir .aisa situation dushman ko bhi nahi aane anhi chahiye.

Mihir:sorry mihika,I have to go now.

Mihika:please mihir mere liye..she holds his hand..

Rahul comes and sits.

Mihika:rahul.tumne kuch bolana,maine vuske bare me soch liya.she gives flowers to him.i am sorry rahul.maine tume hamesha mera friend ki tarah mantha hoon aur kuch nahi..i am sorry rahul.

Mihir shocked this time and rahul gets upset and starts moving from there.mihika follows him and says something to him.but mihir could not understand what she is saying.after sometime mihika comes and sits holding her head.

Mihir:what happened mihika,tum kehrayithi tum vuse tumhari dil ki baath bathane vaali thi..

Mihika:ha vahi bolana..

Mihir: you always feels him as a friend , then why are you upset?you said your exact feelings..

Mihika:phir bhi vo mere accha friend haina.i disappointed him.. ye sab tumhari vajah se...

Mihir:ab isme maine kya kiya?

Mihika:mere dil me tum hai,isiliye maine vunka propaosal accept nahi kiya...sab kuch tumhari vajah se.

Mihir:mai kab kaha,mere liye vunko reject karo.jo karna hai tumhari marji.

Mihika:ok..ab javo,bhar bhar kehrayithi na,muje jaana hai,jaana hai.javo yaha se..

Mihir:teeke I am leaving.

Mihika:jaane se phele bill pay karke javo,maine purse nahi lekar aaya.ab rahul bhi chali gayi.

Mihir:what?koi bahar aake purse nahi lekar aathi kya?

Mihika:maine jaldi me bhool gaya..lekin aap dono haina mere saath,tho muje kya jaroorath hai.

Mihir:hamesha boys spend karne ka koi rule hai kya?

Mihika:I don't know,but har ladka kartha haina..

Mihir:whatever..but this is your meeting with rahul.not me..

Mihika:teeke..mai rahul ko call kartha hoon,vo jaroor aayega.vo tumhara jaisa kadoos nahi hai.

Mihir:agar ek aur bar vunke naam bolana mai sach me chali javungi.

Mihika:tum hamesha nonsence disscuss karthi hai.mai ne tume propose kiya aur tumne abhi tak reply bhi nahi kiya.muttal.

Mihir:vo propose nahi kehthi.

Mihika:accha,tho tum bathaovo kaise propose kartha hai.

He immediately comes closer to her and hugs her "I love you mihika","I love you pagal".agar ye public place nahi hothi na kuch aur tareeke se boldoongi.

Mihika: I love to mihir.mera buddu.

They both sits again with opposite eachother.

Mihir:aur ek baath bathaov.reject karne keliye flowers lekar aayi,lekin propose karne keliye nahi.

Mihika:vo bathuth upset hotha haina isiliye...

Mihir:aaj muje confirm hogayi,tum sach me paagal hai.

They both talk together while they are doing dinner.but mihir insists her not to tell any one about this even ishra also.he tells he like this seceret love for some time.mihika first not agrees with this.but for mihir sake she agrees only for 1 month.because she don't want to hide anything from ishra.even mihir also don't want to hide,but this time should become very special to them in future.they spent some more time there and leaves.

At function venue:

Raman comes with along megha and aarav with their dressing and meets ishitha.they all are sit together.all childrens are performed one by one.and at aaravs turn raman is very exicited.

Aarav and megha are performing very well while raman is imagining ishrha together perform in the stage along with them.when the dance performance complete aarav comes and hugs raman,that time raman come back to his sence.he is very happy to do dance with isitha even if it is in imagination.ishitha is also very happy both dad and son due win on her.

Ishitha gets a call from hospital for a emergency case of a child.she informs raman about this.but raman doesn't agrees to go alone in the night.but she insists him to go home with aarav,because they both are very tired.and this emergencies are very common to her in late nights also.

She leaves from there immediately,raman and aarav enjoys some more time and finally they leaves to home.when they are reaching home aarav is already in sleep.raman places aarav in the bed and calls ishitha.she tells it will take another 1 hour time to reach home.raman waits for her on the hall and slowly he went to sleep.after 1 and half hour he wakesup and checks for ishitha.but she is not come yet.he decides to go and pickup her.and same time ishitha starts to leave.she wants to call raman but she don't want to disturb him.she is on the way.and same time raman is calling her mobile,but it says not reachable.and he calls hos landline,but no one response to that.

On the way two people are waiting and asking lift for emergency.one person lay on road another tries to stop vehicles.when ishitha car comes the man stands in middle of the road.she stops the car and asks what happened.that man says his friend got accident and asks her to help him.she immediately get downs from the car with a water bottle and runs towards him.but suddenly that peson stands and watches her and second one stands behind her,they both are rounded her.

Goon 1:sorry madam ji,yaha koi accident nahi huyi hai.

Ishitha:tho aap ko kya chahiye,paise..?

Goon2:nahi madam ji,hume aap chahiye..

Ishitha:kya bakwaas..aap dono dhoor rahiye.

Goons:nahi madam ji,hum kuch nahi karengi aapke saath.hum sirf ladikiyon ko kidnap karke bejthe hai.

Ishitha:agar aap ko paise chahiye tho mai de detha hoon,lekin aap dhoor rahiye.

Goons:nahi madam ji,hum ko lakho rupaya chahiye,ye chota mota nahi.

she immediately tries to call raman,but they both grabs her phone and breaks that phone.they both tries to hold her.but she forcefully against them and runs from there.she is running along the road and they both follows her.suddenly a car comes and hits her .she is not injured but lost her conscious and fell on the road.two men are getdowns from the car and checks her if she got injured heavily.with this the goons runs from there seeing that men.the both tries to wakeup her.and same time raman is reaching that place and sees someone sits on the road and tries to help her.he immediately stops car to help them.but he sees ishitha there in unconscious state.he gets tenced.and calls her again and again.he asks them what happened to her.they explains how some men followed her and she runs and hits the car.raman was more tenced now this time and tries to carry her in shoulders.but she slowly opens her eyes and sees raman.

Ishitha:raman...tum,vo log muje...looks around for them.

Raman:ya I know all,just relax and getup.they gives a water bottle to her and leaves from there.

Raman is annoyed with this and controls his anger.

Raman:are you okay?kuch chot lagi kya?

Ishitha:no raman..lekin muje bahuth darr lagrayithi.

Raman:don't worry, I am withyou.he slowly pick up her in shoulders and makes sit her in the car.they both drives to home.on the way raman is not talking with her and she understands he is annoyed with her.they reach home.he opens car door for her.but she immediately sighns to him carry her in his shoulders.he also silently does his work and carries her and makes her lay on the bed.

Ishitha:raman..aap mujse bath nahi karenge?

Raman:why madam,aapko mujse kya lena dena hai.

Ishitha:kyon raman?aap kyo aise bath karrayithi.

Raman:kyon ki tum mere baath kabhi nahi sunthi na..

Ishitha:mai aap ki haar baath sunthi,except aaj..

Raman:vahi hai,maine kahana akele math javo.late night hai.maine kithne bar bola..tum sunthe nahi.agar aaj kuch hogaya tho..

Ishitha:raman mai kahi baa raise gaya,it is my duty.

Raman:par har vakth nahi hai..

Ishitha:agar aap mere position me hothe tho yahi karthi na..

Raman:vo situation alag hai,aur mai kud ko sambal saktha hoon,tumahari jaise nahi hoon.

This time ishitha gets upset with him.

Ishitha:teeke raman,I am really sorry aap ki baath nahi sunne ki..she immediately turns around to sleep.raman covers her with blanket and switch off the lights and leaves from there to aaravs room.

Next day raman wakes up late and aarav is still sleeping beside him.he is thinking how he is talking nonsence with ishitha night.he wants to say sorry her,he immediately goes to their room but he is not findind her there and comes to kitchen.but there also she is not.he finds a note on dining table.

Ishitha:raman,I am going hospital.breakfast is ready.please make ready aarav and drops him at school..bye.

Raman(st):lagtha hai madam mujse naraj hai.cholo beta ab kam karo..

They both got ready and reaches their destinations.

Raman in his cabin and thinking how to say sorry.he calls her mobile but it switched off.

Mihir enters raman cabin with very happy face.

Raman:kya huva bhai,face ithna chamak rayithi kisi ladki ne kiss kiya kya?

Mihir:ha bhai..

Raman:accha koun hai vo duffer ladki tume kiss kiya?

Mihir:ha bhai,meri dreamgirl ne aaj muje neend me kiss kiya.ye sab chodo,aap ka face ithna fadeout kyon hai?kisi project me problem?

Raman:ye office matter nahi hai,tumhara bhabhi ki vajah se..

Mihir:bhabhi kabhi bhi kisi ko nahi pareshan nahi karthi.jaroor aap ka problem hai.

Raman:teeke koi bhi,mai vuse sorry bolna chahtha hoon,lekin vuska phone switched off hai.

Mihir:tho landline karo.

He immediately calls to landline but nurse pickups the phone.

Raman:hello ishitha.,I am sorry...why is your mobile switched off.

Nurse:sir,maam busy hai,aur vuska phone switch off nahi hai.vuska phone kahi miss gaya hai.aap chahe tho mai aap ka message pahunchtha hoon.aap koun hai?

Raman:no need,thankyou.

Mihir:kya huva bhai?

Raman:mai bhool gaya,ishitha ka phone kal raat miss goyayi.tu ek kam kar.tum ishitha ko ek acchese mobile bhejo along with a sorry card.and send these along with somebody personally.

After sometime a man came to hospital with a gift pack .he hands to ishitha.she asks him to wait for some time.she opens the card and sees a sorry message.and she opens the gift pack and sees mobile.but she hands it to that person to return him.

The man comes and gives back it to mihir,and mihir informs about this to raman.

Raman again calls hospital landline nurse informs ishitha is not there because she don't have any appointments today . she is leaving home early.he immediately reaches home sees ishitha is in kitchen work.he goes to dining table and sits, watching her.after 5 mins she comes with 2 cups of coffee and sits beside him.and places a cup before him.

Raman:takes cup and sips. I am sorry ishitha.

Ishitha:maine already accept kiya.

Raman: i want to talk with you from morning.

Ishitha:ha,nurse ne bola,kisi aadmi ne phone karke sorry bola.

Raman:lekin tumne kyon phone vapas bheja..

Ishitha:maine internet me check kiya,vuska features muje acchi nahi lagi..

Raman:what?maine pyar se bheja aur tum features ko dekrayithi.

Ishitha:vo aap nahi,mihir ne bheja..i know

Raman:lekin tume kaise batha.

Ishitha:vus card me I am sorry babhi likrayithi,sahyad mihir ne bhool gaya hoga..

raman: oh god...ithna duffer kaise ho yaar.mihika sahi kehrayithi.idiot..

precap:aarav jasoosi at mi&mi love story.

how is it friends..

sorry if I disappoint you all and for baby steps of ishra love,but I will try to make good next part.

Please add your comments.

Thankyou all...

I was been upset for 3days for delay of u r update. Honestly after reading the two parts I was been happy.nice story. Keep going.

both the parts were awesome... am sorry bhabhi... dat was too hialrious..🤣

Originally posted by: nagsuma

Ishitha:vus card me I am sorry babhi likrayithi,sahyad mihir ne bhool gaya hoga..

🤣 ...MIHIR is sucha Budd !!>...

Thnx for the PM...COntinuue soon ...!!

Awww 2parts great n loving the story as it is moving hope to see romantic moment btw them n mi-mi confess was really awesome plsss continue soon

thnkx fr double updte...