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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

Hi,

In my persuit of intensity, a thought triggered me to write the following, I know it's very short and it might not make sense.

Criticism is welcome too :)

Love

Amna

Edited by aaminah123 - 10 years ago

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

awww it was amazing hun❤️
beautifully written👏
loved it

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Abhijeet

@abhi2211

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

hope aisa hota ...but cv's ruin everything and show also

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Arshi

@Arshi-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully written OS..
Loved it !
Thanks for treating us an amazing Os 😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

I liked it. The guilt in Raman was beautifully portrayed and loved the way Ishita cared for him even when she's angry at him.

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

gah this is just what I need after such a yucky episode!

loved it!

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

extremelyy brilliantt!!!! loved it completely! hope cvs read this.. this would have been the most apt scene in the serial.. goshh!!! amazingg hun!

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RheaSh

@RheaSh

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow..excellent OS. Superbly written.
After a trash kinda episode, your OS is such a relief!

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Yeh kya tha Amna?? 😲 Poetry!!!! The images in my mind flowed as easily as the words 👏

Coming to the OS, superb. The thoughts from Raman were heart touching
"What he preferred now was something much stronger to make him oblivious of the pain not only of his injuries but also of his heart. "

Beautiful choice of words.

"It had taken all her courage and strength to not forgive him then and there but seeing him now in such state, she couldn't ignore him. "

Something so simple which can change the perception for the other person.

So so loved the development you showed here. Please writer ban jao yaar !

It was short 😳 but loved it to the core. 😳

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#10

that last line 👏 poignant pov of married relationship
lovely and loved it!

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