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Sunita

@avni_19

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

The bestest among all ur other stories! I loved each and every line u mentioned in the story. Ishita's views abt Raman's honesty was the top best! Hw well she understands him!

Brilliantly and Beautifully written!

Do write more!

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Aditi Sharma

@AditiDoc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

That was so cute and emotional! Hats off to your beautiful writing!

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

This was simply beautiful... ⭐️

The best part about the OS was the understanding.. Be it Ishita understanding him or the part where Bala reads through their emotions..Though it wasn't a scene but that small part was very thoughtful.. Somehow I always thought of him being the person to make them realize their love.. Nevertheless, the story seems to be going somewhere else in the show..😆
Back to the OS, the conversation between them was beautiful.. Be it his confession or her assurance to him.. Nothing was said, yet they said it all.. ❤️ The kiss, the perfect ending.!

Thank you for the wonderful OS Lucky.!! 😃

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

awww Lucky u added Bala.. my bala ☺️

thank u re 🤗 , that's what u were talking abt na ?

back to story.. super amazing lucky..

damn m so missing my IshRa 😭😭😭

i so so so wish to see such sensible emotional track and not some funny clownish acts and over mani jaap...

aww Bala noticed them. my old wala Bala, i miss him too :(

loved their conversation...

loved it lucky

and must say i love ur song selections.. this song is beautiful...

aur han really sorry for reading it soo late

😳😳

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Thank You Sneha😊

You know I debated whether I should use the song that we discussed about earlier... But I was not 100% convinced, so I use this one... I still have that one in mind though 😳

Thanks so much. But I think the song should wait a little more. However enjoyable, these are scenes just for the sake of scenes. I am a little confused as to who the leads are. Ishita and Raman or Mihika and Mani? I don't generally bother about such stuff because after all it was to show how Ishita and Raman's relationship is changing. But it has become a tiny bit difficult to tolerate. I hope Mani leaves soon and then I'll enjoy watching those lovebirds completely.

Edited by Metamorphmagus - 10 years ago

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: avni_19
The bestest among all ur other stories! I loved each and every line u mentioned in the story. Ishita's views abt Raman's honesty was the top best! Hw well she understands him!

Brilliantly and Beautifully written!

Do write more!

Thank You Sunita 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: AditiDoc
That was so cute and emotional! Hats off to your beautiful writing!

Thanks Aditi 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
This was simply beautiful... ⭐️

The best part about the OS was the understanding.. Be it Ishita understanding him or the part where Bala reads through their emotions..Though it wasn't a scene but that small part was very thoughtful.. Somehow I always thought of him being the person to make them realize their love.. Nevertheless, the story seems to be going somewhere else in the show..😆
Back to the OS, the conversation between them was beautiful.. Be it his confession or her assurance to him.. Nothing was said, yet they said it all.. ❤️ The kiss, the perfect ending.!

Thank you for the wonderful OS Lucky.!! 😃

Thank You so much... Bala is one smart and keen cupid for IshRa 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Rusira
👏 WoW Amazing

Thank You 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: FieryLioness
awww Lucky u added Bala.. my bala ☺️
thank u re 🤗 , that's what u were talking abt na ?
back to story.. super amazing lucky..
damn m so missing my IshRa 😭😭😭
i so so so wish to see such sensible emotional track and not some funny clownish acts and over mani jaap...
aww Bala noticed them. my old wala Bala, i miss him too :(
loved their conversation...
loved it lucky
and must say i love ur song selections.. this song is beautiful...

aur han really sorry for reading it soo late
😳😳

Thanks Meet 😛 Yes Madam... aur kya 😆

no problem with the delay... I just wanted you to see the Bala para thats all 😉