OS: Naam Ada Likhna - Page 11

Originally posted by: _Divya_

OMG! Lucky! m touched! ❤️

Wat a b'ful piece of writing yaar.. too GOOD! 👏

Agar iska 5% bhi show mei dikha de naa toh mai khush ho jau! 😃

lovely OS!!! 😃

do write more! 😳

n d quote!!! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: -Hima-

Nice Lucky! IshRa on same bed and their hearts talk in the dark silence of the night.. loved the meaningful words said to each other!👏

Originally posted by: RheaSh

Beautiful OS, loved it. 😃

Originally posted by: florine_20

Beautiful

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome os

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

sorry for the late comment...I was writing something on the same lines and was a little scared if I would get influenced by ur writing...from past works of urs I know its nothing different from magical...so I didnt read it till now...😊

Now I read it...its awesome...loved the most natural kiss from Raman...

and not to mention about their conversation...so true and heart felt! loved it! ❤️

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Aww Lucky! This was a very sweet OS perfect for the silent beauty of the song which happens to be one of my favouriates. I think you put it beautifully through Ishita how Raman is a very good husband. His goodness lies in his honest, straightforward behaviour and simple, short sentences that sum up everything. Yes, he is rude to her and sometimes it becomes unacceptable but when you consider Raman as a whole, all of it seems insignificant. And that kiss, such perfect timing. It felt natural. Great job!

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Lucky u wrote??? After ages it seems to me.

I am reserving. I will come back from work n read it.

Lucky do me a favour. Pm me when u write. Do I have to remind u that u r one of my fav??