New ff: ~ Daddy Of My Baby? ~/Note(pgno 40) 17/1 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story line. Look great please continue soon.Love Raman and Ruhi part.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this story is realy interesting.. plz update soon *waiting*
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Originally posted by: pinkydreams

this story is realy interesting.. plz update soon *waiting*



Am sry for keeping u wait
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Originally posted by: yhmfan1

good start..

pls continue



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thnx buddy😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Ohh my...
That was such a adorable update.! I freaking loved it...⭐️
Ru and Raman are damn adorable.. I laughed so hard reading the line where he says she cannot bump into him cause she comes upto his knee.. 🤣 Their banter was so cute..fire cracker 😆

Ohh Raman feels the pull towards Ishu..Awesome.! I can't wait to read what happens next.. 😳

Please update the next part soon and thanks for the PM 😃



thaanku soo much for comenting anu...😃
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Originally posted by: usaonly

Awesome story line. Look great please continue soon.Love Raman and Ruhi part.😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankitasidana

that was so so sweet
raman and ruhi...awww
loved it...thnks 4 pm buddy
sorry 4 late rply



Thnks for comment dear 😊.. Plz dn't be sory for being late to a very late updater like me🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I knew that I'm vry late...I can't tell you reasons except a heartful sorry, cause i sholdn't have started this when I can't be regular. When this concept came into mind I was just not able to come out of it .So I have started it.


The much delayed update is here finallyy...

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CHAPTER 2

If only there wasn't any chocolate milkshake exist in this world he wouldn't have became her enemy.It's funny how a mere chocolate milkshake made them as enemies.Everything would have been different otherwise.

His most favorite,exquisite,imported pretty pretty shoes didn't even get a single sorry from that firecracker- after soaking in chocolate milksh...

Shit!!!

He doesn't want to recall that disaster again. Raman is typing something on his laptop.The key that he is pressing most of the times is backspace and the reason is he couldn't concentrate on whatever he is typing.

It has been three days since Ruhi and Ishita came into his house.

His lavish,cold and isolated house suddenly seemed like a home to him as there are two other souls accompanying him.

In these three days whatever things happened between Raman and Ruhi are only other reasons to separate them. Raman realized Ruhi is everything that he can't handle. How much he loves kids If only they are quite. But kids and quite is a rare combination, And in Ruhi case quite is an impossible word.

Raman's phone rang several times before he looked at the screen which is showing five missed calls from his mom. He cursed himself for not attempting. He called back to her.It's been three days that he called her. No matter how busy he is, he never missed to call her. But he forgot to call her these three days.

"Raman,this weekend... You are coming here right.." that's what he listened her saying, as her very first words. Raman's parents are living in Lucknow, his hometown. They are too attached to the place to move on to Mumbai. "No maa..I don't think I can come..." he replied, preparing himself to answer her next question, as he already knew what it is."What do you mean by you don't think.. Its been a month that you are postponing, saying that you are busy, you have promised me that you will definitely come this weekend..." he heard her little angry tone. "Maa try to understand .. I have guests at my place..they are new to Mumbai, I can't leave them alone" he replied in a persuasive tone.

"Guests?" Mrs.bhalla wondered who can be the guests that her son is talking about. She very well knew that if they are related to his profession he would have kept them in a hotel room and most of his friends are living in Mumbai so they can't be his guests either. "Maa its Ishita and her daughter.." he replied laconically."Ishita means Shagun's sister???" she guessed,surprised better say shocked."haaa.."raman replied in a single word not wanting to elaborate.

Raman is very close to his mom, he is always comfortable sharing anything with her. When he was in a relationship with Shagun his mom was the first person who was told about that.. and she was Okay with the thing as she also liked Shagun.

"Maa I will talk to you again..bye"he said and pressed the red button.He is in no mood to explain to his mom besides he himself doesn't know much about Ishita. Raman put the phone aside and re-focused on his work.

"RB .. Rbbb..." He listened Ruhi's shouting coming from nowhere.

Oh no, I don't want to mess up with her. By the way why she is coming this early morning He wondered and can't even imagine whats going to happen because she is unpredictable, every time comes up with a new idea to irritate him.
When her voice became louder and nearer,Raman looked up to see,that Ruhi is holding a coffee cup with her both hands as if it is world cup or something. Her whole concentration is on the cup only and she is taking baby steps, balancing the cup in her hands.

Its better to act like ignore her he thought and looked back at his laptop screen.

Raman is acting like that he is very busy but he is observing her from corner of his eye. How can he ignore her she is too cute to ignore.He noticed that her expressions are calm and serene which is unusual thing. It seemed like she is in a good mood. Ruhi put the cup on the table with utmost care beside his laptop .She had completed her task succesfully,now she is again in her own care free way, swinging her hands to and fro, biting her lips for no reason.

"Mumma is busy in kitchen .. so she told me to give your coffee.." she said showing the cup on the table and tilting her face one side which is her signature gesture that he secretly likes. He just nodded.. finally looking at her, completely and officially.He thought that she will leave or he wanted her to leave. But to his disappointment she didn't.

His pink color file attracted her so she took it in her hands and flipping the pages. Don't touch the words popped in his brain immediately but didn't came from his mouth. He knew that she will definitely does the things if he say don't. The sound of turning pages scaring him as it is related to a project for which he is working very hard.

Divert her...He thought."Why are you calling me as RB..."he asked randomly, he really wanted to know it anyway.She looked at him leaving the file before replying "That's what your name right...and I know that RB stands for Rama.. Rava... whatever that mumma calling you I don't like it..."

Did she just say that she don't like his name. Raman looked at her, unbelievable.No one ever dare to say this to him.

"Why are you staring at me like that.. I called you RB.. I didn't call you as Monkey ..cat.. dog... elephent.. crocodile... gwguvfc..bwhfyws...bwhvfc--------- ------------------------

Heck!!! She is bringing Animal planet ...

He just wanted to close her mouth with his palm as tight as he can.. but he closed his own ears with his own hands before saying the only thing he wanted to say right at the moment. Shut up.. S.H.U.T U.P...he said stressing on each syllable still closing his ears. But Ruhi didn't stop,now she is saying some birds names too.After some unbearable moments for Raman she bacame silent as she is tired and she turned back to leave.

Thank god she is leaving he thought removing his hands.He took his coffee cup, now he really needs that coffee so he sipped a bit.

"Why are you drinking like a dog?" he choked out the coffee at the instant he listened her saying this.Ruhi is at door step peeking into his room.He can only see her face.

He is the man who was featured in Business man curry.com as Hottest look of RB while drinking hot coffee... But here this firecracker is saying that he is drinking like a dog.

"Oh sorry I was wrong you are drinking like a kitten actually...
Meow..."she said before escaping from there.

Now this is the point that he lost his control.. He ran past to her to catch but fate has some other plans for him. He bumped into Ishita who just
came there to check weather he got his coffee or not.
Raman and Ishita fall on the floor,she on top of him.One shouldn't think about the logic that how can it be possible because it's something magical may be his instinctive protectiveness towards her made him hold her in a way that she shouldn't hurt cause of hard floor. She has the most beautiful skin he noticed. Her unbelievably long eyelashes are fluttering like butterflies. He felt that watching her this close is something very different. Her light blue color eyes are very attractive and they are expressing nothing but void. He used to think that he can assess anyone but for Ishita its just didn't work.This mysteriousness of her is only fascinating him more but he didn't understand why he is feeling very awkwrd around her. It's just not of him.

"Raman.. "he heard her feeble voice.She is wriggling off his hold. The awkwardness that he is feeling is reflected in her eyes too...

Damn It !!! what I am doing enough with the awkwardness.

say something ..
say something ..
say something ..

"Do you have a map" finally he said, "Huh?" Ishita replied unable to comprehending what he is up to.

"Because I lost in your eyes.."He completed his sentence. It took 2minutes for her to understand what he said and she immediately laughed out...she is laughing uncontrollably amid moving away from him, as his hold on her loosened.

"Oh my God Raman.. "her voice is all breathy she is still laughing sitting on the floor and holding her stomach.

"Do you have a map? Because I lost in your eyes such a cheesy line it is..."she said in between her laughter.

Finally she stood up still laughing."Anyway I have prepared breakfast for you plz come..."she said before leaving.

WOww seems like things are becoming normal.. He thought before standing up.
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"Mumma I am getting bored at home I too want to come with you plz.."
Ruhi asked Ishita at breakfast table."No Ruhi.. I have already said you.. Its not the place that you can come. Its just some days so be a good girl,stay at home. Now eat your food" Ishita replied sternly.

"RB.. can I come with you, to your office.." now she asked Raman who sat opposite to her and trying hard to eat the omelet and toast in his plate.


"Nooo.. "he almost shrieked which made Ishita to look at him with surprise."I mean it will be more boring to you if you come to my office" he explained to Ruhi. No way in the world that he let her come with him to his Office.It is the only place that he is being in peace these days.How can he spoil it too.


"I am sorry Raman.. I know that you like aloo & puri but I dunno how to made" Ishita said to Raman who is playing with his fork in the plate but not eating. "It's okay..not a big deal"he replied.

"I will learn, once priya returns.." she said.The only maid in his house Priya is in leave."I can teach you how to make poori If you don't mind.."he said. "Its really fine .. haa... this weekend I will be free ...What say.."she replied with a little excitement."Yeah sure.."he replied without thinking anything else.Its something about them...that they are conversing like normal people now.. which they didn't do before ...maybe its because falling on the floor together or else its aftermath where there is an outstanding dialogue mentioned by Mr.Raman Bhalla.

"Wowww RB... You know how to make pooruuu..." Ruhi said in an excitement as she listening the new things that Raman and Ishita are discussing. She likes new things.

"Its not pooru Miss.firecracker.. Its poori P..OO..R..I... come on spell it" Raman said it in a teasing tone, grabbing the opportunity that he got to tease her.

Now he really has to show his culinary skills... To this firecracker.

She might not understood his business management skills.But he could impress her by his poori-making-skills at least.

Its when Raman realized that he wants to impress Ruhi- which means he is liking her and he wants her to like him tooo...

To be cntd...

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I dunno why I wrote falling on the floor scene... as if we haven't already watched many,in so many television soaps..I myself feeling that it as funny wriritng it, cause I used to watch with oh-really look..whenever that kindaa scenes shown in television.. but today I wrote the same thing.

This story is much more than what's just happening now.. I really want you to be with me till the end... excusing my lateness in updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved it...it was awesom...
ishra felling on each othr...too romntic..
raman lines of map...wah...wah...
nd ruhi's antics nd raman's irritation wrth reading...
pls update nxt part as soon as poss...

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