New ff: ~ Daddy Of My Baby? ~/Note(pgno 40) 17/1 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Amazing start...
Ishita as Shagun's sis..wow..completely different.. Interesting concept..
Looking forward to the next part.. Continue soon... 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
When will you update nxt...?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii... Am I earlyy???🤣 I know..Iam not.. any way here is the 1st chapter which can make you fear😆



CHAPTER 1



Raman was dressed in a fine gray suit, white shirt, and black tie...

He is waiting at the airport since 1hour 35minutes 26seconds...It's not because he came before the time, It's because the flight which is carrying the person, whom he has to receive is delaying.Even though he was informed at the inquiry about the delay of the flight about two hours, he stayed there only ... for reasons unknown.

How she looks like??????

He saw Ishita photos when Shagun had shown him some of their family photos.. but what he remember is How Shagun's face used to beam with happiness when she was showing the pics to him , but Ishita???

He remember slightly.. Ishita has two eyes..., one nose... one...- that's what he remember. He don't remember anything else and whatever he remember is not helping him to articulate anything.

confusion, anticipation,excitement..even more confusion.

He stood up from the chair to alleviate his tension... opened his phone to see three unread messages and all are from his Personal Assistant Lyra...Not to mention she is very hot.Without opening he can say that's about meeting related to damn important deal which he left up in the air.. since he is succumbed to this receiving thing .He already said to Lyra not to disturb him.. because that's what she usually does- disturbing him.


Raman saw a group of Air Hostess, who are off from their duty, stood at some distance from him.They are talking and smiling seeing at him in between.

They know himmm?????
Of course they know him.

They know Bill gates...

They know Tom Cruise..
.
.

They know.. RB aka Raman Bhalla.


One of the Air hostess from the group came to Raman and stood before him .

"Hi! RB... you are looking very handsome" she said with an admiring look.

He moved a step forward..gave a quick kiss on her cheek before saying "thanks beautiful !!!" with a giga-watt-patented-Raman Bhalla's smile.

She smiled back at him. She hasn't surprised by his reaction because that's how RB is popular of.A very cool & playful young business man having the qualities completely opposite to most of the successful business men supposed to have like ruthless,arrogant,egoistic.. etc.. etc.

Of course he behaves in a way all serious about his work but he is a very cool person in remaining times.

But he never ever crosses his limits.

He doesn't like too much interference in his life even though he is socially very active.Everything in his life is in control.. when to wake up.. what to do and what not... when to go for parties ..when to go for conference..what to eat...How much air to breath... wait...H..how much air to breath???????? Oh God! He is a control freak.

But today of the all days he is feeling like he is lasting his control over his life.

Like they say...Life is a bitch!!!...

It can makes you play a game... that you don't have control over...the game- that you don't even know how to play.
And worst thing is that you may not even be given a chance to say pause and quit it in the middle.

Now It's Raman's turn to play..The game what life is making him to play...

He glanced at his black berry.

yayyy!!! 2hrs completed.

2hrs 1sec...

2hrs 2sec...
..
..
2hrs 1min 3sec... he is literally counting time in nano seconds.

Why they told It's just a 2hrs delay.. He wanted to sue the airport authorities for this further delay..

It's when his BB rang. For a second he thought that it may be Ishita but he can't think any more it's as Ishita because he already read the caller name.It is that Lyra-

He received the phone call with least interest.

"How many times I have to tell you... since I have to receive some one, am not coming to office"he said ,exasperated.

"Sirr... when will you come???.I mean... to plan your schedule...

Can I come there.. to give you company... I mean you may need something sooo..." She is asking whatever she wanted to ask ignoring whatever he said.

"Oh...come on !!!! concentrate on work Lyra...Not on me..." He hissed. "At least occasionally..." he added

"OKAY SIR!" she replied with utter sincerity even though she is not going to do that.


"Sir.. but whom are you receiving?" she is not going to leave him that soon.


"Its my... my...Angelina Jolie... do you have any problem???? "he said... Irritated.

"Wh... whattt ? Sir Is she going to be our new brand ambassador... Its amazinggg sir.."

She is blabbering... but he is not listening anymore.. because now he is watching Angelina Jolie who is coming towards him walking briskly..

When she came nearer to him..he realized she is not Angelina Jolie.. she is looking even more beautiful...but he saw her somewhere... her eyes ,nose ...

Bang on!

It's Ishita, his subconscious discovered- The second greatest discovery in the world as the first one is Colommbus discovery of America.

Ishita...his lips instinctively made this sound which is only audible to him.

" I will call you back..bye." he said to stil-blabbering-lyra and pressed the red button.

He looked at Ishita again.Her dress sense is impeccable.

Her sleeve less chocolate colour top is contrasted perfectly with her skirt and she wore chunky brown earrings .Her entire outfit is chocolate coloured which is contrasting very well with her milky white skin. She looked edible and drinkable resembling chocolate milkshake.

As He remain lost in her looks,his foot suddenly slammed against something- something soft.He stumble into a slushy part of some liquid.

Freaking hell!

Its chocolate milkshake in real...
Spilled all over his shoes.. he likes to drink chocolate milkshake but...chocolate milk shake -on his shoes- in the middle of the airport...

He felt very odd...

It's when he saw a small baby ,between Ishita and him whom he hadn't observed before as he is busy in checking out Ishita.A bottle of ready-to-drink chocolate milkshake precariously balanced in her hands.Now he understood ...she is the culprit ...

He saw that baby is drinking her milkshake not caring to say sorry to him which made Raman very furious.

"You did this??? " Raman asked grumpily.

"Its because you bumped into me" she replied

Bumped into her ??? how can he?? she is just his Knee level height..

"You should say sorry.. "he demanded.

"Excuse me ,It's your fault...because of you.. I lost my milkshake...you have to say sorry" she said showing him her half filled bottle.


"Do you know who am I?RB.. Raman Bhalla..." Raman said forgetting the fact that kids don't watch Business channels...they just watch cartoon channels and read comic books so there is a no way that she recognizes his greatness and says sorry to him.


"So whattt?

My name is Ruhi .. My friends calls me Ruh... Shourya calls me minnie because I call him as mickey... and my neighbour aunty calls me..."

"Fire cracker..." Raman completed her sentence."everyone should call you as fire cracker... because you are the one" he said sarcastically.

Ruhi felt humiliated every one calls her with sweetie... cutie...kinda of names, but he called her... fire cracker...

Now she felt she is loosing the battle and she used the weapon that every kid uses at this time...

"I will tell to my mumma..." she said and turned back "see mumma..." she complained to Ishita who is watching all the drama amusingly.

Mumma? Mumma? Mumma?... Raman was shocked listening this five letter word he stood stand still.


According to the things whatever he know about Ishita she may be around 21 or 22 years old.
Then how can it be possible that she is mother of some 4 to 6 years old kid.. He is not good at predicting the kids age.. especially the kid before him is looking like 4 but behaving like 6...no Its better to say that she is behaving like 26.

"I am sorry Raman.. she is soo stubborn.." finally Ishita spoke to him.

It took some minutes to him to compose himself and to say "It's OKAY".


Some more questions are added to Raman's question paper...because of this new revelation.He can't ask all those at airport.

"Let's go..." he said to Ishita .


Ruhi and Ishita are following Raman . Some how Ruhi didn't like to follow him , so she ran to him and started to walk beside him..and she is taking big big steps to match with his pace.Raman looked over his shoulder to see ruhi.. raised his eye brow.

Ishita giggled seeing both of them.

Raman looked back to see at Ishita.. He stared at her...He felt a strong pull towards her,not because she is looking beautiful..

Its because he is getting that feeling that he is seeing her ...in a way nobody can see her..seeing inside of her ,her soul. This very surreal feeling confused him.

He looked at Ruhi, who is looking very cute but not giving any chance to love her.

He felt that his life is messed up- messed up in a most possible beautiful way.

To be cntd...


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Edited by Spana_stylo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Hey... nyce update... nw I understood y u chose this title for ur story... tht conversation btwn ruhi n raman ws too gud... ruhi is jus like her father... stubborn... haha...😉😆😛
Edited by friendofall - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: friendofall

Hey... nyce update... nw I understood y u chose this title for ur story... tht conversation btwn ruhi n raman ws too gud... ruhi is jus like her father... stubborn... haha...😉😆😛



Thnkuuu 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Ohhoo u stopped at wrong place! Lol

Finaly Ishra met! Cont soonn! Cant wait anymore! ;-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow yar...thts amzng...loved arman charctr in dis...nd ruhi...aww she is givng tuff competition to RB...looks lik much mre intrstng ahaed...thnkx fr pm...eagrly waitng fr nxt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
superb post ... luved Ruhi (fire cracker) ;) n RB ... :) continue sooon ... n do pm me ... plz ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
pm me
was a very nice start

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashiqua

Continue and plz pm me...



i will pm u😃

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