New ff: ~ Daddy Of My Baby? ~/Note(pgno 40) 17/1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: vidpz
It's okay, plz get your time but update this story soon!

Thanku soo much for understanding n your interest dear.. 😊

Err.. that 'soon' word in u'r comment is scaring me little 😛😭😆😭

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

SNEAK PEEK

Everything in his mind,body and soul told him that he should hold her.

He immediately pulled her in a hug which was taken by her as a surprise.It is too sudden for her to react anything.She is numb and the only thing that she can feel at the moment was him.His hands circled around her waist.His chin on her shoulder.Each passing second is making his grip on her more."Are you Okay?" finally she whispered. How can she ask that?Didn't she know that he is not okay?

She can feel his dangerously shivering body against hers.She can feel his hot,uneven breath at the nape of her neck.She can feel him hide his face in her hair like small kids do when they are fearing for some thing.She can feel him trying to sink in her more and more so that he can lost himself.All these things of him making her know that his situation is anything but fine. Then how can she ask that silly question "are you okay?" when the answer is the obvious to her.

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pinkydreams

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Soo finally you are here...

Thnks for the update.. I didn't understand but I can wait for the full chapter...

seem's like it's intense one..

plz update as early as possible...

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akdhalover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Plz pm me whenver you update itz amazing!😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: pinkydreams
Soo finally you are here...

Thnks for the update.. I didn't understand but I can wait for the full chapter...

seem's like it's intense one..

plz update as early as possible...

🤗 🤗🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: akdhalover
Plz pm me whenver you update itz amazing!😳

Thank you dear!

Will pm u for sure...

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resh.rose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

thnx for updating

I felt the hug scene was too early.. I mean according to the story progressed till chapter3.. well I think , hv to wait for the full one...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: resh.rose
thnx for updating

I felt the hug scene was too early.. I mean according to the story progressed till chapter3.. well I think , hv to wait for the full one...

Umm...I knew it can make you feel like that.. hope I can write the next one plausible enough to made
you believe n feel it real...