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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: usaonly
Beautiful story Aani. I don't know in the real story Raman will buy Ishu a new car for her or not. He really takecare of her need in your story including emotionally.So sweet of him.😊

thanks dear 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Arooj.M
Aani, this was amazing! I loved the double meaning's behind their words and the last scene was just sooo cute! Raman's unheard confession ... ❤️

thanks Arooj 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: rutu83
just need to get this out of the way: raman's shy dimpled smile is going to be the end of me! i nearly melted there 😳😆

difference in questions from ishita about crying:
for romi= "romi cried?"
for raman= "you must have cried too?"
lol- no wonder the guy glared at her 😆😆

loved the double meaning of their talks - it really shows your mettle as writer. while most manage for few dialogues, having the whole os based on it is far more difficult than it looks. add to that, keeping ishra in character! brilliant job 👏⭐️

Hey Rutu thanks

@bold - 😆 you aint alone so dont worry

@red - 🤣 glad you caught onto that yep the glare was not unwarranted one showed surprise the other question was a tease 😉😆

@blue - ☺️ thank you.. where convos are needed they cant be done away with and this is IMO a convo they need to have 😳

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Prriyam

@Prriyam

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Wow! What a piece of writing and a perfect way of handling it. Simple, poignant, complex all at once.

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

I absolutely loved it! I mean such a well written piece of work, letting go of old things to create new one, which you amazingly explained in context of that car. Brilliant :)

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: lourel24
Superb n beautiful.Their convo while ishu was distributing choco was so reflective.

thanks Lourel 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Ppramod
Soo good OS. Truely heart touching,and I liked how you connect a old car to old memory and let it go

thanks Pramod 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
Beautiful Aani. I simply loved the last part. Superb⭐️

thanks Hema 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: -Smiles-
AWWW that was SOOO CUTE especially the end!! You write so well!!

thanks dear 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: FieryLioness
beautiful OS Aani...
loved it how Raman's knows in and out of Ishita ..
loved the end how they almost confessed their feelings...
gud work Aani 👍🏼

thanks Meet 😊