A Streetcar Named Desire - IshRa OS

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vasantha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

yaar aani how could u write so well yaar...

with every piece of your work you make me amaze with ur writing, ur quotes in the start, and the words and the situations u handle it with so ease...

BTW.. this one into my favourites... 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: aarohi26
anothr marvelous piece of writing frm u. u really made simple things vry beautiful md grew romance in simple gestures. thanx for pm

thanks Aarohi 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Colt.Pixy
wow aani , i loved convo and subtle hints indicated in those statements

"Goodbyes are easy when you are prepared for them."
"They do ease the process a little bit."
in which you brought your title line "Some things are hard to let go of."
indicating past feelings of both of them that they could not move on from past very easily because they were also not prepared and changes in their life they never knew before about, i loved it. makes me remind of Vanny 😳
and last few lines from she was very comfortable is just fabulous.

thanks a lot Zene 😊

The past could be feelings, memories or merely the fear that is inspired by that baggage - like I wrote the hardest part is not letting go of anything in its physical state - the hardest part is to let go of the memories that came with that thing - both the good and the bad -the good make you wonder what went wrong and why, where you failed. The bad ones scar you and stop you from moving on...so in my head this is more about letting go of the fears, the block that stops them from moving on... to bid a farewell you have to close the chapter entirely.

The last thing that you have to overcome is fear 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus
This is what I want to happen in the show, Aani!
I don't want Raman to confess to Ishita yet. He could just do it to himself. I want to see him try to impress her because he wants to see her smile, to woo her and all. Because he cares. I just hope I am right. I don't read spoilers. So, I have no idea what is to happen. Please don't tell me. I'll watch it pan out.
I loved that small gesture with the hair. Divyanka has beautiful hair. I think we should get one scene where the main focus is on her hair.😆 She was looking fantastic on Saturday. So simple. And that hair! It has been on my mind since then. So you'll have to excuse my fixation.😆
Last but not at all the least, that indirect conversation at the end was really wonderful.

thanks Sneha 😊

The confession is not something that I would put my bets on or want to hurry up cause I have faith in the writers but yeah... I do want him to accept the truth to himself which is the BIGGEST thing... Raman is in love and he knows that he is, he knows somewhere his feelings are reciprocated too but he wants Ishita to make the first move and only then act on things but from where she comes from it wont happen - he has done this twice to her already and she has been rejected numerous times not to mention the words he said to her... so yeah he has to admit his feelings to get this show on the road but for that the acceptance has to be made on a personal level first of all.

And yeah I do agree Divyanka has beautiful hair and she is a gorgeous woman god knows why the PH doesnt understand this 😕

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: chennai123
An excellent OS
Car and life! What an anlalogy

thanks hon 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Rozy77
aww, this was so sweet⭐️
fabulous dear👍🏼
beautifully written👏
the 'firsts' of everything are always special and memorable😳
loved their conversations, especially the last one with the double meaning... i was pleasantly surprised

thanks Rozy and yep firsts are special since they don't have a predecessor 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: YhmCraze
wonderful os

thanks dear 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: paru_rox
The parallels you drew between something materialistic and a realtionship was brilliant ... loved this piece of work Aani 👏

thanks Parul 😊