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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Aani - if you think you have lost your marbles writing this, then i am going to hunt them down and put them in me, if that will remotely help me to write so beautifully.

A brilliant show of understanding and care - of fulfilling unspoken desires.

A beautiful way to show how letting go is necessary yet one can store fond memories without getting hurt.

The last 3 lines - very deep, very poignant and LOVED them❤️.

A Perfect one from you again.👏🤗

Edited by swathibalan - 10 years ago

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Beautiful piece of writing...👍🏼

Just awesome..👏👏

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

First of all sorry Aani...i am res-ing everywhere and then conviniently forgetting that res needs to be unres-ed too.😆

Lately all your OSs are playing a havoc on my IshRa obsession. It just increases day by day and then your stories drop in like bombs and my obsession explodes to a all new level ( pardon my poor analogy😆)

Coming to this piece...

I have a question for you dear, what would have happened if her hand wouldnt have caught on to the car door and the alarm would not have gone off.😉...ahem ahem i know it all transcends to readers imagination and thus I am asking this question as a fellow IshRa drooler and not as the ardent fan that I have become of yours.

The parallelism was so distinct and clear that the real meaning of the conversation would not be lost on anyone. Raman came in her life unexpectedly just like the new car that he had booked. She was letting go of the old one so as to adopt the new one as the part of her life. For me the last line stole the show, "So am I Ishita, so am I", wonder if they could show such moments between IshRa. Well even if they dont then thanks heavens, at least we have you. Love you dear, just love you.😳

Edited by Scribble_Tweety - 10 years ago

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RheaSh

@RheaSh

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

This is seriously fantastic. One of the best OS I've ever read in this forum.
Absolutely Loved the insinuating conversation:

"Hmm...but you have to realize at some point the things holding you back, they can't be good...no good thing holds you back and what does isn't good for you."

"I may have not chosen it ...but it doesn't mean it isn't perfect for me. Sometimes the things that are best for you aren't the ones you select but ones that come your way on their own."

"Perfect? It's absolutely the best...I couldn't have selected better myself if I tried."

The whole conversation was like Kahin Pe Nigahe Kahin Pe Nishana.

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appuss

@appuss

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

amazing... loved it so so much😳😳😃

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DiVa

@Dihiva

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Beautifully written Aani! Loved it!

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sophee

@sophee

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awwieee Aani that was simply beautiful 😳 Gave a wonderful, warm feeling throughout and their semi-confession in the end was a cherry on the top! Superb dear 👏

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Arshi

@Arshi-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

"So am I , so am I with this os ! "
beautiful 😊

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Aani .. .a serious suggestion ... please try your hand at professional writing ... having read your work for quite some time now, I can confidently say that you are a genius at every genre and have the capability to hook the viewer with the content ...

Aah this OS ... for the first time the word Double Meaning does not bring weird images ... it brings a smile on my face ... letting go of your old car ...

Woaah .. .the meanings it conveyed ... the way u drew a parallel between this incident and their actual life ... brilliant stuff ...

loved the way u showed Raman decides it on her behalf and she trusts that he will choose the best for her... this is what her dad her done right ... chosen Raman for her and even if he pushed her into it .. it was for her best...

Loved the last line to the bits ... what a beautiful confession (kind of ... )

Am sorry to cut short on my ranting ... but a bad case of food poisoning hit me and I have spent my day being a kumbhakaran and typing also seems like a task at the moment ...

Loved it ... 🤗

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

I sent you a PM as usual, but this one has forced me to break my silence. I couldn't not post here as well...

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You know how I feel about your talent, so I won't gush...

Your OS today has me FLOORED.

I've read everything you've written on the forum, and each piece has always struck a cord...but this one. I have no words. How do you do it?

The entire OS was a double-edged sword; saying goodbye to the old and comfortable, welcoming the new with a renewed hope...a mirror of how their lives intertwined most unexpectedly. I won't go analyzing as the pretext speaks for itself, rather, I need to tell you that I am in awe.

I felt as though I was reading a beautiful poem of two shattered souls that have found healing from and within a source they had never expected...each other.

Words fall short, Aani...I dunno what to say. Your writing is mature, poised, refined...and carries a depth to it which engulfs the reader with poignant emotion.

Hard to choose, but of everything you've written on IshRa this is probably my favorite.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

God Bless,