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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

aww, this was so sweet⭐️
fabulous dear👍🏼
beautifully written👏
the 'firsts' of everything are always special and memorable😳
loved their conversations, especially the last one with the double meaning... i was pleasantly surprised

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

The parallels you drew between something materialistic and a realtionship was brilliant ... loved this piece of work Aani 👏

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Sunshine

@SWAN123

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Really nice one! Thanks for the PM

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arshi33

@arshi33

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

This was really nice...loved it...😃😃

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Krutika

@loveyhmnew

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Just remember these lines for you my favorite writer

"I don't know who you are, where you from, what you do; As long I love your writing"

Please don't take it as a common compliment~ Some one out here is genuinely becoming your fan rather addictive to your stories.❤️❤️❤️

Keep writing👏

Your Addictive Reader,
Krutika Aswale😊

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ishra4ever

@ishra4ever

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

your OS is flawless! Bole toh flawless and perfect than fair-n-lovely creams!😉

na on a serious note, I fall in love with ISHRA all over again whenever I read your OS 😳

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Beautiful as always Aani. Whole of their conversation showed their level of comfort and understanding with each other! The best part was how subtly you displayed their feelings of being in love towards the end!

I haven't had time to read more of your past writing on Ishra since a while. I am sure I have missed out on equally amazing ones! I am looking forward to catching up on them soon! You always do an amazing job! Keep it up! :)

Edited by .ProperPatola. - 10 years ago

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: serendipity.
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OH MY GOD! How beautiful like always, Aani :)
Really, superb. i LOVED LOVED LOVED the convo between IshRa, both, the late night convo in the compound and then the one in the morning, where they.. umm... admit to being in Love 😳 ;)

LOVEDDD Raman here more, as usual :P
and the convo was so beautifully crafted and came with flow. Letting things go aint easy, esp when you have so many memories attached. Beautifully crafted, i say again, Aani :)

very cute. Oh, and now id love you to write something on the current track 😛
Thank you :P

Subbu toh nahi aaya... par... MANI toh hai na!? kaam chala lenge hum 😛

Reens thank you so much 😃 I somehow will always love that walk scene so gave it my own little twist here...and the letting go is the hardest part

As for the J track inspired OS if inspiration strikes I would do that 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Beautiful OS...esp liked the last bit and how they were almost confessing their feelings in the pretext of the car!
loved it!

thanks Vidya 😊 I am a lover of subtext so glad people liked it too in this one 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
omg one of ur best OS...simple things yet u made it EXTRA ORDINARY...esp the last convo..i so got the double meanings n i ws pleasantly surprised to see Raman confessin the TRUTH at end...LOVED this one yaar..!! PERFECT...!!

thanks a lot Nikki 😊

and 😆 double meanings 😆 pls call it subtext my mind runs awry with those words 😉