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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awww beautiful ending
loved it
write more will b waiting


Thank you prachi :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Ahhh, that was such a mind blowing story...
I will be honest..I actually read it twice before posting this comment.. Because it was too beautiful for a one time read.. 😳
Now, I don't have the word to praise your brilliant skills..everything about Ishra, be it their pain, guilt..agony..love was just perfect to the T... Life had been unfair to them but they finally found the happiness they always wanted...
The story itself was a diff concept to begin with and it was even more pleasurable to read in those brilliant words..You really are a brilliant writer. At one point I was really afraid that he was going to force himself upon her in his anger after the truth about Shagun coming out and also him believing Ishita to be cheating on him.. but I was glad that it eventually led to the truth coming out...Both suffered and finally made their way through it..

Well, all's well that ends well..I loved the ending.. A happy family afterall..❤️

Thanks for the beautiful story.. Please add me to your PM list and PM me whenever you start a new story..Would also love to read all your other works..Is there a link where I can find them.?? 😃 Is yes, I would love to have it.!!! Thanks.. 😳

Hey there, I have sent you a pm with the links of my fiction. I hope you like it.

As for this one, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. It was truly a pleasure to carve this story and your comments only boost me to write another one so I guess I will be back soon!

Thank you :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paru_rox

So I start from where I left off in the last update:

War of words & his wife proves to be an equal opponent - now! And his parents just told him about her place in that house, the guy knows he better get his act together at least to an extent 😃

Bwahahaha ...so the tough Mr.bhalla is affected by his wife's presence even though he doesn't want to. And it was amazing how he considered her his wife when there was a whiff of the fact that she might have found solace somewhere else.

Fantastic ... am glad you showed Ishita willing to confront him even after what happened. She recognized the fact that she wanted him too and did not place untoward blame. As for the accident, has guessed this is what happened. But Shagun's betrayal was completely unexpected.
Am glad Ishita showed that she was not longer the naive girl without any option and he had hurt her, her feelings & her self respect. But then she is still a mother above all. Beautiful 👏

Loved the last two updates. She decided to forgive him for him & herself. But after reminding him that he still needs to work on the woman she is now -- Love her and be his while she tries the same.

Amna ... absolutely loved this FF of yours. Your concepts are different but so well written and engrossing that one can't help but keep reading it. And this when I do not enjoy "all" stories written differently from the original concepts. But your works are always an exception

Oh and this one's my favorite after the Chasing Cars FF f'course coz no one made me see Romi & Mihika like you did 😳


Hi paru, I'm glad I didn't disappoint you with the updates. The character of ishita needed some maturity hence the leap and I guess it proved useful when she encountered her long lost husband.

I'm glad to know my fiction has been marked as one of you fav :)And I was waiting for some one to point the fact that he will have to prove himself worthy of her love.

Thank you!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Loved the finish. Would have liked it even if you had extended it to a couple more. :) yeah the greedy me.

Since am on the verge of repeating the good adjectives, let me just pull the dialogues that were beyond awesome.
No, only your apology
The sharp ones on - 'was, not anymore', 'tell me', 'You' - the sequence was wonderful.
As soon as you ask for it.

Keep writing!


Oh those are my fav dialogues too, they came in so naturally and I'm glad they served the purpose :)

Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ss
Please write something else too. We need a nice ss in this troubled times
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: monalisa123

Awesome ss

Please write something else too. We need a nice ss in this troubled times


Hello again moona Lisa, thank you for dropping your lovely comments.
I am glad I could entertain you with this story :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hope u write more SS and FF like this one.. I just wanted to say this story is close to my heart. Read it all over again ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

Hope u write more SS and FF like this one.. I just wanted to say this story is close to my heart. Read it all over again ❤️


Thanks Lia, this one is my favorite too and I consider it to be my best work. I'm thinking, I'm thinking already to begin another fiction.

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