OS: Tu Hi Zindagi - Page 2

Originally posted by: PreciousPri

Aithe aaja yaara...jhappi time 🤗 BIGG JHAPPI for my JP! 😳🤗

I am so happy I could inspire you for this OS 😃... and I love you too baby *muaahh* Awww LOVE YOU TOOO JAANUU! *huggies and kissies* I can't thank you enough yaaraa! 😳

So well written and that too in such a short span of time 👏👏👏 heheheh hence the carpel tunnel 😆😆 but thenk you jiii 😳

I love the way you portrayed RKB's emotions and feelings and even IRB's ...so much in sync with current track and scene Awww yayyy glad you liked it! I was so insecure about the way I portrayed them in my OS. But I'm so glad you liked it! 😳

The whole breakdown of the two ... the way it ends ... BRAVO 👏👏 Awww wow! I'm blushing so hard.. so sweet of you Pri! 😳😳

With elements of comedy ...in standard RKB style...There were emotions and aggression ..and there was mohabbat HAHAHA Yess that I had to add! 😆

" A day without your lectures is like a dry day for Punjabi's "

"Did you just compare me to dry day?" 🤣 LMFAOOO had to do it!

As for that DTPH quote ...PERFECT !! Yesss DTPH is them!

I could visualise it all 👍🏼 Wow, that's awesome yaar! Thank youuu! 😳😃

Aur chor...mera sign off chura liya ...good bad or ugly wala 😲😆😆 LOLOLOL I swear to God I did not know that was your tag line

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omg i ws in for a SHOCKING SURPRISE when i saw an OS under ur username..i ws lik yeh kab?😲 n i already saw comments already...so without wastin nymore time-i rushed here...

n omg i ws BOWLED OVER-would be an understatement...!! Raman's feeling ws brilliantly portrayed by u yaar n tht too in his typical style...👏👏..i could so so visualize evry scene u wrote here......

wonderful OS yaar n thnx for dedication 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove

JesusChristAllah..!

What did I just read?..

BabyG, I so wish that you were within my arms reach right now so that I can give you a bone crashing hug.🤗 🤗 AAAHHH SHIBS MY BABYYY GIRL! Here's HUGEEE bear hug to you my love! 🤗🤗🤗

This was a SOULFUL piece of art..as I would like to call it. I'm so glad that in someway happypill & myself played a role in this.. If not we would have missed reading such a beautiful piece of artwork.⭐️ WOW! Omg.. this has got to be one of the most BIGGEST compliments I have EVER received for my writing. Omg, I can't even tell you how ELATED I am Shivs! YOU ARE SO SO SOOO freaking sweet! Wow, I just don't know what to say! Thank you SOOO much! 😳🤗🤗

Raman's outburst was not just mere anger but it was the reflection of his love and care for Ishita.. It was portrayed excellently through the dialogues. Ishita's fear and love very well established... I could visualize everything and for some reason it become so real that the corner of my eyes was stained with a tear drop. AHHH! I'm sooo happy you could visualize the whole thing, I was seriously so iffy about it but wow pheww thank goodness you liked it! :) 😳

Brilliant gibs..it was just BRILLIANT.

I honestly am struggling for words to say how much I LOVED your OS.

A well written piece of art.

Going in for a 2nd read... in fact saved it in my reading list folder so that I can read it as and when I like..

OMGGG You loved it THAT much?! 😲☺️ shibs I look like a tomato now with all the redness on my face cuz of the blushing. Wow you really made my day Shibs, I'm sooo happy that you loved it so much! You are the best! 🤗

Thank you so much for this..

Love you to the moon&back BabyG..!❤️ No thank YOU for inspiring me girl. I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH MY JALEBIII! *muaaah* *huggies and kissies* 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: swathibalan

Very nice Garima.. liked how you brought out the moment of angst and the breakdown

Originally posted by: Alu-

Wow!! That brought tears into my eyes. I really wish we would get such scenes in the show. That was so well written. So glad you wrote this, I was waiting for someone to write something on this.

Originally posted by: sudhajo

Too perfect...for the ongoing situation. Well written.

Originally posted by: sow2428

The Os very beautifully encaptures the feelings raman and ishita are going thru currently.

What a piece of writing.👏 you have beautifully described the emotions and the dialogs were apt.

Hope they show some thing near to this onscreen.

you are a ⭐️ writer.