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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_
perfecttt...thats all came out of my mouth when i read this!!
just amazing !!😃

Thank you sooo much! 🤗

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Divya

@.Divyaa.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

3 pages ho gaye😲

Chalo koi nahi. Hum kuch logon ke tarah late hi aate hain.😎🤣

Gari

This was BRILLIANT yaar🤗 I SO SO SO LOVED IT... ❤️

I seriously want CVS to read this and show this in YHM too..

I knew this OS is gonna be special the moment I saw-'pyaar bhaut baar ho jaata hai.. lekin mohabbat sirf ek baar hoti hai.." ~ Dil Toh Pagal Hai'

Aah.DTPH😳 The quote is so apt for them!

LOVELY OS Gati (🤣)🤗

Write another one 10 days later. Just reminding you know. 🤣

PS. "I'm not joking Ishita, this is me being serious. We both have been behind a facade for a while now, it's time to face the truth. It's time to live in the moment...together." He smiled.

This time her tears wouldn't stop.. she finally shed happy tears for the first time in the day. She smiled back.

"Ishita..after not talking to you for a whole day, I realized that life is so empty with you.. without your lectures. You can get mad at me all you want, you can yell at me, scold me, whatever but promise me one thing.. promise that you'll never give me a silent treatment because my life comes to a stand still when I don't hear your boring lectures.." he chuckled.

^I so loved this part.

Edited by -Srkfan4ever- - 11 years ago

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PreciousPri

@PreciousPri

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -Garima-

Thanks for such a wonderful and sweet comment Pri.. really brought a HUGEEE smile to my face! Love you SO SOOO much JP! 😳😃🤗

I guess much much more thank yous ... 😆... Your most welcome JKR !! I'm glad I could bring a smile to your face 😃🤗

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naima.a

@naima.a

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Only n IF we get scene like this!!! Lovely OS..

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PreciousPri

@PreciousPri

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: -Srkfan4ever-
3 pages ho gaye😲
Chalo koi nahi. Hum kuch logon ke tarah late hi aate hain.😎🤣

Gari

This was BRILLIANT yaar🤗 I SO SO SO LOVED IT... ❤️

I seriously want CVS to read this and show this in YHM too..

I knew this OS is gonna be special the moment I saw-'pyaar bhaut baar ho jaata hai.. lekin mohabbat sirf ek baar hoti hai.." ~ Dil Toh Pagal Hai'

Aah.DTPH😳 The quote is so apt for them!

LOVELY OS Gati (🤣)🤗

Write another one 10 days later. Just reminding you know. 🤣

PS. "I'm not joking Ishita, this is me being serious. We both have been behind a facade for a while now, it's time to face the truth. It's time to live in the moment...together." He smiled.

This time her tears wouldn't stop.. she finally shed happy tears for the first time in the day. She smiled back.

"Ishita..after not talking to you for a whole day, I realized that life is so empty with you.. without your lectures. You can get mad at me all you want, you can yell at me, scold me, whatever but promise me one thing.. promise that you'll never give me a silent treatment because my life comes to a stand still when I don't hear your boring lectures.." he chuckled.

^I so loved this part.

Dibs !!

Tu bhi chor aaj

@bold ... Ye mera line thi in AT one day when I came late .. I wrote this in answer to Nikki telling me I'm late for the celebration party

Chalo ... I'm just kidding with you guys 😆

Edited by PreciousPri - 11 years ago

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Excellent!!!! I loved it, I was thinking of going with the same idea for the next part of my OS but now will have to think of a new angle lol

Loved the entire OS but the following touched my heart,

" Did he really screw up that bad? Did he lead her on to think that she wasn't trusted? If only she knew she was the only person he could trust blindly. If only she knew..."

Isn't it amazing to see a character like Raman grow to a mature man from an hurt angry man child, I loved the self realization that you portrayed! Excellent!!!

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Loved it..you had portrayed their feelings very well...it was awesome...

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Very soulfull.well written..raman's anger and frustration..and ishita's insecutrites well defined...thank u for writing such a gr8 piece..id have also saved it like 'forbidden over in my list of things to read again and again..