Waking up to Regrets - OS - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: -Hima-

Beautifully written Aani!👏 Shagun's emotions and realization of her life then and now has been wonderfully portrayed.

I was taken aback by Ishita's reaction to waking up next to Raman in yesterday's episode.. mainly the 'chee' part, but here, you have given them another day of sleeping together on the same mattress! Loved it.


thanks Hima 😊

@bold - about the chee thing I wrote on btalwar' post CHEE ... My analysis from a WOMAN's POV and find it so unreal the bed could be fixed in a day 😕😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Nichuss


awesome aani...
loved each line u wrote...
i dont feel any pity for her.. after the ruhi name dragged to media
even it wasnt her idea... after knowing suraj doing this...
for her selfish need she supported.. half heartedly...
which is wrong...

anyways... im looking fwd for shagun drama...

kuch tho zaroor hoga... this drunk scene par


thanks Nisha 😊

Oh I dont pity her too but this woman has to have regrets is all I wanna say 😳 and I too wanna know why this was written
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: baubles

Simply superb Aani!!!! It couldn't have been written better than you have here...perfect,real emotions n regrets a real person in shagun's place would face...wonderfully written! ❤️


thanks hon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

I know 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
This was beautiful Aani (taking the liberty as that's how you've been addressed 😊)
If only Shagun was capable of such introspection 😕 And CVs wanted to show her regrets. Yahan tu Ishita ki bajane ke liye sari mehnat ho rahi hai. Dont know where the track is headed but hate what they've done to Ishita's character in the process. Raman's majboori in Adi track and now Ishita's mahanta 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aani, I read this OS the day you posted it, but am only now getting time to comment on it! This is so beautifully written that I don't how to put in words what I felt while reading it, but I'll try, so here goes nothing...

The scene where Shagun sees the many pictures of a happy family on Ruhi's wall was so gorgeous. I could see Shagun feeling an unknown pain in her heart at the photo of our awesome trio. Ishita has very quickly made her place in that home and in the hearts of its residents. There is no place for Shagun and she knows that, which is why she herself was leaving the place. And to be honest I kind of felt sorry for the Shagun that you've shown in your OS, she left the sweetest husband for a dream that she now knows might never come true. She's finally seeing the hell her decisions have put her in. Now she's alone, while the people she had left alone have found their own joys in life, joys that she could never give them. Must be really painful for her being in that house and seeing what she gave up.

But oh well, it was her own desires that brought her to this stage, desires that she went about fulfilling in the worst ways and now karma's come to bite her in the behind. 😎

And haha, it's like adding salt to a wound when she heard that Ishita and Raman's bed had broken, our gutter minds are well aware of what she thought to be the reason behind the bed breaking. If only Shagun had had another dream in the serial, then we really would have gotten to see what our gutter minds are craving for!

When Raman yelled for Ishu I literally grinned at my phone, his booming voice demanding Ishita's presence, and asking her for something as trivial as his clothes, a small task that he himself is capable of doing, but he wants his wife to do it... this just shows how much Raman has become dependent on Ishita. He can't do anything without her, she has now become a very integral part of his life in just a short amount of time. ❤️

And the button sewing scene - Raman secretly looking at Ishita with love-filled eyes. AANI! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?! Now I'm really craving a romantic IshRa scene in the show and I'm making up for it by continuously reading this OS.

The last scene where she sees the name plate was the best finishing touch I've ever read in any IshRa OS. For me, this has by far been the best piece of writing you have written on IshRa. I loved every second of it. I'm not just merely saying this for the sake of it Aani, I really mean it when I say that you are very talented. You NEED to do something with this talent of yours, don't just confine it within the pages of india-forums!

OK, I think I've summed up how this OS made me feel, now I'm gonna go and find myself some yummy ice cream while I cry over the fact that there is no more works of yours that I haven't read.






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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Btw Aani, I forgot to ask - Have you written on other shows before? If yes, please give me the links to those, I would love to read them! Also, I can't seem to find the index of your IshRa works, could you give me the link to that as well please? 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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your simply amazing ! I absolutely loved the OS 👏 It was written brilliantly ... Great going ... Eager to read more updates from you
PS: I hope u were the writer of the show 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

What a brilliant piece of work Aani..
First of all, thank you so much for this wonderful OS..I was literally having a headache after watching all the segs of Shagun in Bhalla house and reading all the articles.. Though I agree with what you said, there is no way we might get such a scene in the show.. So it's just best to enjoy at our expense.. We may as well get the exact opposite..

Thanks so much Anu and I knew we wont get anything of the sort on the show so I wanted to indulge in my fantasy :P

Coming to the OS.. No matter how much it was about Shagun, the best part of it was how realistic it was. Not just Shagun, but I think any woman would face all these emotions once she realizes the harsh truth of life. In shaguns case it's even worse because she is a woman who has always lived in that one bubble where she thinks that her ex still yearns for her. To see him move on in his life whereas hers seems to be crashing down each moment can be devastating.

Exactly no woman in her position can NOT have the regret of losing out on such a great life - a loving hubby, a good family and the love of her daughter. But Shagun is still living in a bubble which will burst someday and it would be painful for her then.


Also what I loved about the OS was how you showed Ishra to be unaffected by her presence though I know we won't have it this way on screen, so imagining is the only way out.


that is what I want to see them like one day - unaffected by anyone and everyone else - when they are with each other no one else matters ☺️

I glad you made her see the name plate outside Bhalla house, one thing which is enough to show her of what she lost to her greed. The woman deserves to know.. 😃 😆

I had to do that! The contrast was to amazing to ignore - a woman who is homeless owing to her deeds vs a woman who has two homes that are almost one just opposite to each other, whats more her marital home has her name on the outside giving her a special status there 😳

Thank you once again for the OS.. I guess we can always trust you for a brilliant OS whenever things seem to be going haywire in the show.. Keep them coming in 😆

thanks Anu 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Wela

I usually am the Silent reader with a like for topics that catch my fancy...but had to comment on your writing- awesome!!! The way u depict emotion is too good... looking forward to reading many more of your pennings 😛


Thanks Wela its always amazing to hear from a silent reader 😊

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