Ishita-Toshiji conversation:
After getting information about abortion report fiasco, toshiji shared RuMan preggy period. It's first time Ishita seeing Raman how much happy about Ruhi birth. So it's compulsory to show her reaction because her misjudgement about Raman being terrible father. You should have to show about how Raman was polite and loving guy once. Now Raman doing hot property characteristics. at initial of their caring saga Ishita got taunts from Raman for not taking to much care to outer look. He always stated him as hit property to her. This is first time she seeing Raman as spects guy with Micky mouse dress. In that screens he is just simple person. You should have to show her as astonished by his simplicity. But you leaved these things.Ishita hated Raman once. She misjudged him as loveless and power hunger person. So you have to concentrate every single and even simple things also. These things only can Ishita to fall on him. Not heroic fights or ruhi wala promises.
Ishita-Mihir conversation:
I don't understand why did you make scene as Ishita giving lecture about love to mihir. Everyone knows mihir and Mrs.Bhalla are the only two persons knows how much Raman loved Ruhi even he didn't express it. I didn't forget a dialogue of mihir when Ruhi got tooth pain.
"Does she really know how much you loves her?"
This is the first time Raman acknowledging his love of past six years. In earlier episodes Ruhi only mentioned she wants Ishimaa's fav ice cream. But Raman aware about her previous and present choices. This must shock to Ishita.she only thought Raman changed his attitude from last few months and Before that he just concentrated his business. We already seen how she complained to bala about her apologise to adi because trio war between Raman and AshGun, then things changed, she realised him as good father still she thought him that he didn't care ruhi until their marriage. So this must be shock or surprise to her because Raman passed this test with flying colors. Yes, mihir should have to express his happy and shares it with Ishita bhabi. He knows that due to his sister's betrayal his BIL can't able to give nice mate to ruhi even though he loved her so much.he is the only person there can understand that conversation as RuMan's hidden love of past six years.if he stated this to Ishita, Ishita should give pleasing look to RuMan. But you gave this as lecturing one liners.
Gift scene:
Today when Raman said don't have to over confident, she felt disappointment. But next scene is not apt to previous one. How long you will give same lines to Ishita like "No manners, No thanks, No sorry". You showed her reaction is ok but not perfect. The award is unnecessary one. Because she and we clearly knows Raman values IshRu more than posts and biddings. Recent two tracks are examples for this. Instead she may note about being ungrateful to her even after she bridged him with their daughter.you showed too much anger/taunt and some disappointment. But I feel that you should have been to show too much disappointment, some sadness and little angry.
Name board scene:
I have no eggs about this scene. IshRa nok-jhoks as usually brings smile on lips. Next Ishita mihika conversation is too good. Mihika expressed how sweet BIL is. Then Ishita told her that his tongue should have also to be sweet. This dialogue clearly explained that Ishita knows about Raman being good and polite at heart. And finally while she gestures her husband name on board. We can see that how much she proud about her husband.this is so perfect.
Iyers home scene:
I feel instead of Ishita , mihika is better choice to tell this board matter to iyers. Because till today Ishita didn't tell anything regards Raman as proud to iyers. Earlier we have seen about how Ishita mocking him about incapable to make dosa. Tamil speech is public one. So we can leave that matter away. He gifted a jewel to her. Initially she didn't pay attention to it but then she understand her husband's gesture. at psycho track she realised that how much he cares about her. She didn't say anything to iyers about how Raman thrashed param for harassing her.she really got shock and happy when she got to know about Raman's resignation only for her license renewal. She can tell this matter to iyers with proud because Raman sacrificed his past six years hard work for her. Same day he gifted a saree which she liked most. She didn't mention these things to iyers.suddenly this matter only doesn't make sense. She just smiling while taking about name board matter. She must silent blush, happiness and proudness. While Mr.Iyer said Raman made all husbands to suffer , she should blush or shy instead of smiling. When Mrs iyer told to learn from Raman, she should have show some proud or blessings about being his wife. But you showed this normal happy family talk. I didn't daddy it's wrong. But IshRa didn't confess or realise (they did almost but not whole heartedly) , so it's necessary to record how one's goodness makes other to fall in love or feel proud.
Taunting and planning scene:
Apart from nok-jhoks she expressed about how she proud about her husband's intelligence. She didn't express her proud to him not to feel superior. Of course ego also one of spice which makes love as tasty. But they let go ego away when other got in circumstances. I felt this scene also good.
Finally, CVS in daily soaps facial expressions of actors,dialogues regrading their past and giving scenes as situations based on character's view these are important ones. This isn't cinema to remember past three hours only. It's a relay so it's your responsibility to give proper dialogue, fb or intuitive about past to understand their present condition. I appreciates you for your gripping screen play but please show everyone at least lead roles expressions,fb, intuitive, mind thoughts clearly. Once again I'm requesting you that nok-jhoks are OK. But you have to mention their mentality about their state. For example in recent episode when Raman taunted Ishita for bringing param back, she stated that his nok-jhoks comes only from tongue but his heart is pure. As mentioned above in today episode too Ishita express her proud at his absent but teased him giving bahuish ideas at his present. Same thing I wanted from you, you want to length IshRa confession period . no problem. But clearly show how they loves each other and having ego not to confess first. It's my POV. Any suggestions to CVS also welcomed.
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