(MDT SERIES SS)UNNNAMED PR18/PG18.

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INDEX
part 1 1
part 6 5
part 18 page 18

part 1

Scene starts in delhi in Ashok's house.He was in point blank of a gun and some gangsters are surrounding him.

Ashok "I know tumaara loss huan hain.But issmey mera kyaa galthee hain.Tum log ney bola thaa kee aap log Raman ko rokhengey.Aap kar naheen paaye aur saara ilzaam merey uupar."

GG "Kaisey business man hon thum jo doosre key haar sey jeeth letha hain.Khudh mey jeetney kee takath nahee hain tho humsey madad lee aur humey ilzzam dey rahen hon."

Ashok "Hummarey passs abhee bhee waqt hain.Raman yeh project ko reject kar saktha hain."

GG "Who kyon karega?Sau karod ka profit hain.Asaaani sey koi nahen chodega."

Ashok "Raman is an emotional fool.Ussko apna pariwaar bahuth important hain unkey beewi aur bachey key liyen apnaa jaan bhee dey saktha hain."

Ashok "Ussney apnee biwi key license key liyen presidentship bhee choodney key liyen tayyar ho gayan thaa.Yeh project kuch nahen hain."

GG "Humey unko kidnap karkey yeh karwaana hain." Smiling.

Ashok "Aapko 60 karod ka profit chahiyen tho.Naheen tho aap mujhey maar sakhey hain."

GG "Tumhaara chaal mujhpey naheen chalega.But avbh tumhey chod rahan hun." Turning toward goons "Unkey biwi aur bacho key baarey mey patha karon.Aman ko iss kaam key liyen rakho."

Goons leaves from that place and Ashok smiles at them and."Raman dekhtey hain abh kaisey bachaogey tum.Sau karod profit."

After a week.

Then on other side it is in Chennai Ishita and all Iyers are there on issue.Their was some court case going on their properties all are combined to fight for it.

Ishita came along with Ruhi as Raman was busy in his new project.Mihika,Vanditha and Bala all came including Subbu.Ishita was there sice a week.They were missing Raman .

Brothers of Mr.Iyer is head there and he have a business and is a trustee of a temple there on which court case is going on for temple lands.

Then there are Mihika's parents.Bala's family and Ishita and Ruhi with few more relatives.

Then the situation is very complex as opponent is holding the ground strong.They are real estate agents from other place and big organization.

Mihika "Akka hum bhee appa key office chaltey hain naa dekhtey hain wahan kaisey hain."

Ishita "Kyaa office aisa hee rahega .Kyaa tum bhee itnaa excited ho rahen hon."

Mihika "Akka jaanthey hun.Lekin yahan bhee kya karey bore ho raehn hun.Delhi mey hothee tho mera kaam hotha aapko bhee clinic jaana hain.Abh yahan dekho kuch nahen."

Ishita "Tho kyaa?"

Mihika "Hum lunch lekey chalengey.It is done and no more arguments."

Then at lunch time Ishita and Mihika planned to go to Mr Iyer's office.

Mrs Iyer (not madhavi) "Tum loog Akeley nahen jaaogey.Bahaar khatara hain.Who log kuch bhee kar saktey hain."

Ishita "Kyaa aap bhee periamm.Who log kya karengey."

"Unlogon ney accountant par attack kiya thaa.Who abh hospital mey hain.Who paisey lekey jaa rahan thaa."

Ishita "Police complaint kee naa?"

"Kyaa faidha who log kuch nahen kar payengey."

Then same time Subbu comes there.

"Subbu tum office jaa rahen hin naa.THo tum in donon ko bhee office chod dena."

He agrees reluctantly.Mihika and Ishita agree with hesitation.Mihika was angry and speaking in regular manner.

In car they were going.

Ishita "Mihika itnaa gir saktey hain kyaa koi.Pehley mandir key jameen pey kabjaa aur abh ek insaan ko maarney kee koshish."

Subbu "Insaan paison key liyen kuch bhee kar saktha hain."

Mihika "Tumsey kissey ney poocha.?"

Ishita "Mihika chod doo naa.Actually kaun hain yeh loog?"

Subbu "Hyderabad sey hain.Bass itnaa patha hain."

Ishita "Abh office mey kyaa chal rahan hoga."

Subbu "Kuch naheen.Uss hatsey key baarey mey jankar employees bhee darr gayen nhain.Koi office anhe aa rahan hain.Bass koi interview chal rahan hai accountant key.Jyaada log nahen aaye hongey."

Then they reach office and Mr Iyer was in interview with some person.

Subbu speaking to some one.

Subbu comes to Mihika "Akeela bandha aaya hainyeh job key liyen."

Mihika was shocked she knew about interviews she personally attended many and saw few times while Mihir taking or Raman.But never could have seen a single person on whole attending for interview.

Mihika "Is he so desperate about that job.Khatara jaantha hoga naa koi naheen aaya hotha tho.He is insane."

Then they meet Mr Iyer.That person was selected for the job and he is introducing them to him.

Mr Iyer "Subbu yeh Amar hain hummara nayan accountant.Yhan naya aayan hain.Amar he is Subbu mera relative hain aur yaha employee bhee hain."

Amar "N Amar.Nice to meet you sir .Giving firm hand shake."

Then he introduces them to Ishita and Mihika.

Ishita feels something fishy with the person.With his blue colour eyes and scars below his eyes.And a bandage on his cheek.

Mr Iyer "Subbu tum inhey hummarey outhouse mey rakha yaha ghar nahen mila ussey."

Subbu "Theek hain."

Then they were going back home and Subbu was asking repeated questions to Amar and he gets irritated with it and simultaneously irritating Ishita and Mihika.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is another one of MY DREAM TRACK SERIES .
I hope you like it and who are wishing to see jealous Raman it is waiting for you here.
Some one give a name for it.I am out of them.My regular readers would have found one thing by now.I hope some one did.Then how many liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Another super series...👏
Its very much interesting...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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is this the continuation of the MDT where raman staying alone...
and ishu joins...

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start is very intresting...

so amar is agunda... no doubt...

ishu-mihika to be with subbu...*hmmm*

raman J track... finally u r giving the try...not bad...

waiting for next parts




p.S

wht hapnd to ur othr 2 story... i saw advent one got locked...

want to knw hw u end it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

is this the continuation of the MDT where raman staying alone...

and ishu joins...

-------------------------------------

start is very intresting...

so amar is agunda... no doubt... no way .reverse full name N AMAR .

ishu-mihika to be with subbu...*hmmm*

raman J track... finally u r giving the try...not bad...

waiting for next parts




p.S

wht hapnd to ur othr 2 story... i saw advent one got locked...

want to knw hw u end it

You will get pm over Adventure track.today by 4 pm .
Then next update by 2 pm.
I dnt know which two stories you are talking about.
chennai ff is bit nasty so have to wait for it.
Then other one i guess seperation one .planning next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i thought the continuation of the story
where u didnt give ishita her name...

just called heorine... etc
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

i thought the continuation of the story

where u didnt give ishita her name...

just called heorine... etc

Never thouhght that way but yes it will suit easily.
Then changing it now continuation.

But here I am not calling any one like that.
I need a name for this story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

Scene starts in Iyer house.Subbu was still asking questions for Amar and he is irritated.

Subbu "Tum job key loiyen yahan kyo ayen hon?Tum Delhi mey bhee kar rsaktey ho naa?"

Amar "Biwi tang kar rahen thee bhag key aagaya ."

Subbu "What?" even Ishita and Mihika were also shocked .

Amar "Naheen tho kyaa sir aap bhee kitney sawaal karthey hain.Experiance har situation mey lena chhiyen.Main itney saal delhi mey kaam kiya thaa abh south india mey bhee .Culture variation .Culture varies the thinking and each have is own set.So I am here to know the same here."

Subbu "Ok.Theek hain itney sey baath key liyen gussa kyon ho rahen hon?"

Amar "Itney see baath aapkey dimaaak mey kyon naheen gaya?Same answer?"

Subbu "Mind your tongue."

Amar "I will if you are the person I am working for."

Ishita stops the argument .

Ishita "Subbu tum ghar jaon main inko out house dikhaathee hun."

Mihika "Akka."

Ishita "I know what I am doing."

Then Ishita guides Amar to the out house.Ishita was smiling happily.

Amar "Madem thankyou for showing the house."

Ishita "Tumhey naheen lag rahan hain kuch jyaaada hee ho gaya?"

Amar shocked "What do you mean?"

Ishita "Kyaa naatak kar rahen hon.?"

Amar "You are mistaking me .I am not doing any drama.If you don't like me working here I can leave but never."

Ishita "Raman kyaa merey saamney naatak.Bahuth ho gayan.Yhe look accha nahen lag rahan hain.Abh normal ho jayiyen."

Amar finally smiles "Tumney pehchaan liyan?But kaisey?"

Ishita taking luggage from his hand "Kyaa Raman main biwi hun aapkee.Aapko acche tarah jaanthey hun.Neend mey bhee pehchaan loongi aapko."

Raman or Amar "Patha thaa but koshish tho karnaa hain naa." Locking the door.

Raman "Kyaa hain naa tum haarey uss temple waaley land sey hummara bhee related hain hummarey company kaa bhee land udhar hain.Bahuth bada network hain issliyen mujhey yaha aana pada."

Ishita "But iss tarah kyon .Aaap seedhey bhee aa sakthey hain naaa?"

Raman "Tumhaarey ghar mey hee koi hain jho unlogon kaa help kar rahan hain.Issliyen yaha bhes badalkar aayan hun.Bu tumney pehchaan liya."

Ishita "Obviously .Pehchaan loogi hee naa.Pulling out his bandage."

Raman "No.It hurts."

Ishita panicked "Raman kyaa huan .Sach mey choot kagee thee aapko.I am sorry."

Raman smiles looking at her panicked.

Ishita "Aapney tho mujhey daradiyan thaa." Hitting him on chest but Raman holds her hands.

Raman "Sach mey." Kissing her hands.

Ishita hugs him.

Raman "Ishita Ruhi koo lear aaon naa.Bahuth miss kar rahan hun."

Ishita "Raman appa ko patha hain kee aap Raman hain."

Raman "Han .Unhey patha hain.Challenge bhee kiyan thaa kee tum mujhey pehchaan nahen apogee.Haar gaya."

Ishita "Ishita here." Giving him a peck on his cheek before leaving to call Ruhi.

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curiosity building up after every update.

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