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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss


r u updting next part today????

will be updating it around 12 and 12:30
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 8

Scene starts with Ishita ,Raman,Ruhi and Mihika in car.Ishita is sitting beside Raman and Ruhi behind with Mihika.Ruhi is excited about Hercules.

Ruhi "Papa Hercy aa rahan hain.Bahuth mazaa aayega."

Mihika "Han saheen time pey aa rahan hain.Subbu ko jassosi karney ka shauk jyaada ho gayan hain.Abh dekhtey hain kyaa karega ."

Ishita "Raman aap Subbu key liyen Hercules ko bula rahen hain.Aap jaanthey hain Hercules ko aapkey alaawa koi control nahen kar saktha.Aap nahen rahengey tho who kissey ka nahen sunega."

Raman "Main bore ho raha thaa issliyen bula rahan hun.Subbu key liyen Hercules.Ghar chodkey bhaag jaayega."

Mihika "Han jeeju kall raath ko luckily akka ney aapko phone karkey situation turn kardee nahen tho ghar mey bade problem ho jaathee."

Raman "Mihika stop it.Ishita key uupar main koi unglee bhe nahen uthaaney doonga.Main seedhey saamney aa jaatha.Mujhey koi business aur property merey pariwaar key khushi sey jyaada important nahen hain."

Mihika "Tho iss project mey itnaa interest kyon jeeju."

Raman "Mihika yeh sirf sau karod ka profit key baath nahen hain.Hazzaron logon kaa naukaree kaa baath hain.Hazzaro pariwaar iss project sey khaaney khayengey.Yeh ashok ko milega tho itney logo key saath mainsaafi hoga.Aur mujhey yakeen bhee nahen hain keewho quarters bhee quality key hongey.So I have to take it."

Ishita and Mihika understood the insight of the project now.

Mihika "Han jeeju.Fir Megha kyon aa rahen hain."

Raman "Han tumhaara sawaal Megha kyon aa rahen hain yaa Mihir ko kyon naheen bullaya."

Ishita also caught this "Han Mihika kissliyen?"

Mihika "Akka main aisey hee pooch rahen thee?"

Ishita "Aisey hee?Sach mey?Fir chehrey pey itnee smile kyon hain?"

Mihika "Akka aap chup hojaon nahen tho mujhey bhee mauka milega."

Raman "Ishita ko tho rokh sakthee hon blackmail karkey.But main pooch rahan hun.Itnaa blushing kyon ho rahen hain?"

Mihika "Jeeju stop it.Air port aa gayan hain."

They gets down and Megha comes with her luggage and White stron built boxer following her.

Megha comes and hugs Raman "Boy friend kaisye hon?Kuch theek nahen lag rahen hon shaayad biwi ko miss kar rahen hon."

Raman "Shut up.Tumney sabh files lekey aaya."

Ruhi tooks Hercules chain and playing with it.

Megha "Sauthan.Kuch nahen badalaa tumhaara Ravan Kumar abhee bhee files."

Ishita "Tum kaisey ho?"

Megha "Mera boy friend tumhaara pass reh gayan abh main kaisey rahoongi."

Ishita gives a small knot on her head .

Megha "Boyfriend tumney Hercules ko kyon laaney key liyen kahan.Koi problem hain kyaa?"

Raman taking Hercules near him ."Kuch naheen yahan mera bakwaas sunney key liyen koi nahen hain naa.Tho mera ek heee partner hain jho sab kuch suntha hain issliyen bulaaya ."

Raman "Chaltey hain."

They all are in car and Raman was driving and Ruhi sitting over Ishita's lap in front with remaining behind.

Megha "Boyfriend gaadi rokho naa coffee peekey jaathey hain."

Raman stops near a caf.

All get down there and then as pre planned or something Megha grabs the wheel in instant and Mihika and Ruhi get in it along with Hercules.

Megha "THoda time aapas mey spend karlo hum aakey pickup karnegey." Tehn leaves.

Ishita "Raman yeh aapka plan thaa?"

Raman "Mujhey lagaa tumhaara plan hoga."

Then they go inside caf to have coffee and they know others taste well and they order it in their way.

Ishita "Raman kall raath ko main bahuth darr gayen thee."

Raman "Ishita darney kee koi baath nahen hain.Main jaantha hun naatum mujhsey milney aa rahen thee.I know you love me and you can never do this even if you hate me."

Raman "Ishita main kabhee vishwaas nahen karoonga kee tum mujhey dokha dey sakthee hon.Subbu just leave him he don't know what he wants and what he has to do.Aim less life hain usska."

Ishita has tears in her eyes and they spend a quality time after so many days as they din't got time to speak personally for few days even thought they were meeting it is just to speak about progress in the disclosure of spy.

Ishita "Raman aapko kyaa lag rahan hain kaun ho saktha hain."

Raman "Mujhey ghar pey kissey pey shak nahen hain.But I doubt that accountant."

Ishita "Raman usskey uupar tho attack huan thaa naa."

Raman "Par who jinda hain naa."

Ishita din't understand the logic.

Then after few minutes Megha comes back and they get back in car.Ruhi is happily eating ice cream which Ishita would have stopped as it is wrong season for it and Ruhi may get cold.

Then they reach home and Hercules sprung to action and started barking at Subbu waiting near gate so loudly.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally u pm m
Thanx alot
n now ye megha n hercules r there
its gone be fun
nice update
update soon
n pm krte rhna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
bechara...subbu tho gaya kaam se...fab update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Its very interesting... Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Vikas can you pls provide me the list of ur writings...
I lost it actually...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 9

Scene starts with Hercules jumping out of car and barking at Subbu loudly.All the people in house come out due to sudden disturbance caused by Hercules.Subbu was confused not knowing what is happening and Mihika is laughing seeing Subbu's expression.Ishita was shocked too seeing Hercules reaction.She know it was trained by Raman to follow it's will and will not take any one's command unless Raman orders.

All come out and Bala's mom starts shouting at Ishita because of Hercules.Bala and Vanditha come there to calm her.Hercules started barking at both Subbu and her mom.

Amar was watching silently and enjoying the fun of his training.

Subbu's wife "Iss kuttha ko chup karaon?"

Bala "Impossible.Raman key bhina Hercules ko control karnaa namunkil hain."

Subbu's mom "Kyaa?"

Vanditha "Raman ney issey train kiyya hain.Issey kissey pey bhee shak ayen yeh chup nahen hoga.Aur kissey kaa baath nahen sunega.Ishita ya Ruhi kissey ka bhee nahen."

Subbu "Door ley jaon ussey."

Mihika acted as trying to take it away but it started barking on Mihika for doing it and tehn no one dared to go near it.

Subbu runs away inside.Then it started barking at his mom.

Subbu's mom "Issey ghar key andhar rakhengey kyaa.Ghar mey pooja hain aur iss kuttha ko andhar nahen aaney denaa chahiyen."

Ruhi "Kuch nahen hoga.Hercules bahuth acche hain who disciplined hain who kuch nahen karega."

Subbu's mom "Abh kyaa kar rahen thee?Merey bte key uupar ?"

Mihika "Ussko Subbu pasand nahen aaya hoga nahen tho sab log jaanthey hain Hercules kyaa hain."

Mr Iyer "Chod do naa ek kuttha hee tho hain kyaa karega?"

Then their was series of discussion going on over Hercules and it was silent as Raman was.

Amar "Theek hain main issey out house mey rakhloonga merey saath ghar keyandhar nahen hoga naheen bahaar."

Ruhi "Theek hain."

Then all go inside and then their was introduction of Megha as Raman and Hercules were outside .

Megha "Boyfriend ney mujhey aapkey madad key liyen bheja hain.Actually donon related hain issliyen .I will take care of it ."

Subbu's mom "Ladkee hon tum kyaa kar paoge itney log sey bhee nahen o rahan hain."

Megha "Aap shaayad kuch kar nahen payengi but main aapkey jaisey nahen hun.Mujhey acchey taraha patha hain kahan apnaa zubaan istamaal karna hain aur kahan dimaak."

Subbu "Raman kyon nahen aaya ?" he want to show Ishita's truth to Raman himself.

Megha "Aap ko koi problem hain.Boyfriend ney bathaaya thaa aapkey baarey mey aap kuch problem create kar rahen hain.Who seedha aana chahtha thaa but he had his own reasons."

Mr Iyer "Kyaa problem ?"

Ishita "Kuch nahen papa Raman ney mujhey bathaaya thaa.Itnaa important nahen hain."

Megha "Sauthan ashen keh rahen hain utnaa important nahen hain."

Ruhi "Miss M aap merey saath aon aapko aapkey room dikhaathe hun."

They both leave from there.

Subbu's mom "Kaisey ladkee hain.Ek shaadi shudha aadmi ko boyfriend bulaarahen hain."

Mrs Iyer "Ishita who tumhey sauthan bula rahen hain.Tum hass rahen hon."

Ishita smiling "Megha asiey hee hain.Raman ko bachpan sey jaanthe hain aur kissey ney ussey naam diyan tha jab sey aisey hee bula rahen hain.Mujhey sauthan special reason hain."

Mrs Iyer "Mujhey samajh nahen aarahan hain.But Ishita saavadhaan rahon aisey ladkee ghar thod sakthey hain."

Subbu notices that Ishita has no trouble with Megha and not even a slight frown when she is calling Raman boyfried'.She had passed all the stages before she knew Megha well.

Then on outhouse.Raman was feeding Hercules .

Raman "Dhereey khaon itnaa zaldhee kya hain."

Raman "Bahuth miss kiyan yaar tumhey.Koi nahen thaa yahan baath karney.Ishita bhee nahen aarahen thee."

Raman "Tumney accha kiya uss Subbu ka tho band bajaadho.Bahuth tang kar rahan hain mujhey."

Hercules was listening his orders.

Raman "Ishita key peechey bahuth ghoom rahan hain.Abh tum Ishita key saath rehnaa."

Then started its exercises over its fitness.It is the finest boxer available and strongest and aggressive.

Ishita calls Hercules as Raman's dupliucate as both can't be controlled when they get angry and both wont trust anyone and go to any extent for their loved ones.

Then Ruhi along with Mihika and some other lady froen Iyer house.comes there to play with Hercules and she got a fare reason to meet her father now.

Ruhi " Hercules ko aapney khaana khilaaya ?."

Amar "Han .Exercise bhee karvaaya."

Ruhi "Main isskey saath khel saktha hun." Ruhi goes outside along with Hercules and Mihika follows her.

Then lady starts hitting on Amar and Amar avoiding her.It was being observed by Ishita from distance who is getting angry over that girl.

Then she comes and scolds that girl for behaving that way.

Subbu sees this and is puzzled over it.

Then in night Subbu and her mom are discussing over events in house.

Subbu "Ajeeb hain Ishita ko Megha sey kuch faraq naheen pad rahan leki jan Amar key uupar itnaa fikar."

Subbu' mom "Main kehrahen hun Raman aur Ishita key beech mey kuch theek nahen hain."

Subbu "Mathlab?"

"Raman hummesha pehley hotyha hain.Chota bhee problem hon pehley wohi hotha hain.Yahan itnaa bada problem hon rahan hain fir bhee who anehn aaya aur uss ladkee ko bheja."

"Mainey Ishita ka mobile dekha thaa.Ussney do hufton sey Raman ko ek hee baar phone kiyyaa hain.Raman ney bhee nahen kiyya?"

Subbu "Maa aap Raman ko chdo Ishita key baarey mey socho.Who uss Amar key saath kyaa kar rahen hain.Raman bhee usspar vishwaas kar rahan hain."

S'm "Shaayad who donon alag honey key liyen decide kar chukey hongey.Isslieyn doosron ko importance nahen dey rahen hain.Yaa Raman jaantha hain kee Ishita kissy aur sey pyaar karthee hain."

S'm "Raman ko kabhee Ishita key uupar pyaar he nahe thaa aur naahen Ishita ko.Ussey apnee beti key liyen maa chahiye taa Ishita ko beti.Abh undonon ko samajh aagayan unkey galathee ."

Subbu "Mainey kabhee nahen socha kee Ishita aisey karsakthee hain.Apney rishtey ko dhoka."

S'm "Humey kuch karney kee jaroori nahen hain.Hum ashen thyee uss ladkee sey haadi huan hotha tho tumhaarey saath bhee yahen huan hotha.Hum bach gayen."

Subbu "But ek din sachaayi sabkey saamney aayegi."

S'm "Uss din aayegee maza."

Then on other side Raman is seriously warning some one on phone.Then he turns to Hercules.

Raman changing its belt to another chained one specially made for Hercules.

Raman "Hercules,be careful maamla bahuth serious hain mujheyb tumhaarey alaawa kissey pey vishwaas nahen hain."

Hercules started licking Raman's face .It is way it patoy's Raman and shows its affection to its master.

Raman "Jaantha hun yaar.I love you too.Tum tho mera bhai hain.Tum ghar mey hee rehnaa kuch bhee problem ho tum jaantey hon kyaa karnaa hain."

Hercules show its sharp jaws and teeth and pushes Raman bach with its beast strength.

Raman "Trailer kee kyaa jaroori hain.Main ney dekha hain naa."

Raman "Tumhey trailer dikhaana hain naa tho kall dikhaalo .Hum bakaraa ko kal select karengey.Tum hee select karloo."

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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing yar...waitng fr nxt update..pls iss subbu nd issi mom ki baand baja doon hercules say nd raman ki dashng entry if poss...

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