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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Nice update...
Thanks for PM
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part 13

Scene starts with Raman in room and he was speaking  in phone with Romi.

Romi "Bhai sab kuch theek hain .Protection hain ghar mey."

Raman "Adi kyaa kar rahan hain.Who abhee bhee ro rahan hain?"

Romi "Han bhai who aapsey b aath karnaa chahtha thaa.Mainey rokha ussey."

Raman "Tum ussey phone denaa."

Romi gives call to Adi.

Raman "Adi main jaantha hunt um Shagun ko miss kar rahen hon.I know I can never fill that void for you .Main jaantha hunt um Shagun sey kitnaa pyaar karthey hon.Lekin tum aisey rothey rahongey tho Shagun kush rahegee kyaa.Tum hummesha kehtey hon naa mumma hummesha tumharey khushi key loiyen sab karthee hain.Tum aisey rothey raohongey tho ."

Adi "Dad I want to see you main bhee aapkey pass ajonga.Shagun mumma ney mujhey aapkey baarey mey bahuth jhoot bola thaa.But I love her .I love you too."

Raman "Uss sab bathon ko chod doo.Abh Shagun key baarey mey boorey baath nahen keh saktey .Adi tum yahan aana chhtey hon but yeh theek nahen hain beta."

Adi "Mai  aajaonga.Please"

Raman "Main correct time dekhkey laonga.Uss Aman ko saja jaroor milega .Tumhaarey akhon key saamney ussko sajaa milega.I will make sure he will never escape."

Then Raman hears sound of Ishita coming  and tells Adi he will call later.Raman then clearing his tears form eyes and keeps a smile.

Ishita "Raman khaan ready hain aap aajayiyen ."

Raman holds Ishita's hand and pulls her toward him with a jerk and she lands herself on him.

Ishita "Raman kyaa kar rahen hain aap?" as Raman holds her tightly by her waist.

Raman "Abh thak kuch kiyan nahen tho abh karney ka plan mey hon."

Ishita "Raman koi dekhlega .Raman abh chodiyen naa."

Raman "Ishita same dialogue do huftey sey bolthey jaa rahen hon.Issey accha tho main yahan aatha hee nahen.Aaakr bhee kyaa faidha tumhey tho mere fikar hothee bhee nahen."

Ishita "Raman abh chodiyen Raman ghar mey bahuth loog hain aur door bhee khula hain."

Raman "Tho tumhaara problem yeh haintho maon bahee jaakar bandh kartha hun."

As Raman moves toward door with one hand holding Ishita by her waist not loosing the grip.

Then suddenly Subbu pops outside and sees Raman and Ishita that close.

Raman "Theek hain Ishita iss ghar mey kuch theek nahen hain mujhey merey biwi key saath time hee nahen mil rahan hain.Aa rahan hun khaaney."

Ishita smiles seeing Raman's dejected face  with cute expression.

Raman "Uss Subbu ko tho main choodunga nahen.Ussney fir sey merey beech mey aarahan hain.Itney din bahaar gasthee kar rahan thaa abh."

Ishita "Raman abh dinner lkey lyen aayiyen phir daanna sabko  naam naam mey."

Raman finishes his dinner along with others but it was different this time as he was eating as Raman Bhalla not Amar and Ishita serving him openly and no need of hiding his or her affection or care over other's diet.

Ishita make sure that Raman ate complerelya s she knew Raman was worried over some matter but for her Raman is only this she will worry about.

Then at night Ishita was sleeping peacefully after having a pleasant time with Raman and with all worries gone hugging him thinking her heaven is safe with her .While Raman was lying there silently his hands are over Ishita holding her protectively looking at her with a lot of love and concern.

Raman was in thoughts and he can't sleep until all the mysteries are solved.Raman may act strong outside.For him danger on his life is not a big comcern but a small threat on his family is biggest crime any one would be commiting.Now the target was his family they have already broken Adi from inside.Now he has to make sure no one else is effected.

Raman  was looking at innocent face of his wife who can do anything to make sure her husband is safe and there is no trouble for him.

Ishita wakes up in middle of night and notices that Raman was wide awake and looking at her and his eyes told her everything that something is troubling  him.

Ishita "Raman aap soyen nahen.Itnaa raath hogayan hain"

Raman changing his face "Kyaa hain naa main soch rahan hun kee main kab thak tumhey aisey dekhtey rahoonga.Jab tum sothee hon na tum thumbahth cute lagthee hon koi sawaal nahen koi lecture nahen  bass aisey dekhtey rehsaktha hun."

Ishita hugs him sideward "Raman kyaa baath hain bathayiyen naa.Main aapko jaanthee hun.Raman aap mujhsey apney problem chupa nahen sakthey."

Ishita "Aisey koi problem nahen ho sakthee jho meey pathee kaa neend cheenley.Mujhey bathyiyen.Raman aap hummarey saath hain humey kuch nahen hoga abh aap sojayiyen."

Ishita makes Raman to sleep on her lap and then sits there  seeing him.

Ishita "aap bhee Raman main aako aisey zindageee bhar deksakthee hun soothey huen Ravan Kumar ko."

Then Ishita fall asleep keeping her head on Raman.She awakes in morning with ring of Raman's mobile.

Ishita takes the call as it was a familier number of her summer house landline.Adi called Raman.

Ishita "Hello!"

Adi "Ishita aunty!"

Ishita "Adi tum whan kyaa kar rahen hon."

Adi understood Raman din't tell her anything.

Adi "Aunty.Please aap papa ko boliyen naa main bhee papa key pass aajonga."

Ishita was shocked.First as Adi was in their house then calling Raman papa then pleading her to get him there.

Ishita "Tumhaarey saath kaun hain?"

Adi "Romi chachu aur Mihir chaachu yahen hain."

Ishita "Tum Romi chaachu ko bol dena kee mainey bola hain.Main yahan papa ko handle karloongi.Tum roona bandh karon.Aditya kabhee rotha nahen hain.Adi is a strong boy.Tum abh Romi ko phone doo."

Ishita "Romi tum Adi ko channai lekey aana.Main Raman ko bathaadoongi."

Rimi "Theek hain bhaabhi."

She cuts the call and wonders .

Ishita "Kyaa huan us ek huftey mey.Adi Raman key saath waapas aagayan hain.Sabh log summer house mey kyaa kar rahen hain.Shagun kahan hain Adi Raman key pass hain tho."

Ishita "Raman kyaa chupa rahen hain aap mujhsey." Looking at Raman who was sleeping peacefully with his head over her lap. 

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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
amazing update
wat happened to shagun?
is she dead?
y adi is crying?
hope adi -ishita relation grows stronger?
cont.soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
nice update
wht happened? where is shogun?
its getting interesting
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
so much questions unanswered...

wt raman hiding..?

hw change happend to adi...?

wrs shagun?

adi teek hae? ðŸ˜•
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
part 14

Scene starts with Raman sleeping with his head on Ishita's lap and he gets disturbed with sunlight falling on his face.Ishita notices this ond covers his face with her pallu admiring him sleeping kissing him on his forehead.

But touch of Ishita's lips made Raman to get up in instant.

Ishita "Raman ap sojayiyen.Mujhey nahen  path aap pichley baar kabh aaram sey soyen they.Main yahen hun naa."

Raman "Good morning."

Ishita "Good morning.Raman aap thodey der sojayiyen main aapkey liyen coffee lekar aathe hun."

Raman slips to sleep as Ishita tries to get up from bed and go out she suddenly trips and falls back on him as her pallu is clutched to Raman's head.

Ishita smiles lifting herself.

Raman "Tumhaarey pallu ko bhee mujhey choodna pasand nahen hain but tum dekho bahaana banaakey bhaag rahen hon."

Ishita "Raman chodiyen kissey ney dekha tho yeh kehdengey kee aap jhoru ka gulaam hain."

Raman "Main jhooru ka gulaam?"

Ishita kisses him on his fore head and removes her pallu and walks out while Ruhi rushes in to see her father.

Ruhi "Papa good morning."

Raman "Good morning beta.itney jaldhee uthgayee?"

Ruhi "Papa.Mainey aaoko bahuth miss kiyan.Aaap normally hothey tho rooj mujhey chocolates dethey hain mujhsey khelthey they.Aap ney kuch nahen kiyaa."

Raman understanding it "Sorry beta.Aaj poorey din papa aapka ok.aap jho bolngey papa karengey.Ruhi is papa's princess naa."

Ruhi "Main papa is my superman." Kissing him on his cheek.

Raman "Abh jaldhee bathon kyaa chahiyen?"

Ruhi "Papa Hercules poora red red hain darr lag rahan hain.Hum ussey baath sedtehy hain."

Raman "Han mainey dekha thaa.Tumhey Hercules pink mey chahiyen naa?" chuckling her.

Ruhi "Uffo papa.Main usska naily pink kardoongi.Nahen tho acch anhen  dikhega."

Then Raman and Ruhi leave to get Hercules.

Then outside Raman whistles for Hercules and it comes in instant.

All gather outside at sudden whistle from Raman.Subbu also comes out.Just like a pre setted program Hercules started barking ar Subbu.

Subbu "Raman ussey chup karo.Kaisey kuttha hain yeh.Hummesha merey uupar bark kartha rehta hain."

Raman "Hercules aur jyaada karo ussey choodna math."

All are shocked as Raman told that except who knew Hercules before hand.

Subbu "Paagal ho gayen ho kyaa.Tumm mujhpey iss taraha badalaa nahen nikaal saktey.Yeh kuttha jaan bhee lesaktha hain."

All gets surprised as Hercules stops  barking and comes and silently sits beside Raman.

Raman "Main paagal  nahen hun.Hercules kuch tedha hain.Ussko jho bolon usska ultha karega."

Mihika  "Jeeju bilkul aapkey taraha."

Raman "Main jho chahin whoi kartha hun main kissey ka baath nahen suntha."

Ishita who just entered the site."Who bhee aisa hain aapne ussko bhee bigad diyan."

Raman "Main hercules ko bigada.Who yeh sunakar aisaa hogaee kee tum mujhey kitnaa torture karthee hon."

Raman loking at Hercules all are shocked but they were new to it.

Ishita "Raman yeh merey torture key wajaha sey nahen jho torture aap ussey dethey hainnaa uss wajaha sey huan.Who naaa aapkey bakwaass sun sunkey thak gayen hain aur protest kar rahan hain kee aap apnaa bakwaas bandh karo."

Hercules starts barking as if it agree  with Ishita.

Raman "Dhokey baaj party badaldee itney jaldhee .Main tumhey torture  kartha hun."

All are laughing seeing Raman scolding Hercules.

Raman "Abh pataana suru karo der kiss baath ka aadath hain naa."

Hercules jums on to Ramna making him fall on ground and starts showing his affection to his master in its way

Raman "Abh yahee kaam bake thaa poora karloo."

Raman silently lies on ground.

Ishita looking at Raman and smiles seeing him laughing and lightened.

Then after Hercules patoying Raman completes.

Raman was giving bath to Hercules outside.Ishita decides to tell Raman that she told Romi to bring Adi to Chennai on Adi's request.As it is best time when Raman is with Hercules.

Ishita then goes silently to Raman.Mihika and Megha noticing Ishita tensed follows her.

Raman was giving massage to Hercules.Hercules guessed that there is some work for him and gets ready to her fav jag cooling and patoying Raman.

Ishita "Raman mujhey aapsey kuch baath karnaa hain."

Raman "Ishita kyaa hain serious hain."

Ishita "Mainey aapkey against ek kaam kiya.I am sorry."

Raman "Ishita tumney Adi ko yahan bulaaya .Itnaa he hain naa."

Ishita was shocked listening this she was shocked as Raman knew before she told him.

Raman then cleaning his hands and using her pallu to dry his hand.

Raman "Ishita who mera gainst nahen thaa.Main jaatha thaa tumko patha chalega thaa tum wohee karoogi.I know tum sabh samhaal sakthee hon."

Ishita "Shagun ko kyaa huan.Adi hummarey saath kyon hain.Adi roo kyo rahan thaa."

Raman was silent but he knew Ishita should know the answer.

Raman "Ishita Shagun abh iss duniyan mey nayee rahen."


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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Amazing twist... Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
thankx fr d pm...hop adi reaches safe...nt more dramatic twists...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
awww...so cute update
BT shagun mar gyi???
hope adi safely came to them
n adi n ishitas relationship change
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Posted: 9 years ago
ayooo poor adi...
now i understood y he wants to come near raman...
hw raman came to knw f ishu asking romi to bring adi ???

did raman heard wen ishu said it to romi...
this is becoming so intresting like thrillers...

waiting...