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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
oye oye...
ishu so smart...

how she found out its raman...

so spy in their own family...

its so nice to see romanctic khadoos kumar 🤣


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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
loved it
when he said biwi se bhag kr aya hu I got it its Ravan Kumar no one else
its getting interesting update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
What a twist..
Your way of writing is really smart..👏
update soon and if u can please pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
part 3

Scene starts with Ishita opening the door and Mihika coming there along with Ruhi.

Ishita "Mihika tum yaha kyaa kar rahen hon ?Ruhi?"

Mihika "Akka aapko kyaa laga main jeeju ko nahen pehchaan paongi ?"

Ishita smiles and signs to Raman.

Raman "But kaisey?"

Mihika "Jeeju maineykitney logon ko dekha lekin kissey ko aisey naehn dekha jo ladkiyon key saamney biwi key baarey mey buraai kar sakey aur who bhee iss taraha tho sirf aap kar sakthey hain.Fir akka kaa blushing karnaa.Thab hee samajhgayee kee aap hain.Aur Subbu kaa band bajaaney key liyen ready they aap?"

Raman "Dekho tumhaara galthee hain tum ney aisa nahen kiyaa hotha tho shaayad aehn pehchaan pathee."

Ishita "Tho aap kyaa kar rahen they .Kyaa kahan aapney biwi sey tang aakar bhag key ayen hain."

Raman smiling and taking Ruhi in his arms.

Then Ishita explains everything to Mihika and Ruhi.

Mihika "Abh jeeju bhee hummarey saath hain tho who loog tho gayen.Jeeju kaun ho saktha hain jo iss ghar mey rehkar unkey madad karey?"

Raman "Mujhey nahen patha patha hotha tho mera koi shauk hain kyaa iss taraha rehney key ."

Ishita "Raman kitna cute lagrahan hain .Who lens aappey."

Ruhi "Han papa.But hummarey saaath nahen rahogey."

Raman "han naheen beta thodey din .Ok.But tumhey kaun rokhega merey pass aaney sey."

Ishita "Raman hum abhee chaltey hain.Bahuth dder hogayee koi dekhega tho problem hojaayegee."

Ruhi "Ishima main papa key saath kehelkey aaongee.?"

Raman "Ishita Ruhi aajaayegi tum jaon naa?"

Ishita and Mihika leave inside Iyer house But change in Ishita is clearly visible in her face which came along with Raman.

Then she was more active and happy.

Ruhi was playing happily with Amar.(don't confuse).

Then around night Ishita gets a chance to meet Raman again to call him for dinner.

Raman "Ishiya main naheen khaaney walan hun yeh kichadee."

Ishita smiling "Kyaa bhookey rahengey aap.Amar aap bhhliyen math aap yahan accountant hain CEO nahen kee har baath bahaar jaakey khayen.Aapko apnee accounts bhee manege karnaa hoga."

Raman "Funnny.Tumhaarey appa bhee jaanthey hain kee main Raman hun.Tho mujhey kaun poochega?"

Ishita "Amar ghar mey Akeley who thodee hain .Poora pariwaar hain sawaal poochney."

Then same time Sr Mr Iyer coems there to meet Raman and he is not surprised to see Ishita.

Mr Iyer "Raman tum khaaney key liyen kyon naheen aa rahen hon?"

Raman was struk as he can't tell the same answer for him.

Raman "Ishita keh rahen hain kee main yeh khaana nahen khaa paonga.Issliyen bahaar khaney key liyen keh rahen hain." Blaming Ishita.

Ishita "Raman mainey aisey kabh bola?Appa jhoot bol rahen hain."

Mr Iyer "Raman I know you cant adjust to food here.Tum bahaar jaakey khaon naa."

Raman "Koi baath nahe nain yahee khaa loonga."

Mr Iyer "Tho theek hain aaajaon?"

He leaves telling this.

Ishita annoyed hits him.

Ishita "Kyaa bo lareh they aap .Mainey bola aapko baahar khaaney key liyen."

Raman "Tum issliyen gussa hon.Mujhey laga bahaar nahen jaaney key liyen."

Raman "Bahuth din hogayaa naa hum donon ko bahaar dinner jaakar.Abh chalthey hain naa?"

Ishita "Raman shut up.Ghar mey bahuth log hain abh nahen."

Raman "Sabko thodee lekey jaa rahan hun.Sirf hum donon?"

Ishita "Raman aap bhee naa?Sab log ko kyaa bolungi.Itney raath ko yeh hummara ghar nahen hain kee hum kabhee bhee bahar jaaye aur koi kuch nahen poiochey.Aur aap yahan Raman bhee nahen hain kee yeh bolkey lekar jaaye keemain aaoke biwi hun."

Ishita "Abh chup chaap khaney aajayiye."

Raman "Ishita iss circus mey main kaisey ."

Ishita "Raman main hun naa.Aur Mihika bhee hain aur Ruhi bhee hum kuch karengey naa."

Ishita leaves telling this.Raman angry.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
mihika is smart observer...

found out its raman...

i liked night part of raman blaming on ishita...

raman puttar ko ishu ke saath nyt out dinner... .wt a wish...

waiting for next part...



p.s vikas...today no yhm...so please updt maximum part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Amazing plot, different and refreshing.
I guess this SS is happening after IshRa confession.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Hi read all three parts wating rest
Is related to were mihikas land problem were ram solved

Wat about adventure dream that page got locked i felt u just ended it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
amazing update...pm me fr nxt update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Very interesting
would love to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
10 min.
Went through a problem.
I decided to give a marathon updated today.
But I slept whole day and got up just at 6:30.
Will be marathon till I go to sleep.leaving half an hour.

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