Armaan Naye Se Jagne Lage Hai - IshRa OS - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank god I kept this unres till today. I was freaking upset for 2 days having forced fast of IshRa scenes. Today once again reading your OS, made me so refresh and brought me back. thanks a lot aani for this beautiful sweet passionate write up with apt title. you took me to again another land .

To be cared for, he muses, is a wonderful feeling as he looks at her radiant face across him with a smile on his face.

His mother had always asked his siblings to obey and follow him while he learned to be careful of them, as time went on that became his de facto mode. Mihir and Neil came under his wing too.

He realizes he never had this... someone looking out for him, someone protecting him..

^^
what a beautiful memory of being elder brother having responsibility towards siblings. no mater how much he is strong but he too needs some place where he can cry where he can share where he can show his insecurities and where he can be he with his all weaknesses open. this is where she has stepped in


this description reminds me much more about stem cell bench convo and next day him asking her to come with him.


and when i read about him getting ultimate satisfaction in form of her, the only quote came in mind

Karyeshu Dasi, Karaneshu Manthri; Bhojeshu Mata, Shayaneshu Rambha, Roopeshu lakshmi, Kshamayeshu Dharitri, Shat dharmayukta, Kuladharma Pathni
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she has finished all these steps .
she has become Menka too making him AWAKEN😉

when he stops her by once again holding her hand,
aww I feel like crying!!! why why why we can't have such little moments at least in a month😭😭😭

Kiss- awww howww romantic scene was what a way to thank and show gratitude and overwhelming feelings to own wife. he has realized her as his better half and wants her by grabbing her and kissing in a very very true way by every means and the way she reacted to him was complete acceptance by her that she is too in love with him and wants him

loved this silent confession and acceptance.
I WATCHED and Enjoyed this OS ☺️
Edited by Colt.Pixy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
lovely...superb!!!!!👏 loved it thoroughly!!!!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely!
Would feel Raman's happiness and sort of relief knowing someone is there for him who looks after him. Felt bliss!!

Kiss was written beautifully. Though will Ishu respond in the show if something similar is done by Raman there? Suddenly remembered that bathroom scene where Ishita was mesmerized when she had seen Raman coming closer to her. Hmm never know 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Aani,
Jadoo hai is one of my favouriate songs! The magic never dims!
There is so much speculation as to how Raman will react to his Jhansi ki Rani's master plan and him being amazed is definitely on top of the list.
He is giving the reins of his life to his heart and it was lovely to see him follow his instincts while brushing that strand away. There is a sort of excitement mixed with peace and contentment in the lives of Ishita and Raman. The pace of the story is perfect-no hurry at all, savouring every moment and it is a treat to watch all of this.
I did like your early morning conversation regarding what Ishita did but I am hoping it will lead to a fight between the two. People say fights increase love in a relation and I want to see a marital tiff between the two where they will be fighting with each other about the other.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aani this was just so wonderful hun, I would say magical😳 ok bear with me here because I do not know if I am making any sense but basically I felt like I watching a classic romance unfold in front of me. I absolutely love the way you have expressed and conveyed his restlessness and realisation at the hand that he wanted to make his own moment with Ishita. I must admit the kiss took me by surprise, a nice surprise nonetheless! if only we were lucky to have this shown onscreen.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome.!!! Loved this OS so much...
Firstly, starting with the title, it was so perfect..
Secondly, every bit of the OS was simply beautiful.. Starting from Raman's growing feelings for his superwoman wife to his being lost in her thoughts.. It was all beautifully worded..
I think this is one of the only few OS's which have RKB's feelings portrayed in such details and moreover so beautifully.. 😳

The last bit of the story was divine, their convo as well as the kiss.! It was so adorable and lovely, I could do nothing but grin widely.

Awesome piece of work as always.. Will be waiting for your next OS.. Thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg..oh how I wish that this can happen on the show itself! Haaye...why did you make it an OS? Please if possible, can you please continue this OS by making it into a SS? or even better FF? LOL..i know I am asking too much but what can I say...you are really good! Plz continue by writing the next part and make it into FF or SS. Thank you for sharing this OS with us, I LOVED IT!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww Aani Di!Ur depth of Imagination & writing style always has Me In awe!Just completely Luved dis peice of Ur yet again Amazing writing!Raman's feeling's & thoughts were potrayed so Awesomely!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haaye wat an OS... Raman's victory wasnt complete widout sharing it wid his wife ishita... Ahh d sleepless raman was restless & didn't know y wen he shud be happy & peaceful as he got back all he gave away... Bt he wasn't becoz he cudnt share it wid his wifey dear...
D way raman said nobody cud talk to her dat way & get away as she is his wife & her instant response dat den no man can blackmail u on me & get away... Dey hv come so far nai...

From being just ruhi's parents dey r Nw accepting dat dey r husband & wife & announcing around too... D feelings dey hv is so obvious to oders bt dey need to realize... & wen raman said dat nobody did something like dis ever... Aww...

Amazing work it was totally loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow Aani Amazing...the moment i read its name i was like OMG my fav song...
wonderful OS yaar... loved it...
i knw its too much to expect even near of it in show but at least now we deserve a tight wala IshRa hug...
Edited by FieryLioness - 11 years ago

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