Ishra TS: Dil ye bekarar kyu hai - Part 2 (Last part) updated, Pg 8

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AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: btalwar
Are you sure this is like your first work ever? It felt like am reading a novel.
Honestly, I was initially skeptical of Ishita's behavior but your writing made me accept it and I was hooked till the last line.

Great job. And now that you have raised the bar so high, please come up with yet another brilliant work soon ... Will look forward to it. 😊😊

Cheers

Bhanu

Hey that's like the best compliment I've received ya. Thanks a lot😊😊. And yes, this is the first time I've written a fan fic. Honestly, i just needed an outlet to my obsession with the show😆.

Anyway, I'm so glad you liked it. I'll definitely write more if something strikes me.

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Awesome end...

Finally she got her Raavan Kumar to confess out his feelings...

Lol, the way Ishu said ILU to him.. I was stunned.. I was expecting her to take the step first but it was so sudden and cool that I was surprised.. And then her gestures towards him.. It was all so adorable...

And finally their confession.. Perfect.!!! ❤️

Thank you for the wonderful OS, loved it.!!!! 😃 Please do certainly write more, you are really good at it.! 😳

Edited by -IshRaDivAn- - 11 years ago

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AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
Awesome end...
Finally she got her Raavan Kumar to confess out his feelings...
Lol, the way Ishu said ILU to him.. I was stunned.. I was expecting her to take the step first but it was so sudden and cool that I was surprised.. And then her gestures towards him.. It was all so adorable...
And finally their confession.. Perfect.!!! ❤️

Thank you for the wonderful OS, loved it.!!!! 😃 Please do certainly write more, you are really good at it.! 😳

Hey, so sweet of you😊😊. Thanks a lot!!

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Sunita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Brillianttt storyy.. lovedd every inch of ur story. Loved hw u portrayed ishita's guts in expressing her feelingss! Tooo gooddd!

Do writeee moree...

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Rumaisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

awww this was such a wonderful ts👏
beautifully written hun⭐️
loved it loadsss
enjoyed ishita teasing raman😆... that was really sweet n soo romantic😳
do write more in future😊
take care

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AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: avni_19
Brillianttt storyy.. lovedd every inch of ur story. Loved hw u portrayed ishita's guts in expressing her feelingss! Tooo gooddd!

Do writeee moree...

Hey thanks.. means a lot😊

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AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Rozy77
awww this was such a wonderful ts👏
beautifully written hun⭐️
loved it loadsss
enjoyed ishita teasing raman😆... that was really sweet n soo romantic😳
do write more in future😊
take care

Thanks a ton!! 😊

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ankita sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

a very beautiful ts...lovely
i liked itt

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Wow..such a BRILLIANT story👏👏 Esp loved the ifrst part where Raman texts Ishu to smile..that was such a sweet moment..😳😳 and Awww...look at the insecurity that he wont be able to give his best to her ..Im glad Ishu convinced him that she is meant only for him😃😃 Very beautifully written..thanks a ton dear😊😊