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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow Bhanu...thats a brilliant piece of writing. loved it totally..

Thanks for the pm

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

well written and very well appreciated.

good one enjoyed thanks

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

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Beautifully written Bhanu.

Poor Raman went thru so much thanks to Shagun. Now he is indeed a contended man!!

Loved the OS.

Edited by omshreejaanu - 11 years ago

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ThruMyEyez-Nita

@ThruMyEyez-Nita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

beautiful! You captured Raman's emotional state perfectly and I hope that the episode will give this moment as much justice as you just did in this OS!😊

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Early morning treat for me! Realllyyy beautiful n amazingg update! Loved it completely.

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madhavi

@madhavimanish32

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

very nice👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Shonudo

@Shonudo

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

That was beautifully written! Thank you!

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome!!!!! thnks 4 pm :)

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

I really liked your OS and how you mentioned Raman expected so much from his first marriage and got nothing but with Ishita, he is finally getting what he wanted even though he expected nothing from her. The parallel you drew of the change in Raman 's life to the first sight of the moon was beautiful.