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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

OMG..you are indeed such a fabulous writer..brilliant piece of writing👏👏 loved it yaar..the way ishu expressed her bottled up emotions to the hug to the awkward feeling..everything was expressed so perfectly😃😃 Such an amazing writer you are..I really wish I could pen my thoughts the way you do..😊😊 Amazing work Aaani😊 loved it❤️

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Brilliant posting. Ishita's career being her savior was well written. 😊

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Sandhya83

@Sandhya83

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

I really loved it Hope the cv's show something like this. I really Want Ishita to tell Raman how much she loves her profession and it is not easy to do that job. In U.S and all dentist get paid well. the cleaning of teeth once in every 6 months then root canal, braces u name it. u won't get quick appointment dates he always taunts her with her profession. I sometimes feel it goes overboard. that is too much. ther eis a limit for everything.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

awww this was really beautiful👏⭐️
so touching❤️
loved the concern, care and understanding from Raman
thanks for the sunday treat🤗

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Love it, love it, love it!! Really like how you got entire bachelor party gang involved in your OS. I really wish to see similar happen in YHM. It makes so much sense. I was really upset with the precap but this such a perfect way for them to support and console each other. Great work!! Love the song caption from movie Guide. Very fitting. 👏

Keep writing!!

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RamanIshitaRu

@RamanIshitaRu

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I loved it, especially the last part! 👏😭

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Ami

@beebutterfly

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

This was an amazing piece. I just love how you took that careless word in the same context as in the precap but gave it so much more depth. I guess we won't get to see something so elaborate on the show (how I wish we could have it!) but that's how it would have been for anyone, finding an escape in work and here I could totally see it on Ishita. We've always had more of an insight into Raman's feelings than Ishita's post their respective break-ups and such a breakdown scene on her, would have been a perfect way of knowing more, not only for us but for Raman as well, just as you wrote it.

Simply loved the worrying, the angry and finally the caring Raman you portrayed..and that unintentional kiss won it for me. <3

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Ishrafanno1

@Ishrafanno1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

So beautifully written. You are so talented.

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@Zola029

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Lovely Os !

Ishra scene was awesome 😳

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

i loved it! ( should i just stop writing this for every story of yours? will you just understand that's the case? 😛😉) this time, as much as i liked the beautiful ishra scene, i really liked the interactions with and amongst the supporting characters. the way raman tried to ease the tension at the iyers, the boy gang following him quietly with that understanding, vandu's nod and of course the observations of the boys in the beginning and the end 👏
don't worry about blitzkrieg - no such thing. pls write more os/ts/ss/ff. not picky just shamelessly greedy 😃