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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
Oh my my..
What a wonderful piece of work..
Starting from his search for her to the last part where he hugged her, cupped her cheek and the sweet assuring kiss on her temple...Every word was moving..
Be it her outburst..or his assurance. It was perfect... The last part of it was beautiful.. So wana such a scene in the show..
Very well written.. 😳

thank you so much dear 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: v_ani_patel
Beautiful... Very well written... Love it !!!!

thanks Vani 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: princessaaliya
beautiful os!

thanks Aaliya 😊

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Lucky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Hey Aani...

I am now catching up 😛

First thing this story reminded me of was another OS of yours where they are in a park, and then the police come and take them to the station... It was raining in that one also no 😆

This one was so good... It was, in a way, a more realistic and extended version of the breakdown we saw Ishita having when he gets her that glass of water. You and me both have always wanted Ishita to 'expose' her feelings more, and i think we are getting that on the show too.

The way you have written Raman and Ishita in story is how I would want an ideal couple to be when they are faced with such a situation. And honestly, seeing the 'brothers' worried about their Bhaabhi, and finally witness the 'coming together' of Raman and Ishita gave your story another dimension. It was as if they were also the narrators of the story... very well written Aani !👏

This quote is for Ishita's outburst

"Everyone has their own ways of expression. I believe we all have a lot to say, but finding ways to say it is more than half the battle." - Criss Jami, Salom: In Every Inch In Every Mile

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dreamy-sa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

U r an awesome writer aani...always love reading ur story 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Hey Aani...
I am now catching up 😛

First thing this story reminded me of was another OS of yours where they are in a park, and then the police come and take them to the station... It was raining in that one also no 😆

This one was so good... It was, in a way, a more realistic and extended version of the breakdown we saw Ishita having when he gets her that glass of water. You and me both have always wanted Ishita to 'expose' her feelings more, and i think we are getting that on the show too.

The way you have written Raman and Ishita in story is how I would want an ideal couple to be when they are faced with such a situation. And honestly, seeing the 'brothers' worried about their Bhaabhi, and finally witness the 'coming together' of Raman and Ishita gave your story another dimension. It was as if they were also the narrators of the story... very well written Aani !👏

This quote is for Ishita's outburst

"Everyone has their own ways of expression. I believe we all have a lot to say, but finding ways to say it is more than half the battle." - Criss Jami, Salom: In Every Inch In Every Mile

Hey Lucky hope you are doing well now and arent as burdened because of your boss😊

@red - yep our Tagathon OS' remember - I have a thing for parks and rains 😆 I hope that doesn't sound creepy or weird though 🤔😆

@blue - I wanted the breakdown to be kinda huge the show never went there alas I have my fic 😆 but yeah we always want more of Ishita, this show is doing the opposite of the norm - making the hero its narrator and how weird is it that we want the girl to speak here when in the other shows we want the opposite 😆 guess I am influenced by English shows which most of the times give equal space and importance to both leads

I am so glad you liked this one and the idea behind the brothers in the end just wrote itself and it felt somehow fitting to me, IshRa are still in that blissful zone where they ignore or are ignorant of their feelings but I wanted there to be an impact which made things crystal clear about them without them saying a word which is where the third person or in this case the other people came in 😳

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: dreamy-sa
U r an awesome writer aani...always love reading ur story 😳

thanks dreamy 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: happenstance
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Edited- Aani i'm really sorry, been caught up with things and so trying to catch up.

This was just loved the entire concept of it and in particular correct me if i'm way off but was the sitting on the swings in the park a nod to a certain Castle and Beckett😳? because thats who I immediately thought off. So much so that even though I don't actually watch it anymore, it made me nostalgic- I may need to go back to it...

Hey Uz no probs and yep the concept was a nod to the CasKett I loved their scene on the swings in the season 4 premier and also the way she was shown contemplating things in the season finale all alone at the same place. 😳 I just loved how they had rounded things off then and of course I actually got addicted to In My Veins cos of this show its just