OS - Main hoon Naa Part2 on Pg1 (02/08)

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Hi guys. Here I present a slight different version of the episode, in my imagination 😛
Managed to type this. Next part will be interesting and coming tomorrow morning.
Hope you will like this. 😊

Damn that Raavan Kumaar.. Why did he have to so tenderly caress my hair and try to tie them back..' a positively flushed Ishita paced up and down in the room.. Did he even realize how unbearably intoxicating that was for me..' Raavan Kumaar ..huh'

She was so lost in her blabbering that she didn't realize when Raman came in the room.

Oh Jhaansi ki Raani... Taiyaar nahi hona? Party hai thodi der mein.. Muhurat nikaalun?' Raman asked her in his usual taunting tone.

Waah.. as usual, aise behave kar rahe hain jaise kuch pata hi naa ho..' Ishita thought to herself.

Are you there Madam?' Raman snapped his fingers in front of her eyes.

Haan haan...ho rahi hoon taiyyaar... aap bhi ho jaaiye..' Ishita said to him in a low and irritated tone as she realized that she'll have to get ready for the party and it was not a mean task since she had a major wrist injury.

*10 minutes later - in the living hall*

Raman got ready and came in the living hall. He was normally waiting for Ishita when suddenly something struck him.

Damn! Oh no.. How the hell did I forget? Shit!' he scolded himself as the reality hit him. He recalled that Ishita is injured and he just ordered her to get ready, without even realizing anything.

He immediately went to the bedroom door and asked in a low yet firm tone Ishita?'

There came no reply.

He asked again, this time taking his voice a notch higher .. Ishita? Tum huin taiyyaar?' he mentally cursed himself for asking that stupid question when he obviously knew the answer, but what else could he ask.

Mmm... bas ho rahi hoon... sorry meri wajah se late ho raha hai..5 minute aur bas.. Ishita replied a few seconds later.

It wasn't very tough to understand that Ishita needed obvious help. Raman had easily gauged the slight helplessness in her voice and he could not help but admire the grace she carried even in such adverse situations.

Ishitaa..? Mai andar aa jaaoon?'...realizing what he had just uttered, he immediately corrected himself..'I.. I mean.. andar aakar kuch help karoon?'

WHATTT' Ishita was evidently shocked. But she gradually understood his concern.

She politely refused saying Na koi baat nahi. I'll manage. Bas ..er.. do minute aur.'

Raman could easily feel her uneasiness through her tone. Without saying a further word, he barged in, albeit kindly.

What he saw made his jaws drop.

TO BE CONTINUED VERY SOON.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2 :

'Ishita...' he gasped in awe as he hypnotically checked her out.

Hearing his voice, Ishita got scared; would be an understatement. Well, it wasn't fear alone! Maybe a strange mix of fear, shock, shyness and anger ofcourse!
'Ramannn'.. She grit her teeth in mild anger and mild embarrassment, before turning her back towards him immediately, lest he would get to see something else.
'Baap re, ye Jhaansi ki Raani toh..toh..kitni khoob..' he couldn't complete his thought and he dared not utter his words.
This was the first time he was witnessing her in such a state; just in a sleeveless white blouse, a red bottom clothing(peticot ), hair half messed-up, and her plaster half open. No wonder, she was a delight in herself, a woman so beautiful!
'And she was trying to get ready..when she's not even half-way ready.. Damn this Bewakoof Aurat'..he snapped out of mesmerisation and moved towards her. Yeah, her petite figure, her innocence, her beauty and many more features had sent him into another world, but he soon came back from there.

'Huh.. 2 minute aur chaahiye na tumhe, dekhtaa hoon kaise ready hoti ho?!' he taunted her teasingly.
'Raman... Aap.. Aap jaaiye yahaan se..' Ishita was both irritated and embarrassed!
'Agar aap aise khade rahenge toh mai saaree kaise pehnungi..'
'Haan dikh raha hai vo toh.. Pichle aadhe ghante se tum ye plaster ki chutney bana rahi ho.. Aur saaree wahaan koso door padi tamaashaa dekh rahi hai..' he chuckled and teased her.
Ishita had had enough. Well, she no more felt scared in his presence, but she was obviously irritated with her own state. She couldn't manage to wear a saaree, thanks to her injury. Covering herself with a blanket, she turned around to face him.
'Raman... Aap jaaiye party mein.. Main nahi aa paoongee.. I am very sorry..' she shook her head as she didn't want to argue with him and worsen the things.

Raman silently moved towards her and gently held her by placing his hands on her shoulder. Placing his taunts aside, he said softly Kyun nahi chalogi? Kyunki saaree nahi pehen paa rahi ho, isliyea?'

Ishita continued to look down with uttering any word.

He pulled her a little closer towards himself, both their chests just few inches apart.

Tenderly removing the blanket off her shoulder, he held her injured hand with care and placed the plaster back in its place.

Raman..' she finally whispered in an embarrassed tone, her cheeks turning hot crimson all the while. 'Koi baat nahi na, aap jaaiye.. aapko pareshaan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai'..

Isse zyaada pareshaan kar bhi nahi sakti ho tum, ek toh chot khaakar baith jaao, phir pati se saaree bandh waao. In auraton ke jhamelon se bhagwaan bachaye humein..' he cursed under his breath, but it was audible enough to Ishita.

She jerked back his hand and asked him to go to the party. She turned around to leave from there, but alas! She was too late. Raman had already held her other hand and he pulled her close to him once again.

Ab ek aur shabd mat bolna.. jo kar raha hoon, chup chap dekhti raho..suna na tumne!' he ordered her.

Ishita decided to remain silent, well his killing proximity wasn't that bad either! For some reason she liked, correction, loved it.

Raman picked up the white saaree and tried to remember how Mihir had taught him.

Last part, that is, part 3 : will be Raman making her wear a saaree. A long long session!😳😉

PS : I am so sorry! I could only manage to type out this much this morning. Have a busy day ahead in college. Was planning to write the last part too, but didn't want to hurry. So will post that part as soon as I get time. Thanks for reading. Please hit likes or leave suggestions.😃
Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for ur next part. plz pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant start!!! And you leave us hanging like that!! This is sweet torture indeed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud start continue soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Leaving me hanging like that
Hw cruel
Can't wait to read the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for an update
pls pm me
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Plzz Pm me when you update...
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Omg...thats really cute..loved it
pls update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone for such warm comments and likes !😳 Thanks a lot. Will reply to each one very soon. But thanks so much.
Updated part 2 on Page 1 😳

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