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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

what happened?

Is this part not good?
Give your opinion yaar .What ever it is either good or bad.
If bad I will not use that trick again or change it.
But silece is not a great option.



Change to romance mood more pls
Edited by Sriramtr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah nice one .but yaar I am waiting for confession . Do it first. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 21

Scene starts with Ruhi cofused thinking her papa will not talk to her and will not get her anything.

Then she decides to test it by asking video game which Ishita rejected.

Then it is evening Ruhi came home and was waiting for Raman.Ishita sees this .

Ishita "Ruhi kyaa kar rahen hon tum."

Ruhi "Ishima papa kabh aayengey?"

Ishita "Aathey hongey.Kyon koi kaam hain?"

Ruhi "Han ."

Ishita "Kyaa kaam hain?"

Ruhi "Yeh papa aur mera secret hain."

Ishita smiles repeating "Secret .papa sey.Papa mujhey boldega naa."

Ruhi then remembers about Raman's promise that he should not tell lie before Ishita.

Ruhi "Han papa jhoot naheen bol saktey."

Ishita was shocked listening this.

Ishita "Tumhey kaisey patha kee Papa jhoot naheen bol saktey."

Same time Raman comes there.

Ruhi tries to coverup "Ishima papa ney kahan jhoot boolna bad manners hain.Tho papa jhoot kaisey bolengey."

Ruhi thinks she throwed it correctly but Ishita was not convinced.

Ishita "Raman aapney Ruhi ko bathaya."

Raman winks at Ruhi to start a question.

Ruhi "Ishima papa ney kyaa bathaaya.Papa aap mujhsey kuch chupaa rahen hon."

Raman "yeh kyaa hain kee.Ishima ney mujhsey promise liyaa thaa kee main uskey saamney jhoot naa bolo .Usskey baath kar rahen hain."

Ruhi "Sachee.Ishima papa jhoot naheen bolengey."

Ishita was confused whether Raman told her now or before itself as Ruhi simply accepted it with her doubt flood closed.

Ruhi then goes to Raman and he takes her in his arms.

Ruhi then wishpers in his ears.Raman understood .

Raman "Theek hain main laaonga."

Ishita "Raman aap kyaa baath kar rahen hain.Ussney kyaa poocha."

Raman "Video game.Ussmey kyaa hain."

Ishita "Raman aap nahee layangey.Ruhi ko uskee jaroori nahen hain."

Raman "Ek video game sey kyaa hoga?"

Ishita "Ramann concentration disturb hoga.Aap nahee layengey."

Raman "Ishita tumhey pehley bathana hoga.Abh mainey bol diyan main nahee laonga tho who jhoot hoga.So mujhey laana padega hee."

Ruhi gives a victorious smile as she made Raman to bring video game.

Raman "Ishita ek option hain.Tumm iss bracelet nikaalo main jab jhoot bol saktha hunt ho mujhey laana naheen padega."

Ishita has once again to choose between Raman and Ruhi.Ishita finally gives up and allows Raman to bring a video game.

Then Raman goes along with Ruhi to bring a video game.

Then after coming he was about to give it to Ruhi but Ishita stops.

Ishita "Raman aap ney bola kee aap layengey aur aap ney laaya .Aap mujhey deejiyen main ussey handle karoongee."

Raman "Tum khelogee kyaa?"

Ishita ""Naheen main yeh merey pass rakhoongi aur main Ruhi ko fixed timming mey khelney key liyen allow karoongi."

Ruhi was little annoyed with Ishita for this but it is part time.

Then Ruhi goes away from there silently and Ishita takes this to her room.

Raman was confused and same is Ruhi.She want to play game but Ishita is not allowing her and now Ishita was even able to convice Raman.

Ruhi thinks thinks and thinks and finally get an idea to patoy Raman.

She goes to kitchen where Mrs Bhalla was making coffee and Ruhi comes there.

She then takes a vessel with difficulty and tells her to on.She imitates Mrs Bhalla over making coffee even though she is telling her not to do.But Ruhi is adamant over it.She is doing it with difficulty she then added powder and sugar as Mrs Bhalla did but in her own ratio of Ruhi.

Then Ishita comes there and is shocked seeing Ruhi sitting near gas and making coffee.Ishita was scared first but seeing Mrs Bhalla there she felt ease as she will not let anything happen to her.

Then Ruhi is trying to lift bown and pour coffee in cup and she could'nt and Ishita offers help but she rejects it and tries and tries.

Then Ishita gets an idea.

Ishita "Tumhee karo main bass chotey bowl mey daal doongi tum waha sey daal dena."

Ruhi likes this idea and agrees .

Ishita does this and then Ruhi easily transfers coffee to cup.

Ishita "Ishima key liyen."

Ruhi "Naheen papa key liyen.Main papa ko doongee."

Ishita and Mrs Bhalla were watching it surprised and even their maid neelu as Ruhi made coffee .

Ruhi's first handmade coffee for Raman at age of five with determination and jealousy over her mother.

Ruhi takes it slowly to Raman and Raman assumes it to be made by Ishita as Ishita is watchin all this from door.

Raman drinks coffee and likes it .Ishita comes there to calm Raman assuming he would be angry.

Raman"Ishita aaj koi special hain kyaa coffee bahuth ache bane."

Ishita was shocked listening this.Raman is for sure not telling lie but some how Ruhi manage a favourable recipe for Raman.

Ishita "Raman sach mey acchaa thaa."

Raman "Kyaa pooch rahen hon.Sach mey accha thaa.Tumney itnaa accha pehley kyo naheen banaaya."

Ruhi was happy beyond limit as her coffee was good.

Raman "Daily aisey banana."

Ishita "Raman aap believe naheen karengey coffee Ruhi ney banaaya,"

Raman was shocked and Ruhi comes hugging.

Raman "Ruhi tumney banaaya.Itnaa acch tho tumhaarey Ishima kabhee n ahee bana payegi."

Ishita takes sip from Raman's cup to taste Ruhi's coffee and it was good.

Ishita "Ruhi tumhey yaad hain tumney kitnaa powder daala kitnaa sugar."

Ruhi "Yaad hain."

Ishita "Bataon."

Ruhi "Naheen yeh mera secret hain."

All smiles and Ruhi as a sift asks Raman to play video game along with her tonight.Raman agrees and convinces Ishita.

But to Ishita'a horror Ruhi sends Ishita out and asks her to sleep in her room.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Its nice... But Ruhi against ishita is not good...
SO pls change it as quickly as possible...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha122

Its nice... But Ruhi against ishita is not good...

SO pls change it as quickly as possible...

small comic track dont worry.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

small comic track dont worry.

Then no problem...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nicee...but plzz cn u shw raman getting jealous...ishita jealous is also gud...but raman jealous wld b awesome :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haha.. jealous ruhi... cute but for only a little tym... 🤔
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part 27

Scene starts with both Raman and Ruhi playing video game in their room around sleeping time.Ishita comes there and asks them to sleep.

Ishita "Raman time ho gyaa aap dono so jayiyen."

Raman looks at his watch and signs Ruhi to go and sleep.

Ruhi "Ishima aap merey rrom mey sojaon main aaj papa key saath soungee."

Ishita "Mujhey tumharey room mey jaaney kee kyaa jaroori hain.Main bhee yahee soungee."

Ruhi "Naheen mujhey papa sey secret baath karnee hain .Issliyen.Please."

Ishita smiles and goes to Ruhi's room.But she noticed that Ruhi is behaving differently.

Raman "Kyaa boolna hain papa sey?"

Ruhi "Good night." And then acts as sleeping.

Raman feels it weird but he also sleeps after few minutes .

But is unable to sleep without Ishita and she thinks she did wrong Ishima is always her's first.

Then in middle she wakes up and goes to her room.

Ishita was unable to sleep either as she got habited to Raman and without seeing him is little different for her.Then Ruhi comes there and hugs Ishita.

Ruhi "Ishima I am sorry.I love you."

Ishita "Kyaa huan.Tum sorry kyon bol rahen hon."

Ruhi "Mainey aapka baath naheen sunaa naa."

Ishita "Issliyen.Koi baath naheen mera doll mujhsey gusaa thee."

Ruhi "Naheen Papa aap key har baath sunthey hain mera naheen sunthey ."

Ishita "Aaisa kissney kaha?"

Ruhi "Adi bhayya ney kahan kee Papa aapsey pyaar kartha hain humsey naheen aur aapkey baath suntha hain .I want you both Mama aur Papa dono chahiyen."

Ishita "Papa aapka baath kabhee tala hain kyaa.Papa always loves you the most."

Ruhi "Fir Adi bhayya ney aisaa kyon kahan?"

Ishita "Mujhey naheen patha.Issliyen tum papa ko patarahee thee." Chuckling Ruhi to change her mood.

Ruhi smiles "Hanissliyen mainey papa sey video game poocha."

Ishita "Aapko accha laga .Tho hum daily khelengey 1 hr. aap sooney sey pehley ok only 1 hr."

Ruhi "Ok"and kisses Ishita.

Ishita "Tum jaakar sojaon."

Ruhi "Aap bhee aon naa."

Ruhi grabs Ishita's hands and takes her to their room and sleeps there oin middle of them holding their both hands together.

Ishita feels happy as noe Ruhi is in her side.Then she can break Raman's code.

Then early in morning both Ishita and Ruhi were checking Raman's mobile while he was in bathroom .Ruhi sees many photos of them and feels happy

Then Ishita tells she has to delete this clip and she needs password so you have to patoy Raman again.

Then Ruhi and Ishita combined makes coffee for Raman with Ruhi's recipe and she was able to repeat the same and Ishita caught the combination this time.

Ruhi once again gives coffee to Raman and Raman once again pleased.

Ishita who was waiting near them Ruhi gets into her plan.

Ruhi "Papa mujhey ek secret bathogey."

Raman "kyaa ?"

Ruhi "Papa aapkey phone mey merey aur Ishima key itnee photos hain.Mujhey chahiyen.Ishima key phone mey naheeh aa rahen hain."

Raman "Han password hain.Tum Ishima ka phone laon main bhej doonga."

Ruhi "Mujhey password bathaon."

Raman "Theek hain bathaonga."

Then he notices Ishita near by and understood its her plan.Then he was struck he has to tell.

Raman then clapping his hands "Ishita kyaa socha tumney .Kee Ruhi poochegee tho main password bathdoonga.Mathangi.Kitney bekaar plan banathey ho tum."

Ishita gets annoyed with hearing this word as she don't like it.

Ishita "Aapney mujhey Mathangi kaha."

Raman "Yeh tumhaara hee naam tha bhoolgayee?"

Ishita "Mera naam Ishita hain.Ishita."

Raman "Birth certificate mey dikhaon ."

Ruhi was confused.

Ruhi "Ishima Mathangi kaun hain?"

Raman "Main bathatha hun."

Ishita "Raman neheen."

Raman "Sory ishita mainey boldiyan bathonga tho mujhey boolna padega.Doosra option tum jaanthe hun " forwarding his hand.

Ishita becomes silent.

Raman "Mathangi naa Tumhaari Ishima kaa name hain jab who choothee the .Fir daadu ney name change kiyan.Nice name naa?" laughing .

Ishita "Raman bahuth hogaya mazaak."

Raman "Theek hain tumhey ek chance detha hun main mera mobile tumhaarey pass rakhrahan hun.Main office dass bhajey jaaonga.Jab thak tumhey password dhoondhnaa hain aur delete karnaa hain."

Raman leave telling these.

Ishita thinks for little time and Ruhi is along with her.

Ruhi "Ishima hum password kaisey break karengey."

Ishita "Papa ney password bola hain.Bass twist karkey bola hain.Who jhoot naheen bol saktha naa.Tho jaroor bola hoga."

Ruhi "Par kyaa hain."

Ishita "Wohi tho doondh rahen hun.Tumhaarey papa bahuth smart ho gayen hain.But hum unsey bhee smart hain."

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
amazing update
i think password is mathangi

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