My Dream Track (os rz)finished - Page 11

Scene starts in Raman's car .Raman is driving the car while Ishita is sitting beside him .Mihika and Maya sitting behind.

Mihika signs something to Maya and she continues.

Maya "Sir, mainey kabhee naheen socha kee main aapsey directly milpaongee.But its great that main aapkey saath kaam karoongi."

Raman gives a brief smile over the compliment and Ishita was silent and listening carefully.

Raman "Mujhey naheen patha kee tumhaarey bhaai tumhey bhejneey waley hain yaha.Mujhey laga Raghu aayega.Waha tumhaara junior hain naa.Tumhey experience bhee jyaada hain .Tumhaari jaroorath waha jyaada hain."

Maya "Kuch naheen sir.Yaha kaam bhee jyaada hoga tho yeha better hoga naa."

Raman "May be."

Maya "Sir madam bhee office mey kaam karthee hain kyaa."

Ishita "Mihika ney bathaya naheen kyaa.Main dentist hun."

Maya "What?aap dentist hain?"

Ishita "Aapko koi problem?"

Maya "Mujhey lagaa kee aap bhee sir key saath kaam karthey hon?I am sorry."

Mihika "Tum itnaa excited kyoo ho rahee hon?"

Maya "Mujhey lagaa Raman sir apney field mey hee kissey sey shaadi karengey .Now I am shocked that he married a dentist.Jaroor love marriage hogee."

Mihika "Naheen arranged hain"

Maya "Arranged.That is great."

Mihika "Tum iss baath sey excited hon kee tum jeeju sey office mey kaam karogee.Tum jaanthee hon jeeju hummarey saamney waley ghar mey hee rehtey hain."

Maya with a shocked expression.

They reach home and Mihika takes Maya to her room and Ishita was silent and not as happy as she was when she left house.

Ishita "Raman aap jaldhee ready ho jayiye humey hospital jaana hain.Fir aap mujhey clinic mey drop keejiyen gaa."

Raman agrees as Ishita don't have her car in working mode.

When theyr were leaving Maya pops out .

Maya "Sir aap office jaa raen hain tho aap mujhey lift de saktey hain."

Raman "Naheen thoda kaam hain beech mey."

Ishita "Humey hospital jaana hain."

Maya "I forgot .Who ghaav key wajaha sey hooga?"

Ishita "Good.You remember it."

Maya "Can I join I don't mind waiting ."

Raman "Of course."

They sit in car.

Raman "Tho thum aaj hee report kar rahen hon?"

Maya "Yes Sir.I am here on work so why should I make delay on it."

Raman "Good."

Ishita was pissed with Maya and the way she is talking as completely professional way and trying to show business attitude as Raman.

In hospital.Raman was about to take an injection and again Maya interrupts.

Maya "Sir aapko injection sey darr hain naa?Fir?"

Ishita "Yeh baath tumhey kaisey pathaa?"

Maya "Jab sir ko hospital ley gaye they tho main waheen thee.Mainey hee sir ka haath pakdaa thaa injection key samay."

Ishita "Tumney madad kee Raman kee.Main wahee soch raheen thee ke Raman ney itney saarey injection kaisey karwaaya."

Ishita holds Raman's hand while injection and Maya looks at them.

Then Raman drops Ishita in clinic and then Maya and Raman go to office.

Ishita "Iss ladkee Raman ka naam ka jap rakha hain kyaa.Kuch bhee bolo Raman ka naam .Fir I am your fan."

Ishita was pissed with Maya.

yaar my name is not sakiv first.

then if you want to call me by my display name atleast use it correctly.SAKIV,

if you want my name it is VIKAS

Then about proposal scene.

I planned it already it would be in chennai.

Scene is Ishita gives a tight slap to Raman and then scold him and then tell him that she loves him.

It would be right before Subbu's eyes.Subbu will think that Raman is torturing Ishita and she is not happy in marriage and give her speech over old independent Ishita and then ask her to break the marriage and he will support her before Raman.Raman will stand silent as spectator thinking Ishita is not happy.

But then Ishita will come and give a tight slap to Raman and scolds him for standing silent.

Then she will say to subbu "I dont care about you.I dint even got angry on you because .You are nothing to me and I dont care what you think about my life.I slapped Raman because he is mine and only mine."

bit more dialogues are there.

I hope you like it.

Scene starts in Ishita's clinic she was thinking about Maya.

Ishita "Raman koi filmstar hain kyaa yaa koi sports man kee ussey fans hon.Uss ladkee Raman par maskaa maar rahen hain aur Raman unchey uth rahen haain hawan mey ."

Ishita "Maanth hun handsome hain,acche hain fir bhee shaadi shudha hain.Ussko apnee hadh mey rehnaa hain naa."

Ishita "Ussko kyaa .Mera shaadi love yaa arrange ho tho.Ussey yeh bhee problem hain kee main dentist hun."

Ishita then gets a call from reception about a patient and she attends it.She gets busy with her work.

Then she suddenly gets call from Raman when she was about to have lunch.

Raman "Ishita tumney lunch kiyaa?"

Ishita "Naheen. aap?"

Raman "Main soch rahan hun kee hum donon bahaar jayen lunch key liyen yaha koi kaam nahen hain."

Ishita was shocked because it isRaman who is offering her invitation for lunch.

Raman "Kuch bolo tho sahee?"

Ishita "Theek hain aap aakar mujhey pickup keejiyen."

Ishita gets very happy over the idea of lunch with Raman .She is waiting outside and Raman comes there to pickup her.

Ishita has a slight doubt that Maya may stick to Raman but it din't happen.

Both are going in car.

Ishita "Aaapko aaj kya ho gaya.Mujhey lunch pey lekey jaa rahen hain?"

Raman "Maya ney mujhey poocha thaa lunch key liyen?Mainey tumhaara naam bolkar avoid kiyaa.Fir socha ussey sach hee kardethaa hun.Fir jhoot ka risk nahen ley saktha naa."

Ishita "Ussey jho jhoot bola ussey sach karney key liyen aap mujhey lunch ley jaa rahen hain."

Raman "Completely nahen.Tumhey koi problem hain merey saath lunch karney mey?"

Ishita "Aisaa naheen?"

They go for a restaurant to lunch and Raman gives complete choice for Ishita .Ishita orders in favour to Raman's health.She eats the same as Raman to company him.

Raman "Tum normal khaon naa.Merey liyen apnaa diet kyon change kar rahen hon.?"

Ishita "Raman main aapkey liyen naheen kar rahen hun.Yeh health key liyen accha hain tho khaa rahen hun,Aaapkey liyen nahee..."

Then she was interrupted by her own voice coming from Raman's mobile which he recorded previous night.

Ishita instantly gets annoyed at this as her own words are making her mockery.

Then Raman calms her making a joke .Then Raman conferms that there is no important work in office.

Ishita main tumhey clinic mey chod detha hun.

Ishita "Apa kahan jaa rahen hain?"

Raman "Khaale hun tho movie jaaney key plan mey hun."

Ishita "Akeley?"

Raman "Yeh koi pub nahen hain kee koi partner kee hjaroori hon.Main Akeley relax hojaonga."

Ishita "Main bhee saath choloo."

Raman "Tumhey clinic mey kaaam hoga.Tum apnaa kaam rokhkar kyon aa rahen hon?"

Ishita "Kyaa naa main aapko itnaa asaan sey relax kaisey honey doo.Tho socha kee aapko waha aakar bhee tang karoo."

They reach the mall .

Raman "Theek hain.Main koi tamil movie naheen dekhney wala hun."

Ishita "Ussmey kya huan.Main koi aapkeyenglish action movies nahen dekhney waaley hun.Aap yeh yaad rakhey."

They quarrel for few minutes over which movie to go and they finally go to hindi movie assume (E Villan)(can get funny conversation from it."

Scene starts in theatre while both Raman and Ishita are watching movie.Ishita is enjoying the movie along with Raman.But after few minutes she noyices that Raman is sleeping with his head on Ishita's shoulder.Ishita let it that way and wont disturb him.

Ishita "Movie mey aakar soogaya.Khud hee jaaney fir kyon aaya yahan."

After movie they are goind out then.

Ishita "Raman kitna emotional tha naa.Accha thaa naa?"

Raman "Han yaar."

Ishita "Raman aapney movie kab dekha .Aap tho so rahey they."

Raman "Mujhey uss bichaarey kee haalath dekh hee naheen jaa rahan thaa.Biwi kitnaa tang karthee hain ussey?"

Ishita was shocked hearing what Raman told.

Raman "Dekho movie mey bhee saheen dikhaaya biwi apney pati ka band bajaa rahen hain.Tho bichaara kyaa kartha doosro ka madad kar rahan hoga?"

Ishita "Raman ."touching his head as if checking fever . "Aap theek tho hain."

Ishita "Raman movie ka naam ek villan hain isska mathlab yeh naheen kee hero villan hain."

Raman "Tum bhee biwi hee ho naa.Pathio ko chain deena tumhey kabh pasand hoga?"

Ishita "Bahuth hogaya .Main ney kyaa kiya .Har waqt mujhpey kuch naa kuch burayiyan kehtey rahatey hain."

Raman "Main kyon bolu.Tum ney kyaa kiyaa tum jaanthee nahen hon."

Ishita "Acchee taraha jaantha hun.Meri sabsey bade galthi tho aapkey saath movie dekney ka plan thaa."

Raman "Sach mey.Tum naheen hothe tho main koi interesting action movie dekhtha .Abh mujhey iss boring movie deknaa pada.Jissmey ek sathaya huan pathee ko usska madad karney ke liyen maar rahen hain naa?"

Ishita "Aap mujhsey pooch rahen hain?I am fed up of it?"

Raman "Tho ghar jaaon naa.Yaha rehkar mujhsey kyaa behas kar rahen hon?"

Ishita "I am going."

She leaves then again comes back as she don't have a drive home.

They leave in car.Ishita laughs at Raman for sleeping in theatre.

They reach home.Then Mihika was waiting for Ishita out side the house.

Raman goes inside and Ishita was stopped by Mihika.

Mihika "Aap merey saath chaliyen."

Ishita follows he as she was serious.

She leads her to Maya's room.Then she shows him a album filled with Raman's photos,articles related to him in paper cuttings,his interviews and much more.

Ishita was shocked seeing this.

Mihika "Akka Maya sach mey jeeju kee bade fan hain.Mujhey abh darr lag rahan hain kee who jeeju ko kissey taraha influence naa karey?"

Ishita "Kuch naheen hain.Raman key saath do din rahegee tho darrkar bhag jaayegi.Main tho Ruhi key liyen aisey hee rehraheen hun ulta jawaab deekar."

Mihika "Akka wahen tho darr hain.Aaap jaanthee hain kee admeon kaa bada kamjoori kyan hothee hain aurath .Aaap jeeju key saath nahen hain tho who doosron ka sahaara lena suru kiyan tho."

Ishita ges angry and was about to slap Mihika for speaking ill against Raman.

Ishita "Kuch bheee boolthey jaa rahen hon.Raman aisaa kabhee nahe kar saktha.Raman know how to value a relation."

Mihika "Akka main aisey hee bol rahen thee.Main bhee Mihir ko acchey taraha jaanthee hun fir bhee mujhey apney insecurities hain koi ladkee ayegi thoo.Main bass apko warn kar rahen hon."

Mihika "Main jaanthee hun kee aapko jyaada farak nahen padney wala hain kyon kee apkee shaadi sirf Ruhi key liyen hain."

Mihika "But Maya jeeju koo uss belief dilaayen kee who sirf usskey liyen hain tho baath bigad sakthee hain naa."

Mihika "Maya doosth bhee hain tho main ussey jaaney key liyen bhee nahe keh saktee naa."

Ishita s all words a re not from heart sa she is showing fake belief and emotions there.

In heart she is scared to hell as what ever Mihika told was right.

Ishita leaves from there.All the day out with Raman went in vain with just a small meeting with Mihika .

Mihika was watching all this secretly and enjoying it.

I room Raman noticing Ishita not there .Sits in couch and wonders about next step to make Ishita close to him so that he can make her confess first.

Then he notices one leg of couch is weak and then a plan strikes in his mind.He breaks one leg of the couch and places it back as it look intact.

Then he leaves room and goes out to attend phone call.

Ishita comes then and thinks about Mihika's words.Then about Raman's words he was never involved with any other woman except Shagun.

Then she does the same what Raman did but for other leg.Then she smiles.

Read all recent parts in one go... very well written Vikas. Am enjoying Ishra's competetion...the pace and creativeness of the story is simply beautiful. What happens next...each have broken a leg of the couch... ??(poor couch...😭)