A new start FF (IshRa) Prologue

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow beautiful! Perfect start! Loved it so much! Keep continuing. Eager to read more! Plsss pm me.. thnkuuu

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

I loved it!

It seems interesting and quite different.

That lift scene was very good. 👍🏼

I'm guessing Raman has a bit of different approach towards Ruhi in this one, or at least i'm hoping.

That was first time he saw her smile satisfactorily. But it did irked him, no actually it had broken his heart into million pieces when he had seen her in the arms of his ideal, his boss, Ashok.

This line pained a lot. 💔😭

I'm a bit confused. He said to Mihir that it's a short trip, but then he's joining the next day. Does he want to stay or not?

And his AIM is Ruhi?! Sounded more like work. 😕😆

Ishita could hear the happy screams of Ruhi, her eyes filled hearing her happy voices after such a long time.

And this was the happiest line for me. 😃

Update soon.

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Dhwaniiam

@Dhwaniiam

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Loved it ... Please do continue ...
PM me please

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Ash

@-RisingAsh-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Ahh !! Tht was lovely..! I just loved the way u wrote.. Awesome!

Loved the beginning.. I m already eager to read wht'll follow.. Thtz toh sachi mein a compliment na?!! :D toh don't w8 more n continue SOON..:)
( PM if itz possible..:) )

Edited by RisingAsh - 11 years ago