A new start FF (IshRa) Prologue

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Hey guys, This is an IshRa FF. Its from start of the serial but little different would be the events. Please tell me hows it... Because only on your reviews would I continue it.



A New start


(Prologue)


Its were now 6 years in whole that he had detached himself from a family life, for him family means Ruhi and that was what others in his family believed and never interfered in his life. More over they found themselves guilty for ruining his life, however He never blamed them but his fate for what happened.




After all he had given half of his life just to make one woman happy, his wife, who never seemed to be satisfied, it were like whatever he did never was compatible to what she wanted. He would go beyond his position to satisfy her, but always failed. And finally he succeeded when he signed the divorced papers. That was first time he saw her smile satisfactorily. But it did irked him, no actually it had broken his heart into million pieces when he had seen her in the arms of his ideal, his boss, Ashok.




He loved her, only woman in his life ever been her. It was like his life stopped and then next thing that happened changed his all demeanor towards life and people and world, he lost his Adi to his now ex-wife. Adi who was like oxygen to him, he had claimed that he was but an abusive father. It left him shattered, with several scars for a life time.




For him life had ended on that day when Adi to left him, but he kept going, he wanted to out mark his territory and show the woman who betrayed him just because he was not as rich as Ashok that he can be ten times richer. Well and he succeeded too, it did little better when he became one of the celebs due to his success. And he had seen irritation and anger on her beautiful face which had bewitched him from the first day, to his satisfaction. He just wanted her to regret, to have left him for twice her in age, Ashok, whose name was now many layers below his own. He felt that he had finally conquered. But one thing he didn't really think about was Ruhi till then.




Ruhi his daughter, the only one whom he had as his own. He forgot about her in all his pursuit of success. She was left alone in care of her grand-parents and other family members but craved for her papa, he some where knew and felt guilty, and it was when he thought to return Delhi for sometime to be with her.




When he came to his parents house in Delhi, initially he thought that it would be a pain, as always his mother would suggest him girls for second marriage, and it would literally piss him off. Didn't she understand that first marriage was enough for him to experience whatever there is to experience, he often thought but he knew that it was no point thinking that his mother would ever think like that and leave him to his state.





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As he entered Delhi he felt his wounds to go fresh again, and the sole reason for it was none but his own love. He was broken, he felt hollow inside. He never wanted to return here, it felt that all of the eight years spent here with her seem to roll infront of his eyes like a film. His eyes filled with the tears of loss and betrayal. He knew no one would understand nor was any point in explaining, what he was going through. He felt that it would make everyone see how weak and broken he actually was from within. And it was one thing that Her betrayal taught him, and that was to be rock solid and never show vulnerability side of him.





It was when his car stopped and his driver informed him that they had reached his home he came out. He was wearing Grey suit piece looking absolutely ravishing and his tough looks made every one gap at him, specially the women of the society.





He walked with an arrogant pace into the building and entered the lift, and it was when he pressed his floor and the door was about to close a woman of about twenty six entered the elevator and repressed the same floor no. as he hurriedly. She didn't once looked at the other occupant as was busy on call.





"Main aapse Shaam ko milti hoon, But Its my duty now and I can't skip. I am already late, why don't you understand, I have some responsibilities too and I can't leave them on a pretext of meeting you over a coffee, and well coffee can wait." she said, she looked quite annoyed with the person of the other side of the line. And then hung up the call, muttering in unrecognizable language.





Raman was unconsciously looking at her, she seemed to amuse him. It was when his own fone rang which brought him to present, he picked up hurriedly as she felt her turning towards him with a surprised expression stating clearly that she didn't noticed him till then.





"Haan Mihir?"

"Nahi, I'll join from tomorrow, aaj hi toh aaya hoon, infact its a small visit, Ruhi was my main aim." as he said he felt her gasp and he looked at her with a confused expression. And she was actually looking at him, but was used to women looking at him but the way she was looking didn't seemed she was admiring him, but it seemed that she was shocked.

"Nahi Mihir, aisa karo tum ghar hi aa jao... ghar par hi baat karenge." and with that he hangup the call and kept his Apple Ifone in his pant pocket.


And quirked his eye brow towards her as if asking, 'What?'

"Aap Ruhi ke...?" she asked in a soft tone.

"Father... I am her father. Aap janti hain usse?" he answered.

"Usse kaun nahi janta, kitni pyaari bachhi hai. Aapko bohot miss karti hai... Aapki bohot baatein karti hai." she said as if in thought.

"Haan isiliye mai yahan aaya hoon, kafi don ho gaye." he said.

And it was then the lift opened and both exited and Ishita said, "this is my floor too just acrossyour flat is mine."

"Good Day." he said and walked into his flat.

Ishita could hear the happy screams of Ruhi, her eyes filled hearing her happy voices after such a long time.






Okay that's it. Please tell me hows it, if its worth I'll continue it.

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A very good start!
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continue soon. its really nice...😊
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Nice start
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A very good start!

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