Longing to Belong - IshRa Two-Shot | Part 2 - Page 14 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Elita

Awesome...just read both parts and brilliantly written.👍🏼

Loved Raman-Ishita conversation...could easily visualize them exchanging these dialogues.

And Raman surely knows how to provoke and handle Ishita...great going.

Originally posted by: -Garima-

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Originally posted by: rutu83

i get such a huge grin when i see a pm from you😃
aww shy ishita 🤗
loved bala-raman talk it was so cute the way raman complained to bala about ishu avoiding him- 'others are teasing her na toh why is she avoiding me' 😆 aww he's missing her and then came "ab kya honeymoon pe bhi puri baarat chahiye usko?" lol toh bhaisaab.. chi chi bhaisaab nahi...raman i meant. toh raman ne maan hi liya ke yeh honeymoon trip hai 😉
i have a soft spot for bala-raman interactions. in many ways, raman doesn't have to be that responsible eldest son/brother. he can't really go to the parents pair for something like this so good to have bala there for him. the part where he sees his grandpapa in bala was hilarious.

loved it!
and now that i've seen you've posted the second part, i'll be back after reading that! though it'll be a while 😕

Originally posted by: lailapnj

Lovely. too gud. enjoyed reading it. thanks for posting

Originally posted by: ThruMyEyez-Nita

That was brilliant especially the way Raman maneuvered Ishita into agreeing to go on the trip. 😆

Originally posted by: Dr.Tinni

Lvly updt
thnks fr pm

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

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very nice concept 👏
in a way i liked raman's manipulating style that was switched on by bala 😆

thanks Zene 😊

Aadmi umeed kar sakta hai, chalo theek hai... mat badalna, waise bhi... wahaan ki ladkiyan tumse toh jyada hee patli aur lambi hoti hai... tumhe unke wahaan ke kapde fit bhi nahi aanewale thhe

Mihir Mihika bachhe... toh bina shaadi kay... mujhe problem nahi lekin

omggg aani, you rock. i can easily imagine kp speaking all one liners 👏😆
finally he made speak from horse's mouth and making her accepting challenge😆 by making all arguments nullified 👏
LOL Raman is my muse for a reason we kinda share a sarcastic vein 😆 writing these lines came to me since once I am in his shoes the places my head goes is unbelievable 😆 and isnt that his MO get the other person feel cornered 😉


gosh he was openly grilling her , i can feel how much she was feeling embarrassed☺️
may be ishu is feeling that it is challenge for her to control and still stay with him despite of being head over heels for him and she thinks he does not want to go with her but actually it s challenge for raman to show her place in his heart and life as well in just 20 days. raman understands it very well.

LOL the challenge is for her to let it be known he doesnt affect her anyways and for him it is to show - she does in everyway 😉

how much I am wishing now for HM track in your TS keep your thoughts coming up babes👍🏼

The HM may not happen from my end I havent had the experience myself after all 😆

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

Nice