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nivib09

@nivib09

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

brilliantly written..the dialogues are perfectly written..just as Raman and Ishita would say in the serial...i didn't feel that i was just reading a fan side of story..it's brilliant ..would love to see this on screen...waiting eagerly for PART 3...cheers...👏

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Beautiful. You had both of them thinking the other would not be happy about the trip written so well. You brought their communcation gap issue up front. Loved it.

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Aani- I've gone and forgotten where I reserved😳😆 old age I tell you

This was so beautiful I loved it, which goes without saying as always. The banter that you create between them on paper is truly wonderful, it has me laughing out loud and grinning like a school girl at times too.

I also wanted to say, there was as you had said a lot more dialogue here. Your words are so enchanting, that even though it meant more concentration on my part to read it in hinglish i was mesmerised by it all.

Eagerly Looking forward to the next one hun 🤗

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Simply brilliant!! Looks like it will be Simi drama next week however you can definately take us to Europe with Ishra. Please update soon!

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likitha

@Arakshi_Lover

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Can we please have a part 3?

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Colt.Pixy

@Colt.Pixy

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

unres on pg1 and 15:)

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Loved both the parts Aani.

Ishita's concerns are real ... its time Raman paid attention to her insecurities and concerns.

Raman- Ishita's conversation was so realistic and it was amusing to see how he got her to agree using their usual tactics ... challenge the other person & he/she would agree to anything 😆

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Isma

@Isma_A

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Another great piece of work, Aani. Loved how this was light but still in ways heavy, with Raman's determination coming from a place deep within which of course was presented intypical RKB style. You do a brilliant job in preserving the overall essence of the characters. I can totally imagine such a scene playing out, such emotions and feelings coming to the foreground from both sides, especially Raman's, which is why I'm glad his point of view had the greater focus.

Any chance of you bringing to life the events and happenings of those 20 days?😉

Great work, Aani!!

Edited by Isma_A - 11 years ago

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

loved the second part as well
raman's trepidation in the beginning was 👍🏼
when ishita asked what would we do there, i almost expected raman to start singing ghoomenge phirenge nachenge gayenge aish karenge aur kya 😆 i knew which route he was going to take to get to his manzil but when he said hawww and closed his shirt buttons i actually laughed out loud 😆🤗 the dialogue bazi and the way raman turned the whole thing around was so well written and can definitely see divan doing this scene with aplomb 👏
but this raavan kumar bhi na- ab challenge aisa kiya hai to she definitely will not respond to him on the trip. aur aise hi ghoomne ke liye jana thodi na hai- love story thodi na aise hi aage badhegi?
loved the two shot- but any possibility of an os/ts/ss on the trip itself?😃