After The Storm - IshRa SS | Chp 5 - Page 39 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aahh Aani! You just made my Sunday! 🤗
Another beautiful piece of writing as always! Quoting RKB here "You amaze me"! with your writing! 😊

Reading your writing be it OS/SS, its like actually imagining a scene unfold in front of you and getting into the characters mind and feeling their emotions. and trust me thats happening to me after a long long time.

I love the way you write about the emotions the characters go through and especially that of Raman. I love the monologue that Raman is having and his realization about Ishita and how different she is from others. If one of the reasons I love Raman as a character is due to KP's acting, then the other reason is your description of his character and his emotions/feelings. I can't help but fall for him inspite of his flawed personality.

" Something about her makes him want to be a better man he realizes" ---Loved this line!

After Shagun's fiasco and how it ruined his life, he literally stopped living his life and had just become a money making machine. But with Ishita now in his life, he has once started his life again and in a better way...he has become a better son, father, brother etc...now only thing remaining to see is he falling in love again and trusting this woman Ishita with his heart and love..

Waiting for the Surprise! Please update soon.

Your fan😊
Edited by Jyoe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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God I really really love your writing style. So unique and beautiful. Can't wait to see what Raman's planned.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this is so good Aani. You know Aani one who has following your writings will recognize that its you by the title itself. They are always so unique and the story goes according to that. Interested to see how you are going to take this forward. Please do PM me when you update next part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic writing...loved Oscar Wilde's quote...it was bang on for the story. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like how you wrote about Raman still not knowing his true feelings for Ishita. It's nice to read about that first phase of falling in love, when you yourself aren't sure and even if you are, you brush it off as a foolish thought. Looking forward to the second part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Fabulous
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What else can I say that hasn't already been said. You are an amazing writer and I am glad that this track has inspired you to write many times. Will eagerly be awaiting the next part.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Aani, I think I'm running out of words to say when it comes to your work!😆 😛 Beautifully written start, and I look forward to reading what Raman's big surprise is! I love how you write emotions and thoughts! Beautiful!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Alu-

Great piece of fiction again. I just love your writing style, one can see the hard work that goes into this. Really enjoyed it, continue soon.

Thanks Alu 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mnr123

Nice... plz update next part soon 😊


thanks dear 😊

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