After The Storm - IshRa SS | Chp 5 - Page 39 - Page 32

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

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aani,
I loved tear wiping of each other. in fact before few days i was so wishing tear wiping scene for ishra when raman confessed to her. i wish we get something like it.
glad he could realize his discrimination towards ruhi and adi

thanks Zene and well maybe one day both the things would happen - the tears being wiped away and Raman realizing just how much he was wrong to discriminate between his kids

Ishita trying to help him to come out from guilt and becoming his strength. both characters are accepting own mistakes and pointing towards making correction to them. such a meaningful conversation where both shows their strengths too. not just weakness.raman realizing her as best mother and ishu realizing he is not uncaring parent.

when we talk, its the only way we make progress... so many issues can be solved if we just get a glimpse into someone' thoughts and likewise let them see whats on our mind as per me, it may be ugly sometimes but in the end its what is for the best and counts 😳

It is not making a mistake that defines us Raman; but what we do once we realize we have made one that does.
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i most loved in this update is how Raman felt when Ishita accused him of still being in love with Shagun, this makes this character soo real and transparent to people closest to his heart.

thats what I think Zene, Raman is prone to making mistakes he isnt this ideal, larger-than-life guy he is a normal man and he would screw up from time to time, but in the end he isnt a bad person, he rectifies and tries to make things right when he sees he made a mistake - which we always have seen like his speech, after insulting Ishita so many times in public and her family, he chose a public platform to thank her, so that the world would know he was wrong earlier and in that one gesture he made an apology to her and in extension showed what a fine upbringing she has received from her family. 😳

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

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again beautiful write up 👏

thanks Zene 😊
Loved her inner thoughts about his mistrusting her after his support to her in shagun and param drama and he is too expecting her to get enough back treatment.

thats what a marriage is all about isnt it? Shouldering each other' burdens being there for one another


she could realize his condition as father post realization his own kid was on the way of becoming criminal having no guilt of killing someone, his kid he was still assuming as innocent now has lost his innocence, he has lost his kid now wants him back

Raman was in denial until he heard Adi boost in school and that was his wake-up call which I am glad was the way it happened, anyone else making Raman do that would not have been as impactful and as strong a blow to Raman as it did when Adi himself made him realize his grave error

he prefers to be hated by his child rather than letting him become monster. how much it s pain as a father to see kid transforming to devil. but before time goes, he realizes his mistake. he is the way real very much. people do mistakes but it become realistic when you correct those mistakes.

for the good of your child a parent, a real, loving, caring parent will even be hated by that very child, cos if you wish to be worshiped blindly by your child and the price of it is turning blind to his/her deeds you are an awful parent, which is what we saw on the show too, Raman realized it when Adi himself made him think what had he done


"And I have you now... to hold my hand so that I don't fall and even if I do...to help me get back on my feet once again." He says holding her hand.

loved his lines for final surrender to her ^^ what makes your title perfect
thank you 😳 its surrender and acceptance, plus faith, complete faith


fabulous job aani. 👏
I just want now raman s REAL efforts to woo her heart, she is head over heals for him but I feel she deserves some serious efforts to show his attention as lover

Oh there I beg to differ, she isnt head over heels in love with him - yes she likes him, adores him and does feel he is special to her... but its still miles to go for that to happen for her.. him on the other hand, he is smitten, he adores her and is actually falling hard and fast - and he would have to woo her, and woo her hard after his stupidity of saying I love you for a second time and then saying he meant it as a distraction... as if he couldnt talk of anything else - like Ruhi' birth or firsts you know... oh he would have to slog to make her believe the third time is for real to make it a charm 😉

Originally posted by: happenstance

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I had initially planned to comment on each part, but instead I'm just going to do it all in one Aani.

This was just incredibly moving and the way you conveyed the abundance of different emotions felt by both of them in your SS was just fantastic. It was such a joy to read, and I really missed your SS's😳😳 what can I say, I'm greedy😆😆😳

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Aani,

Apologies for this very late comment.

You give a whole new life to IshRa you know. They are the same individuals but you paint them with far better colors.

Hence making me fall for them harder.

Hats off dear

Love

Nidha

Originally posted by: 143rhb

Brilliantly written.

I read it all at once.

Just felt like why did it end.

Pls pm me if u write ur next one

Originally posted by: jiyaa02

Omg! brilliant work dear 👏👏

Loved it 😃