Originally posted by: shalu79
Reserved :)
Hey Anni,
Firstly, Sorry I could not unreserve for first part before ur updation.
So, I am commenting here for both the parts.😳
Both parts r beautifully written as always, loved it.
No probs Shalu and thanks for the comment 😊
Regarding first part:
Like Lucky I too find 1st part short kya kare when its abt ur post yeh dil hamesha mange more 😉😆
😆 Well I hope with the second one the complaint is gone 😳
The things he says to her at times... a lesser woman would have started crying like a watering pot and went running for the hills, he knows his ex would have sulked and pouted and made him beg for forgiveness and promise to never speak such things to her... but she, she never does that and that is so refreshing.
@bold : loved it very much. This reminded me incident after Adi's apology where RKB says to Ruhi "Ishima tumse itna pyaar karti hai, ke tumhare liye mere ghussa bhi bardhas karti hai"
As always u perfectly described Raman's inner thoughts n how he knows importance of Ishu in his life😊
He certainly sees her as a force to reckon and that makes him actually respect her, but what makes him enjoy it is when they banter - she doesnt flee or cower or cry hence the lines 😳
Second part:
This part was so lively n refreshing truly Ishra style.😆
RKB was really back with a bang in this part😎
glad you enjoyed his return 😊
first that Ashok-Shagun n their offspring part🤣
cant help but feel that to be the most apt way to surmise 😆
n then that conv between IshRa👏👏👏
But Anni this is not fair at the end of this part too u ve not revealed RKB's planned gift for Ishu.😆
Thank u for this wonderful OS🤗
Will be waiting for next update😳
thanks Shalu and patience the next part has the gift I promise hope you think its apt 😳
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